hola there.
I like to write poesía and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my escritura is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
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Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the día comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but tu can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears tu never shed.
Can tu hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My falda catches the wind
and what do tu see?
Tell me,
What do tu see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
I like to write poesía and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my escritura is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
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Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the día comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but tu can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears tu never shed.
Can tu hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My falda catches the wind
and what do tu see?
Tell me,
What do tu see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
Shaun
I'd pretended not to know anything. I tried to get over her, but I couldn't. It was too painful. It was too difficult.
I still blamed myself. I always would.
I did like she asked, I finished college. I moved to New York after graduation to begin my career as a child psychologist. I'd graduated early. Worked harder than was necessary. Ignored everything not school-related. Had a successful job interview. Accepted into a private practice.
I was miserable.
I still had to keep living; I knew I had to. I was twenty three when I moved there.
Twenty three when I decided to watch small children play in a park in the hope of learning something new.
She never failed to surprise me. Not ever.
I'd pretended not to know anything. I tried to get over her, but I couldn't. It was too painful. It was too difficult.
I still blamed myself. I always would.
I did like she asked, I finished college. I moved to New York after graduation to begin my career as a child psychologist. I'd graduated early. Worked harder than was necessary. Ignored everything not school-related. Had a successful job interview. Accepted into a private practice.
I was miserable.
I still had to keep living; I knew I had to. I was twenty three when I moved there.
Twenty three when I decided to watch small children play in a park in the hope of learning something new.
She never failed to surprise me. Not ever.
"She wore very little make up and looked exhausted, as if she’d just woken up and remembered she had to go work."
Shaun
I watched two little girls playing, watching one in particular. She reminded me painfully of Serena. The little girl pulled her friend to her feet and ran towards a woman that I recognized.
It was her. At first I was sure I was halluncinating.
Her dark hair was a little longer than I had seen it last. She was wearing a black pencil falda and a deep blue blouse. She looked happy as the girl ran up to her.
She hugged the little girl. Their hair was the same colour.
I watched numbly as Serena looked at the child with unfathomable amor as she told her something.
Serena looked up at me, pain and shock evident on her face.
I watched two little girls playing, watching one in particular. She reminded me painfully of Serena. The little girl pulled her friend to her feet and ran towards a woman that I recognized.
It was her. At first I was sure I was halluncinating.
Her dark hair was a little longer than I had seen it last. She was wearing a black pencil falda and a deep blue blouse. She looked happy as the girl ran up to her.
She hugged the little girl. Their hair was the same colour.
I watched numbly as Serena looked at the child with unfathomable amor as she told her something.
Serena looked up at me, pain and shock evident on her face.
tu couldn't and wouldn't,
ask for anything more.
Now all tu want,
is to be able to rest.
For your famliy to be happy.
tu wish tu could help them,
through the pain,
but tu can't,
tu can only watch,
from the sky.
tu can only watch them cry.
Hearts are now broken.
But your love,
is forever out spoken.
For twith out you,
there'd be no hope,
for those to come.
tu put the doctors one step closer,
to finding the cure.
tu may be just another person to them,
but to me your so much more.
Your one in a million,
your unequie.
I have just one más thing to say.
Plaese rest now.
Rest now and sleep.
May heven bring tu happiness and peace.
ask for anything more.
Now all tu want,
is to be able to rest.
For your famliy to be happy.
tu wish tu could help them,
through the pain,
but tu can't,
tu can only watch,
from the sky.
tu can only watch them cry.
Hearts are now broken.
But your love,
is forever out spoken.
For twith out you,
there'd be no hope,
for those to come.
tu put the doctors one step closer,
to finding the cure.
tu may be just another person to them,
but to me your so much more.
Your one in a million,
your unequie.
I have just one más thing to say.
Plaese rest now.
Rest now and sleep.
May heven bring tu happiness and peace.
i never thought the día would come when i had to leave my friends and family.but it did and it was all my fault. tu see my names claire and i got in a bit of trouble. i was walking inicial from my friends house and happened to over hear something i wasn't suppose to.it was a fight between to guys and from what i heard the fight was over drugs and money so now i'm runing for my life and for the people i amor lifes too.
"i'll miss tu mommy" i say giving my mother one last hug. "as soon as this is over i'll be home,plaese don't worry."
"i'm not worried" my mom lied.She was a tarible liar so i basicly saw right through her.
"i'll miss tu mommy" i say giving my mother one last hug. "as soon as this is over i'll be home,plaese don't worry."
"i'm not worried" my mom lied.She was a tarible liar so i basicly saw right through her.
It’s a silent staring match between tu and her
The quiet air above tu is whispering tu words
Words tu choose to ignore, words glaring at you,
Gnawing at tu from the very tip of her eyes
But tu won’t let down, no matter how much
She isn’t saying, no matter how much she can’t say
Because you’re in power, tu brought her here
tu yell, and she shrinks back, but in fear?
No, she’s waiting for her chips to add up
As life’s a poker game, the highs are all that won
She knows this; you’re the one who taught her
‘Lay low until tu gain the trono
To strike back at those who thought
The same as Arrogance himself;
That you, gullible and pathetic, were theirs alone’
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Please tell me what tu think, criticizm is welcome.
The quiet air above tu is whispering tu words
Words tu choose to ignore, words glaring at you,
Gnawing at tu from the very tip of her eyes
But tu won’t let down, no matter how much
She isn’t saying, no matter how much she can’t say
Because you’re in power, tu brought her here
tu yell, and she shrinks back, but in fear?
No, she’s waiting for her chips to add up
As life’s a poker game, the highs are all that won
She knows this; you’re the one who taught her
‘Lay low until tu gain the trono
To strike back at those who thought
The same as Arrogance himself;
That you, gullible and pathetic, were theirs alone’
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Please tell me what tu think, criticizm is welcome.
