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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter 6)
Bella pov
The pain was was to much, I couldn’t understand what was happening , my neck was burning , the burning took over my body it changed minuto por minuet it grew it rose I wanted to scream this pain out but that probable isn’t a good option ppl will think I'm weak! I clenched my teeth together wishing I never existed suddenly the burning changed! it left my neck! I was relived that the pain had lessen but a new pain started in my chest my corazón was was ripping its way out of my chest the sound of my corazón filled my ears it was getting on my nerves the sound continued for hours o days ,maybe years? Then finally my corazón stopped! I felt stronger better then I heard light footsteps coming towards me
I opened my eyes every thing was bright I could hear the high way………….
-Bella?
I stood up and looked at him he was so hot! And beautiful!
-wow!
-are tu ok? Do tu need anything?
I shook my head and walked closer to him I saw every line of his face he had a scar on his neck when I saw it I gasped!
-got that when I wanted to protect Suzy
-does it hurt?
-it did! but know I I don’t even feel it
He dicho and looked at me
-do tu feel thirsty?
-no
-so why are tu actuación weird?
-it just…to much to take in…………………..you know???
-yes at first your confused. I was to
he dicho comforting patting my arm wow! now he didn’t felt cold ,he felt kind of warm
-do tu think I have a power?
I asked him wishing I had one
-I dont know I discovered my power years after I was created
-what's your power?
-um I can teleport
Wow teleport that's so cool
-like tu could teleport every where?
-yes like I teleported us here from forks
-where are we?
I asked curios
-in London
-wow I’ve never been to Londres before!
We talked for an hora about every thing! It was weird that I could think so fast!
Then he asked
-Bella tu should be thirsty tu know? Its not normal! Every new born I knew even me when they ere changed they were crazy………….thirsty …I even forgot tu are a new born!
-is that wrong?
I asked offended
-yes! its not normal! Aren’t tu thirsty?
Now that he mentioned it I could feel a burning in my thro…
-now that tu mentioned it,it does but I could ignore it
-you can ignore it!! Wow ! tu know I'm nearly 1500 years old and when I smell blood its hard to control my thirst but I could control it because I have practiced! Your just 2 hours old!
-maybe that's my power
I said
He looked at me fore 6/4 segundos and said
-may be it is if tu put it that way but tu should hunt its important it gives tu strength to live
-ok what are we hunting?
-humans
-humans!!!! Why?
-because there yummy and mouth watering and don’t worry these humans are kind of dead…
-you drink dead humans blood! ugh!
-no! no! they are not dead I just dicho that to comfort you
-so tu lied to me!
Oooh I hate liars so much how can he do………………….
-I didn’t lie look I hunt old people and the ones that are going to die o some hikers…..
-well that's better! so tu don’t hunt animals?
-no! they taste awful!
-really they are that bad?
-you could taste it fore your self!
-ooookay
-so lets go and hunt!
-kay! but were are we going?
-To the forest there should be some hikers there and animales if tu like!
-lets go
I could run so fast we raced when we got to the jungle there was no sent of humans so I wanted to taste animal blood I followed a dears sent and caught it poor thing couldn’t run faster then I sank my teeth in its neck it was warm and good but it stinked! I just liked the warmth but it wasn’t pleasant matt was right!
-how was your dear?
-ugh!you were right it tasted awful I just liked the warmth.
-Told you!
Then he paused
-what do tu smell?
I took in the air around Mmmmmmmmmm
-hikers
I liked my lips suddenly I was so thirsty when he saw me like and that he said
-so go for it!
I followed my instincts and saw two hikers one of them looked 60 and the other looked younger maybe45 o 50 I lunched for the older one and saw matt lunching for the younger one
When I sank my teeth in neck a frenzy beginned the blood was warm and DELICIOS! It just suited me well! When I was done I let go of him and faced matt he was already done and starring at me
-what?
-you were so fascinating!

-glad that I amused you
I hissed
-so do tu want más o your done?
-I'm perched!
-so lets go!
-could tu teleport us there?
I wanted to know how it was
-sure take my hand and close your eyes
I took he's hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the cottage!
-WOW!
-yeah its pretty good!
-yeah its pretty cool not good!
(chapter 7)
2 weeks later
I was sitting on the sofá thinking about Charlie and now that I could control my thirst I could go and visit him.
I was still wearing the clothes of the night that matt changed me I needed to go and comprar I was thinking of a black sleeve less dress once I saw rosalie wearing I wanted it so bad then I saw matt coming in the room
-hey!
-hey.
-when did tu go shoping?i wanted to come too!
I was cunfused I didn’t go shopping
-I didn’t go shoping
-really!? So how did tu get that dress?
-wich dress?
I asked confused again
-the black dress its behind you!
I turned around and saw the black dress I was thinking about how it got here?!
-that's funny I was just thinking about this dress I wanted to to go and get it!
-really?
-yeah
-you were thinking about it and it just apeared?
-yeah I think so
-that's cool tu have 3 gifts!!! Wow!
-3 gifts?
-yeah tu could control your self ,um, no one can harm you,do tu remmember the girl we saw in the jungel? She could taiser everyone! But somw how she couldn’t taiser you! That's your segundo gift and your third gift when tu want something it apears out of no where!
-well if tu put it that way,I have 3 gifts! Yay! But is that normal?
-none of this is normal Bella!
-I know! tu know what I mean!
-yes I know, I have a friend he has 2 gifts he can shift into difrent animales and mover objects with his mind
-cool!
-yeah I know but I havent seen him in 98 years after he found his mate they both disapeard! And I was alone again
He sighed and I hugged him
-you have me!
I dicho trying to cheer him up
-yes I have you
He dicho my cheering worked and he smiled at me then I remmemberd something
-I was woundering I want to visit my father do tu want to come with me?
I asked pleading
-sure I will, but are tu sure? I mean…………..
I cut him of
-I'm posetive I want to see him and say good bye
-why good bye?
-we don’t age my eyes are red my skin is white and cold, isnt that enough?
-your right, sorry
-its OK!
I dicho I loved his face when he dicho sorry he looked like an ángel and his eyes glowed and he looked like one too so anyone would………………………..
-day dreaming again?
-yeah, I was thinking tu look like an ángel when your sorry!
-well isnt that sweet!
-so I'm going to dress up! And be ready to live,so get ready,k?
-oooky
I grabbed my dress and went to the room I put it on and consentrated on a black converse then I opend my eyes and it was on the bed!omfg this is so cool I can have anything I want! I was so happy I was dancing around and clapping yay this is so so cool! I put on my shoes and remmembered I needed contacts so I wount freak charlie out! I closed my eyes and it was ther on the cama I put them on and came out of the room matt was sitting on the sofá waiting for me
-wow tu look amazing! Speacialy your eyes.
-thanks
If I was human I would have blushed
I took his hand and closed my eyes when I opened them we were at the forest I ran to my house and found Charlie's cruser parked out side he was talking on the phone with Billy I waited out side but he didn’t hang up so I got tiered and held matts hand for support and rang the campana charlie still didn’t hang up the phone and came to answer the door………………………………..
Hehehe!wait 2 see what happens nxt! :)
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posted by zutaradragon
your mistakes don't define you, now. they don't tell tu who you're not, o who tu can never be. what's it take to get tu to say you'll try? you've got to live this life like it's the only one you've got. what would tu say, what would tu do, if this was your last day? so, tu found out today that life's not the same. not quite as good as yesterday.
and, yes, i know it hurts & i know your pain, but u never gave up this easily befor. such a beautiful thing to just throw away. i think tu need to know that, of all the colores that tu shine, this is surely not your best, it's really not your style. tu should think about what tu do, befor tu do it, over and over again. i know tu feel alone, that know one can figure tu out, but tu sould know that we just amor to see tu smile.i know tu feel like you're lost, feel like you've drifted way to far away, but we can help tu come back.
posted by Buggie111
I wrote this yesterday when me and my boyfriend had a big fight and it's a fight that may go on for a long time. I know I am young to write something like this but, I guess it helps. Plus If tu don't like it just tell me, ok?

The Power of Words
tu and I had this big long fight,
It felt like the storm during the night.
It was verry sad and cold,

My friends had to like tu a lot
and tu felt like I forgot,
forgot about you.
But I had a prodject due.

tu think you're mr. I'm so cool
but tu used to act like a ghool.
Not to the people tu love,
to the sensetive people like a dove.

How we spoke with eachother,
made tu feel much better.
But the fight we had,
tu dicho was nothing but it was bad.

See ya pal we're ova,
take the cell tu gave me and do me a fava.
Just don't ever,
Never...
Talk to me again!
posted by alicia386
Shane Gildmen stared at the roaring waves. In just a couple of days his girlfriend would be back from her trip to Europe. He had no idea how he was going to deliever the tragic news. His girlfriend was so fragile. He didn't want to crush her feelings.
A week after she left, he cheated on her with Emily Tones. Emily was there for him. While his girlfriend, Trinity, went on vacation. Emily talked with him when he thought Trinity was cheating on him with some european dude. He kissed Emily. He daydreamed about Emily. He even wanted más from Emily then just a kiss. Soon he depended on Emily....
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posted by madening_mahem
 Example of the Maiden
Example of the Maiden
At night, far away, in ancient Japan...
A fair maiden slumbered, only to be awakened por blood curdling screams. She open her eyes to a frightening sight, the bodies of her most beloved servants and close relatives astray on the floor, lifeless, dead. She hastily slide open the doors to her room, and ran down the corridor, which was lit with the moonlight that seeped through the paper doors, which were now drenched in blood.
Though her limbs felt heavy, she ran as fast as her corazón beat. Running away from the cries of her family still being slaughtered por an unknown murderer, away from what...
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posted by Epismatic
The Man With No Eyes Collection (1): The Actor




Sundown, sunrise.

Big smile!

(Tired eyes.)

I vanish into thin air.

An actor never fails.

(Lies.)

To give the world a rousing show

(While begging to be recognized.)

To shine as brightly as the sun

Upon the trono that we’ve devised.

A patchwork-quilt protagonist

A villain from the shadow realm

The work of the illusionist

When I, the actor, take the helm.

“Hey, wouldn’t it be cool to see…”

The whisper marks my story’s birth.

The audience will gather ‘round.

(The jury to decide my worth.)


"The Man With No Eyes" is a series of poems, all of which are unfolding from one character's point of view. They are meant to represent an ongoing journey. So if tu liked this one, stay tuned for more. :)
posted by Dearheart
A/N: I finished escritura this about five minutos ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired por two things: 1) A few of my favorito! anime couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and dicho he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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posted by vanelandsisters
I remember your books
In the hallway
I remember tu cracking up
Microscopes in the garage
Those old parts
I amor tu más than anything

I remember your blue eyes
Looking into my emeralds
Like we lived in our own world
I remember tu chasing
Our brother
Then falling asleep in my lap
I can still feel tu curled up por my side
Little man
And even through that night I knew
You fought it hard as tu could
Remember I
Held tu and whispered

Come on, baby
With me
I'm never gonna leave
You behind
You were
My best
Thirteen years

I remember the first night
When my hope
Turned to crying and screaming your name
Flowers pile up in the...
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She was beauty woven into a living being... If only that were the case. But as I stepped towards her, opening my mouth to speak, she faced me, never moving her feet to turn. We held eachother's gaze for a few agonizing moments. It seemed as though she was just going to stare at me until I did something.
When I reached this conclusion, i decided to take a step forward. As I did so, she began to shiver. Another step, and she began to twitch anxiously. Another step, this one seemed to be all she could take. Yet, I had to know. So I took one last step, and she broke.
Her eyes flashed and her hair...
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Creating your own universe is a great way to pass time. It will also give tu a rough outline for your writings. These are the steps I follow in creating Eden.
Step 1: Establish main geographical features. This will be crucial in establishing the settings in your stories. If a certain river has magical properties, tu have to knw where the fuente of the river is to be able to pinpoint the fuente of the power.
Step 2: Establish lifeforms present on your world. tu have to know what creatures live there before tu can write their histories. If the dragones had not attempted to merge themselves with...
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posted by sasuhia4ever
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posted by uniquezandy
Sams POV
I am your normal, typical everyday teen who is 16 years old. Samatha is my real name; say it to my face and I will bite your head off. People say when there young, (girls anyway,) "Look mummy, I want to be a princess when I grow up, and I'm going to marry a handsome prince." To tell the truth, I used to be a girl like that. A girl who read every fairy tale she could get her hands on, and believe that they are real. It is a load of poison now. I had to learn that in real life, true amor is rubbish and tu won't grow up to be want tu want. And in life, change happens quite alot and...
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"Come on, Harley! Gail dicho to be inicial por three!" Aspen called. Everyone else was already at the sidewalk, starting...
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posted by Insight357
    I sat in a chair por the window. I was still in the asylum. Days had passed, and nothing changed. I hadn’t heard anyone speak of Alexander. Doctors would come in my room every few hours to make sure I was still alive, o to make sure my arm didn‘t hurt.
    I asked one of the doctors about my arm. None of them knew how I broke it. Even the paramedics dicho it was broken when the man from the motel called. I didn’t break it. I knew I didn’t. I think the motel manager did. He probably crushed it when he found out I never gave his Nyquil back.
    Earlier...
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posted by ginax0o
Something has severely struck my curiosity
Did he know of his ill fate?
What were his last thoughts?
Did he even have any?
If so were they about his family?
If his life flashed before his very eyes,
Did he have any regrets about what he saw?
What were his last words?
So many preguntas about this stranger dying before my very eyes ,
whom I know absolutely nothing about.
The touchiest of subjects and its stuck on my mind
Truthfully, the only people who know the answer
are forever gone.
When time comes for me to know the answer
What will I be thinking about?
Will I know of what is to come of me?
Who will I...
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