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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter 6)
Bella pov
The pain was was to much, I couldn’t understand what was happening , my neck was burning , the burning took over my body it changed minuto por minuet it grew it rose I wanted to scream this pain out but that probable isn’t a good option ppl will think I'm weak! I clenched my teeth together wishing I never existed suddenly the burning changed! it left my neck! I was relived that the pain had lessen but a new pain started in my chest my corazón was was ripping its way out of my chest the sound of my corazón filled my ears it was getting on my nerves the sound continued for hours o days ,maybe years? Then finally my corazón stopped! I felt stronger better then I heard light footsteps coming towards me
I opened my eyes every thing was bright I could hear the high way………….
-Bella?
I stood up and looked at him he was so hot! And beautiful!
-wow!
-are tu ok? Do tu need anything?
I shook my head and walked closer to him I saw every line of his face he had a scar on his neck when I saw it I gasped!
-got that when I wanted to protect Suzy
-does it hurt?
-it did! but know I I don’t even feel it
He dicho and looked at me
-do tu feel thirsty?
-no
-so why are tu actuación weird?
-it just…to much to take in…………………..you know???
-yes at first your confused. I was to
he dicho comforting patting my arm wow! now he didn’t felt cold ,he felt kind of warm
-do tu think I have a power?
I asked him wishing I had one
-I dont know I discovered my power years after I was created
-what's your power?
-um I can teleport
Wow teleport that's so cool
-like tu could teleport every where?
-yes like I teleported us here from forks
-where are we?
I asked curios
-in London
-wow I’ve never been to Londres before!
We talked for an hora about every thing! It was weird that I could think so fast!
Then he asked
-Bella tu should be thirsty tu know? Its not normal! Every new born I knew even me when they ere changed they were crazy………….thirsty …I even forgot tu are a new born!
-is that wrong?
I asked offended
-yes! its not normal! Aren’t tu thirsty?
Now that he mentioned it I could feel a burning in my thro…
-now that tu mentioned it,it does but I could ignore it
-you can ignore it!! Wow ! tu know I'm nearly 1500 years old and when I smell blood its hard to control my thirst but I could control it because I have practiced! Your just 2 hours old!
-maybe that's my power
I said
He looked at me fore 6/4 segundos and said
-may be it is if tu put it that way but tu should hunt its important it gives tu strength to live
-ok what are we hunting?
-humans
-humans!!!! Why?
-because there yummy and mouth watering and don’t worry these humans are kind of dead…
-you drink dead humans blood! ugh!
-no! no! they are not dead I just dicho that to comfort you
-so tu lied to me!
Oooh I hate liars so much how can he do………………….
-I didn’t lie look I hunt old people and the ones that are going to die o some hikers…..
-well that's better! so tu don’t hunt animals?
-no! they taste awful!
-really they are that bad?
-you could taste it fore your self!
-ooookay
-so lets go and hunt!
-kay! but were are we going?
-To the forest there should be some hikers there and animales if tu like!
-lets go
I could run so fast we raced when we got to the jungle there was no sent of humans so I wanted to taste animal blood I followed a dears sent and caught it poor thing couldn’t run faster then I sank my teeth in its neck it was warm and good but it stinked! I just liked the warmth but it wasn’t pleasant matt was right!
-how was your dear?
-ugh!you were right it tasted awful I just liked the warmth.
-Told you!
Then he paused
-what do tu smell?
I took in the air around Mmmmmmmmmm
-hikers
I liked my lips suddenly I was so thirsty when he saw me like and that he said
-so go for it!
I followed my instincts and saw two hikers one of them looked 60 and the other looked younger maybe45 o 50 I lunched for the older one and saw matt lunching for the younger one
When I sank my teeth in neck a frenzy beginned the blood was warm and DELICIOS! It just suited me well! When I was done I let go of him and faced matt he was already done and starring at me
-what?
-you were so fascinating!

-glad that I amused you
I hissed
-so do tu want más o your done?
-I'm perched!
-so lets go!
-could tu teleport us there?
I wanted to know how it was
-sure take my hand and close your eyes
I took he's hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the cottage!
-WOW!
-yeah its pretty good!
-yeah its pretty cool not good!
(chapter 7)
2 weeks later
I was sitting on the sofá thinking about Charlie and now that I could control my thirst I could go and visit him.
I was still wearing the clothes of the night that matt changed me I needed to go and comprar I was thinking of a black sleeve less dress once I saw rosalie wearing I wanted it so bad then I saw matt coming in the room
-hey!
-hey.
-when did tu go shoping?i wanted to come too!
I was cunfused I didn’t go shopping
-I didn’t go shoping
-really!? So how did tu get that dress?
-wich dress?
I asked confused again
-the black dress its behind you!
I turned around and saw the black dress I was thinking about how it got here?!
-that's funny I was just thinking about this dress I wanted to to go and get it!
-really?
-yeah
-you were thinking about it and it just apeared?
-yeah I think so
-that's cool tu have 3 gifts!!! Wow!
-3 gifts?
-yeah tu could control your self ,um, no one can harm you,do tu remmember the girl we saw in the jungel? She could taiser everyone! But somw how she couldn’t taiser you! That's your segundo gift and your third gift when tu want something it apears out of no where!
-well if tu put it that way,I have 3 gifts! Yay! But is that normal?
-none of this is normal Bella!
-I know! tu know what I mean!
-yes I know, I have a friend he has 2 gifts he can shift into difrent animales and mover objects with his mind
-cool!
-yeah I know but I havent seen him in 98 years after he found his mate they both disapeard! And I was alone again
He sighed and I hugged him
-you have me!
I dicho trying to cheer him up
-yes I have you
He dicho my cheering worked and he smiled at me then I remmemberd something
-I was woundering I want to visit my father do tu want to come with me?
I asked pleading
-sure I will, but are tu sure? I mean…………..
I cut him of
-I'm posetive I want to see him and say good bye
-why good bye?
-we don’t age my eyes are red my skin is white and cold, isnt that enough?
-your right, sorry
-its OK!
I dicho I loved his face when he dicho sorry he looked like an ángel and his eyes glowed and he looked like one too so anyone would………………………..
-day dreaming again?
-yeah, I was thinking tu look like an ángel when your sorry!
-well isnt that sweet!
-so I'm going to dress up! And be ready to live,so get ready,k?
-oooky
I grabbed my dress and went to the room I put it on and consentrated on a black converse then I opend my eyes and it was on the bed!omfg this is so cool I can have anything I want! I was so happy I was dancing around and clapping yay this is so so cool! I put on my shoes and remmembered I needed contacts so I wount freak charlie out! I closed my eyes and it was ther on the cama I put them on and came out of the room matt was sitting on the sofá waiting for me
-wow tu look amazing! Speacialy your eyes.
-thanks
If I was human I would have blushed
I took his hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the forest I ran to my house and found Charlie's cruser parked out side he was talking on the phone with Billy I waited out side but he didn’t hang up so I got tiered and held matts hand for support and rang the campana charlie still didn’t hang up the phone and came to answer the door………………………………..
Hehehe!wait 2 see what happens nxt! :)
Max's POV
I ran into my room crying. My head and my corazón ached. I thought it was clear I loved Fang, but I guess he didn't know. I saw him besar a blonde haired tramp at school today. I fell on my cama and burried my face in a pillow. I cried.

10 minutos later

I heard my door open, but I didn't dare to look. I knew who it was and I didn't want to talk to him. Fang sat down siguiente to me and stroked my back.
"Max what's wrong?" He said, worriedly. I just shook my head.
"What's wrong?" I took my head out from under the almohada and stared daggers at him. I didn't care my mascara was running o that...
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2)If tu like us, tell us. Do not be worried about what we'll think, because we are flattered no matter if we like tu o not.

3) Most of the time girls are 99% sure when a guy likes us. The only way to be 100% sure is if tu tell us.

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posted by problematic124
Her eyes were raw
But she could not cry
It was all she saw
The pain and the lies
Her hope was broken
She felt incomplete
Freedom was wanted she wanted to be
To be able to laugh
To be able to smile
If not even once
But once in a while
She has to survive
She has to survive
It's the only thing that could keep her alive
Her eyes started to water
But she held the tears back
She never wanted
To be seen like that
Her life was of ruins
She hurt a real lot
Her family was gone
And left to rot
It was a long time
And yet it still hurt
She felt like a crime
And even worse
But she needed to survive
They would want it that way
So...
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"Nothing. I just fell," I said. He sighed and shook his head.

"Would tu please be más careful? Do tu know what it'd do to me if anything happened to you?" I frowned.

"I'm sorry," I dicho quietly. He rolled his eyes and hugged me.

"C'mon. We're late for school."

***

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Author's Note: "Look, now I am going to tell tu a story of the life of Rosemary Vega a.k.a me."

I am 11 years old.
My birthday is on March 25.
I am very talented at escritura stories, canto like famous people (example: Shakira, Selena Gomez, Demi Lovato and Lady Gaga) I amor to act!
When I grow up I want to be singer o a voice actress.
I am interested in estrella Wars, Pokemon, Everybody Hates Chris and George Lopez.
My favorito! pokemon are: Jirachi, Roserade, Mismagious and Meganium.
I was born in Wilson, North Carolina.

Thank tu for giving me your time to read this article! :D
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"Mmmmm. I missed you." I heard him whisper in my ear.
"Mmmm...No I'm pretty sure I missed you." I manged to whisper back. It felt a little weird saying that too him. I didn't want to be all rude and not say it back, but I just.. I still haven't decided whether I actually wanna go through with this o not.
Granted, I did say that I do amor him like amor him, amor him, but at the same time I amor him as my best friend and right...
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Taylor pressed his forehead against mine ans sighed,his breath warmed my face.
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It was a cold, breezy Autumn evening while Anna Brown, a reasonably fair girl, was watching EastEnders. She loved this programme and never missed it.

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Soon Anna's Mother put her to bed. Her Mother told her to go to cama early that night for her Mother had a surprise in-store for her the siguiente morning. It was for Anna's 9th birthday and she was extremely excited.
    
During...
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Serenity

Chapter 1

Once upon a time in heaven there lived an ángel who was yet a child, she was loved por all the ángeles and most importantly God who named her Serenity, and gave her power that controlled serenity, peace and all things calm and gentle, but he secretly gave her the Elixir of Life which would drip from her finger each día and each night, unknown was this to the other ángeles because God was sure that if this was known Serenity would be in grave peril because, man alone does not seek eternal life, angels, devils and all creatures whether they reside in heaven o hell seek the Elixir...
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There are things in your every día life that tu never take a segundo glance at. They're just there, noting to ponder over o to think about. Here are two short tribute poems to some overlooked objects in life.

Fountain

The ultramarino, azul de ultramar colored water
Dances down through a maze of marble obstacles
Creating clear rainbows across the sheer water's surface.

A carpet of copper and silver glints at the bottom
Coins
Lost with memory of young children
Wishing for new puppies
Ice cream cones
Hot perros for dinner
For bedtime stories to become flesh
A cat in a hat to come skipping off the pages.

Everything is in this...
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I feel him shaking me. I can't bring myself to open my eyes to see him.
"Well I guess I have to be like that prince in sleeping beauty and kiss tu awake," his voice rang out again. I feel pressure on my body
My eyes shoot open just in time before Elliot kisses me. I push him off.
"Get the hell of off me tu idiot!" I yell standing up. I brush myself. I rub the back of my head that is stinging in pain. I feel wet stuff come off my head. I look at it...
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posted by I_DONT-KNOW
well here is the siguiente part of my story, hope tu enjoy x

Run, musn't stop running. Can't look back, it's too late now, he's going to chatch up any minute. She was going to get caught, she's going to die.

3 days earlier.

Alexis sat on her bed, in the dark holding onto a scrunched up piece of paper. It was a día after it had happened, after the secret was out.Her secret. She hadn't told her mother yet, she couldnt not again. Everytime she moved school something like this would happen, someone would ruin it, every time.Another tear slid down her face, then another, soon the balled up paper became...
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Creating a world, whether for fantasía of sci-fi, is no easy task. Worlds contain wonders of all kinds, plus various cultures, climates, and creatures. From my own research, many writers use parts of this world, the "real" world, as the basis for their own worlds. I've compiled this guide from personal experience. Wherever possible, I've included examples. (Note: othe examples can be found in various places on this site. The avid user can find them with relative ease.)
LOCATION
The universe is a big place. Your world has to be somewhere. Its position in the universe could affect your characters...
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posted by Grintforever
Alone!

There once was a girl who biked and ran
with her best friend who had a bright naranja tan
But then one día she when biking alone
and thats when she fell along way from home.

She lay still on the ground
not makeing a sound,and thats when she found
that she could not talk
let alone walk

As she slowly made her way home
she wished that she had a phone
so she could call for help
insted of put up with the pain that made her yelp.

She pushed her bike down the dusty track
with a sore haed and an acking back
Then she came to the place where her and her best friend met
just as the sun was begining to set

The siguiente día at school she was no where in sight
which gave her best frined a very big fright
but she was a inicial tucked up in bed
with a sore leg and an acking head

Thats when she remebered what her best friend had dicho
about not going out bikeing alone
along way from home.

What do tu think?(I think it is very bad) and sorry of the spelling.