hola there.
I like to write poesía and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my escritura is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
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Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the día comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but tu can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears tu never shed.
Can tu hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My falda catches the wind
and what do tu see?
Tell me,
What do tu see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
I like to write poesía and short stories. My friend turned me on to this site and I've decided to post some of my writing. I'm just a kid, so none of my escritura is as high quality as I'd imagine the other submissions would be. I really haven't read much so far. Maybe this isn't the best way to introduce myself to the other fanpoppers, but I couldn't find my friend to tell her about it. I also can't figure out how to add myself to this club. Oh, well. uh....here I am. Here's a little sample of my writing:
UNTITLED
Watch me twirl
with my feet on your toes
away from the darkness,
away from our foes.
See how I smile
as the día comes and
goes.
Look down at my eyes
reflecting your life;
leave the door open,
I'm afraid of the night.
Now watch me twirl,
all alone this time
without your toes
to help me stand.
Stare into my eyes
but tu can't see your
face in them,
watch as they fill up
with tears tu never shed.
Can tu hear my footsteps?
So light, but
so heavy,
watch as I dance around
in my frenzy
because I don't have your arms
to hold me in place.
I look into the night,
and I'm so afraid,
so afraid,
oh dear parents,
what a coward you've raised.
So I'll dance here,
in the light,
where everyone
can see me.
My falda catches the wind
and what do tu see?
Tell me,
What do tu see?!
I can't see anything;
only me.
Put down your glass,
step out to the floor.
Teach me to dance,
and I'll cry
no more.
i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
tu were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house o fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
tu did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
tu dicho your chance at amor had past tu por
i told i'm here so dont tu cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
tu were like my juliet and i your romeo
tu amor me i amor tu thats all i need to know
no longer will tu dream of amor thats true
no longer will i wander my buscar has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd amor some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
