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Should I write more?

Here's the beginning of my new story: Left 4 TDI. Starring: All the Left 4 Dead characters(1 and 2), Duncan, and me.

Chapter 1
    
    I sat on the park bench as my daughter, Mia, was playing in the pile of leaves. I smiled as she fell in jokingly. Suddenly, I heard my cellphone. I pick it up quickly and answer,” Hello?” It was a call from my boss. “We need tu down here this instant!” There was worry in his voice. “Yes sir.” I hang up and call Mia over. “What is it mommy?” she asks. “I’m going to drop tu off at Lila’s house.” When we get to Lila’s I say goodbye and go to my work.
    “We need to send tu along with nine co-workers to the US.”Says my boss, Mr. Mason. I’m shocked. “Why are we going there?”I ask. “People all over the US, are turning into zombies. The zombie apocalypse is rising. Soon, it’ll be the whole country, then the continent, then the world.” I nod. “Who’s coming with me?” Mr. Mason answers,” These people don’t work with you. They live on the other side of Canada. Here’s your plane ticket, your plane leaves at 8:00 sharp. Be careful. You’re the only survivors left. If tu die, then it’s over.” I leave the office and get a good night’s sleep.
    I look at my alarm clock. 6:00. I have two hours to pack up and get my guns. I pack up only two suitcases. One has my clothes and a sleeping bag. The other one is empty because on my way, I’m grabbing some guns. I step into my car and drive to the gun shop. I look to see no one on the road. I push my button and call Mr. Mason. “Is it okay to talk?” he asks. I nod. “Well, when tu go into the gun shop, tell the cashier this.” He stops and a piece of paper prints. I pull it out. “I reserved some pistolas for all of you. This is your code number.” I pull into the parking lot of the gun shop. “Talk to tu later.” I walk into the gun comprar and read the code,” 6141999.” He nods and takes me into the back room. He reads the code and pun
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Yes, tu should write more! So far so good!
Duncan-superfan posted hace más de un año
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thanks
potterandtdi posted hace más de un año
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yup
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KARIxTRENT said:
I say do what tu like hun.
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I'm going to write more. It got cut off.
potterandtdi posted hace más de un año
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