True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate 20

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posted by rory2011

The sky turned off the sun light again ,the night came fast today
Mac stood in his garden ,it's a big el espacio of green plants and trees ,he was waiting someone to come ,someone is very important
" what's wrong ? why did tu call me ? I thought tu don't want me to come to your house " the doctor asked
" let's talk inside " Mac dicho pulling the doctor softly inside

" she knew " Mac dicho
" what ? and who ? " the doctor asked
" she knew what's going on ,she opened my secret stuff and read everything " Mac dicho Kat,
" oh no ……….. are tu sure ? " the doctor asked
" she read my daughter's death sentence ,I'm sure she read other papers " Mac dicho
" then now she knew what we are hmmm……………. whatever happened don't kill her …. our main project still on this girl ,don't ruined what we built from hundred years " the doctor dicho
" but she knew Jordan ,she know ,I can't simply let her live " Mac dicho
" she won't live for so long , tu told me that she started bleeding and she's seeing hallucinations más than ever and that's a sign ……… only a few days left of her life be patient " the doctor dicho walking towards the door and leaving

after ten minutos ,an old man enter the house ,Mac looked at him wondering " who is he ? " and he knew that he saw him before
" who are tu and what are tu doing in my house ? " Mac asked
" I'm here for my daughter , tu don't remember me ? my name is David Miller " David dicho
" oh ... right ,well come here I'll lead tu to Kat " Mac dicho walking slowly
David followed him to the basement ,when Mac opened the door he pushed David strongly inside the room and lock the door when he entered
he laughed " Kat ... you're so pathetic ,you called the old man to save tu " Mac dicho walking towards Kat ,he sat near her
" tu know what ,when I first saw tu I know that you're the right one ,I needed this stupid fool lonely girl to control her and tu did a great job " Mac dicho looking at Kat with his cold smile on his face
"do tu want to say something before I leave ? " Mac dicho ,he waited her to say something but she couldn't talk , her mouth is full of blood
" hola ángel face answer me " dicho Mac even louder ,but Kat didn't answer

David has no idea what's going on and why Mac suddenly got crazy ,he looked at Kat ,she look different ,she's paler than ever and she looked ill

Mac stood for half hora waiting Kat to say something ,but Kat was too busy with her thoughts to talk to anyone ,she was staring at her wraith
when Mac left the basement ,her wraith came fast to her " after he finish from tu ,you will be mine " her wraith dicho then the wraith laughed after her last word
Kat spit a lot of blood ,Hayley ran to Kat " mom are tu ok ? " ,Kat tried to breath but there's something inside her chest suffocating her

( sorry if there any errors ... thanx for lectura )

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The Boy Who Cried lobo araña Prologue.

posted by sawfan13

Prologue

Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital cama were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.

It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, tu may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...

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Troy, The Almighty Fatty

posted by alicia386

Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a año and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a mes before we started packing. ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane comida is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...

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hechiceras and Dangerous Ch. 3

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

"You're lying," I dicho but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
"That maybe, but would he really want tu to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add más to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
"You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most parte superior, arriba notch...

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Smith, Ron Smith. Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a almohada case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back asiento of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...

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A death in the forest, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if tu don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours hace and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are tu okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris dicho giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...

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The Dark Of Writing, Chapter 1

posted by 1999jacko

Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. pato, drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to cruzar, cruz the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that pato, drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge por the...

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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

posted by malmcd

Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked fresa red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I amor tu dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I amor tu two.” As he turned into the siguiente road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colina Chapter 13

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk inicial o is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" dicho Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" dicho Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where tu are I'm picking tu and Leo up, From ur 'Also...

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Runaway Eagle

posted by hgfan5602

Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not inicial for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My corazón is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any más of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.9

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and tu are sinner, commit all, tu are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...

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lobo Girl: Chapter 7

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take tu to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...

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Misty: First Chapter Chapter 1

posted by kitty190123

One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. tu know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your preguntas and comments!

Just Because

added by alicia386

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Denial of the Truth, Protection of the Soul

posted by hgfan5602

I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces por pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.

Remember me Ch.32 and Ch.33

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasía :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered por my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why tu bother, Des. Your voice is weak...

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

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The Boy Who Cried lobo araña Chapter 1

posted by sawfan13

Chapter 1

Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, mostrando a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had dado him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...

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The Loser Squad, Chapter 3

posted by sadiebugz00

Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip

Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had castaña, castaño hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are tu looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel colina Chapter 19

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of tu to registrarse us.." dicho a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" dicho Laura Gellar, she walked to the mesa, tabla and settled siguiente to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if tu don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two panqueques, tortitas please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could tu please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" dicho Susie with a forced smile and she put...