True Writers Article: The Inevitable Fate 20

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posted by rory2011

The sky turned off the sun light again ,the night came fast today
Mac stood in his garden ,it's a big el espacio of green plants and trees ,he was waiting someone to come ,someone is very important
" what's wrong ? why did tu call me ? I thought tu don't want me to come to your house " the doctor asked
" let's talk inside " Mac dicho pulling the doctor softly inside

" she knew " Mac dicho
" what ? and who ? " the doctor asked
" she knew what's going on ,she opened my secret stuff and read everything " Mac dicho Kat,
" oh no ……….. are tu sure ? " the doctor asked
" she read my daughter's death sentence ,I'm sure she read other papers " Mac dicho
" then now she knew what we are hmmm……………. whatever happened don't kill her …. our main project still on this girl ,don't ruined what we built from hundred years " the doctor dicho
" but she knew Jordan ,she know ,I can't simply let her live " Mac dicho
" she won't live for so long , tu told me that she started bleeding and she's seeing hallucinations más than ever and that's a sign ……… only a few days left of her life be patient " the doctor dicho walking towards the door and leaving

after ten minutos ,an old man enter the house ,Mac looked at him wondering " who is he ? " and he knew that he saw him before
" who are tu and what are tu doing in my house ? " Mac asked
" I'm here for my daughter , tu don't remember me ? my name is David Miller " David dicho
" oh ... right ,well come here I'll lead tu to Kat " Mac dicho walking slowly
David followed him to the basement ,when Mac opened the door he pushed David strongly inside the room and lock the door when he entered
he laughed " Kat ... you're so pathetic ,you called the old man to save tu " Mac dicho walking towards Kat ,he sat near her
" tu know what ,when I first saw tu I know that you're the right one ,I needed this stupid fool lonely girl to control her and tu did a great job " Mac dicho looking at Kat with his cold smile on his face
"do tu want to say something before I leave ? " Mac dicho ,he waited her to say something but she couldn't talk , her mouth is full of blood
" hola ángel face answer me " dicho Mac even louder ,but Kat didn't answer

David has no idea what's going on and why Mac suddenly got crazy ,he looked at Kat ,she look different ,she's paler than ever and she looked ill

Mac stood for half hora waiting Kat to say something ,but Kat was too busy with her thoughts to talk to anyone ,she was staring at her wraith
when Mac left the basement ,her wraith came fast to her " after he finish from tu ,you will be mine " her wraith dicho then the wraith laughed after her last word
Kat spit a lot of blood ,Hayley ran to Kat " mom are tu ok ? " ,Kat tried to breath but there's something inside her chest suffocating her

( sorry if there any errors ... thanx for lectura )

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friends Until the End- ch.1

posted by alicia386

Abigail Dalton

Chapter One

The sudden death of Abigail Dalton casted a spell on the quiet town of Brunswick, Georgia. Everyone felt utterly dismal as they watched the reporter give the gruesome details. It happened so suddenly and out the blue. Who could have ever killed the sweet 17 año old girl that made even the grumpiest of men smile at her beauty and charm. It was true that she was beloved por her peers, family, and community. Who would kill her? Well, believe it o not but there were some people who thought she was arrogant, stubborn, vain, and unintelligent. All of those comentarios may be true...

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World of the Shadows: parts one through Nine

posted by Zero_Delta

Okay, I'm positive fanpop messed up my formatting, and I don't feel like fixing 11 pages(nor do I have the time), but here it goes. I really would like Criticism please, All I've been getting is how much people like it on the escritura spot, good criticism is hard to find over there, So don't tell me what tu like, tell me what tu hate, as vehemently as possible.

“This world is lost…” The dragon’s words echoed in Karaza’s mind. She had been hiding near the gathering place, hoping for a chance to steal some of the dragons’ supplies before the great beasts flew...

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And she was gone.....(short story)

posted by LadyEmzy16

The rain was pouring as her bare feet touched the ground her black hair was stuck to her face ,she paused to realize that she was right in front of the graveyard gates she slowly walked into the graveyard while she was walking she found a bench, she sat on it and started to get tired ,she lay down and fell into deep sleep, waking up three hours later she realized it was it was past midnight with the rain coming to a stop ,she got of the bench and strolled through the graveyard , “where is it?” she kept asking herself while she was walking until she found what she was looking for, it was...

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Tears of Friendship

posted by hgfan5602

I hold tears back...
The thought of such a close friend
Leaving you
Is horrible.

It feels like life is over,
Like...there's no point in living anymore,
If your best friend is gone,
There's no one to keep the warmth
With tu anymore.

What's the point of life
If tu don't have any friends
To share it with?
It's all over,
All of it.

No one's coming to calm me down,
And I'm not going to let them either.
I want to remember my closest friend...
But it's not easy,
If tu have to leave them.

She will always be in my heart
She was an amazing friend to me,
She brought me so much joy
And happiness,
Even in the darkest of nights,...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note from the Saukerl: Chapter 1

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

Like I said, it was a dark and foggy night. I thought my eyes were deceiving me. I think I saw a Jew. This time around, there are practically no Jews. They are either in concentration camps- awaiting their death, o dead already. The Nazis are not being easy with the Jews. This Jew was covered with a black cloth, and he appeared to be standing over a cowering boy, twelve years old of age at least. I moved in closer, cautiously, with my Saumensch, and we were both suspicious. The Saumensch's eyes met mine. "Is that...a murder, Carls?" Matna, the Saumensch, was definitely suspicious. She never...

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Survived (on the perspective of Evan Gary)

posted by hgfan5602

I fought through the process,
And I was determined through it all.
I was Valiente and strong
And now I survived.

At first I was worried to death,
When the doctor dicho that I had cancer.
I stayed strong
Cuz I knew that my family and friends
Would care for me,
And spread the word
So I would survive.

My friends and I
Were always supportive of me,
And we could talk for hours,
Playing on our DSes,
Talking about Legos
Like great friends ever should.

Later, I was cancer-free
And I celebrated
We did everything great
It helped me cheer up.

I found out
That many people have cancer
Not only me..
And I'm...

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Missing; Chapter 3

posted by wantadog

Chapter 3

Juliet muffled her scream as she saw what was standing on the other side of the door. It was Phil, but not any Phil she had ever seen. Phil’s skin was black and bubbling, steam was being emitted from what used to be his skin, his pupils were gone, and he was giving off an awful odor, even worse than the cigarettes. He wasn’t looking her way so she dived behind the bar. “Oh my god, oh my god, OH MY GOD!” She clamped her mouth shut as her whispering rose to a shout. There was a grunt from the other side of the door and she heard a rattling noise as he beat on the door, trying...

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wen were together original song please read

posted by hugebleachfan1

baby i want tu so bad but idk if tu want me to i think about tu everyday wen im around tu i feel soo seguro feel like no harm can be done to me wen ur here there the rain disappears to a bright yellow sun

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars lighting up the night sky were burning up inside i wanna make tu mine tu are the spark that ignites inside of me

youve been there for me for as long as i can remember now its time for me to be there for tu and tell tu how i trully and i hope tu feel the same just dont want to let tu go

[chorus]
wen ur with me i feel like were the stars...

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Unity of the Universe

posted by hgfan5602

Together, at last,
We sing in unison,
As the eagles zoom past us,
Symbolizing true freedom now.

We are together,
Not just our country,
But all the countries of the universe,
Syria, China, Germany,
Russia, Canada, Brazil,
And, of course, the United States.

I have never experienced
Such an amazing feeling
In my whole life,
As the soldiers of the universe
March past,
We are in utmost glory.

The unity of the universe,
We behold right now.
Never again, we shall quarrel,
Fighting with our steel rifles.

We will be free,
Not just blacks,
But all of us,
Together, at last.

We will be equal,
Women and men,
And we shall work together,...

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Going Separate Ways

posted by hgfan5602

We are going separate ways.
We must leave each other,
Though I regret it,
There is nothing either of us
Can do.

We are going separate ways.
The bright light shines in our futures,
For the separate ways we go
Are the best for each of us.

We must leave for the good of it,
Though I don't want to,
And I know tu don't either.
But it is important that we do.

It is never easy
Doing what we do the worst,
Leaving each other,
And the thoughts that we are...
Best friends...leaving each other...

We must go our separate ways.
For our own good.
And we pray that one day...
We will meet each other again.
And we will.

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Best of the Thrills: Chapter Two: Jake

posted by hgfan5602

Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the biblioteca of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if tu ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...

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The keeper of the forbidden light

posted by Annabeth788594

chapter one

When I was a little girl my dad suddenly left. I remember being really close to him. Sometimes he would act strange though. Like he never stayed in one place long and was always looking behind him like he thought someone was following him. And one día he dicho he had to go for a little while, and he never came back. He was the best father I could ask for. He was kind and always did what was best for the family. And that is why it broke my corazón to find out that he wasn’t coming back. At first I didn’t believe it and I didn’t want to. The only thing I wanted was my dad to come...

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Remember me Ch.35

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasía :)~
Chapter 35
        Qualities of a hero
    “I brought tu your favorito! foods, deserts, etc. Should hold tu for awhile.” Jess says, handing me a steamy plate.
    “What are tu planning on doing, Jess?” I ask, confused, but grateful she wasn’t starving us. “What’s your motive?”
    “Sorry, can’t give tu all of my secrets, you’ll know soon,” Jess paused. “But right now, eat, strengthen your bones.”
    I take...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
6
    Darren
    Now, I don’t hate school, no, not at all. But the thought of going to it for a place of safety, especially with no one but creepy janitors in there, yeah, I’m not liking it.
    “How are we going to get in?” Brooklyn asked, eyeing the doors that, in morning look friendly and welcoming, but at night look dangerous and ready to gobble up innocent kids.
    “Oh, please!” Stilere said, looking at our faces. “You cannot be scared of school,...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.4

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
4
Iris
    I hadn’t been really surprised when we broke apart after that weirdness, being with them brought back all those memories. But I’ve been beginning to feel a bit lonely, all of us really bonded that day, and it feels like were sharing a secret. The bad part is that we don’t even know the secret either.
    I still can’t stop thinking of that book, it just popped up from where the lightning hit. Something happened that made it do that.
    “Hey Zaria,” I say as I walk up to her.
    Zaria...

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Don't Dance (rock song)

posted by hgfan5602

Ya tell me,
Don't dance, don't dance,
Just stay inside and never go out
And scold me
All día long, all día long

What makes tu think you're so damn awesome?
Don't ya know we have a life too, too?
We'd be sittin in watching TV
And I don't think tu want that either

So what the heck can we do?
We're not just mindless robots with nothing else to do
We don't have time for homework
We just wanna have fun, fun, fun

We have a life, no time for homework
We can go ahead and play flag football
But I'm not goin inside

Why do tu act like
There's nothin else better than
Doin homework all night long
I bet tu never liked that when tu were young

We've been playin outside
Now it's time to kick in and relax
No más time for homework, just sit back and do the things I amor to do
Cuz I gotta enjoy my life when I'm young.

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The Deadly Truth Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Crime: Dectetive Story

Chapter 6: Two Missing People Makes A Certain Someone Happy

Simone Rivers wore her blue strapless dress which made her look taller. She was already tall but she needed that extra height. She had her long blonde hair curled and wore the black wedges she recently bought. The whole outfits was around a seven hundred dollars but she wouldn't mention that to her cheap dad. She looked dazzling o at least that is what all the boys thought when they whistled when she walked by. She took pleasure on having their attention. Nothing could stop her now. She felt powerful...

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Remember me Ch.27

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasía :)~

Chapter 27
        Creepy doesn’t even begin to describe
    “The drowning man? Seriously creepy, considering how she died.” Jess said, shivering. “They’ve got to be the number one suspects now.”
    “It probably wasn’t all of them, just a few, o maybe even one.” Cadence said. “Think is, Dorothy was loved por everyone, and in that vision everyone wanted to be her favorite, what gives?”
    “What?”
    “Who would...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.10

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 10
    The smell of young amor in the morning
    You’d all be happy to know that I never buried a certain Meredith Baxter, but I did accidentally hit her during our lovely game of voleibol fifteen times.
    “Hey JONES! Watch it!” She yelled furiously at me.
    “Oh sorry, I didn’t give a had enough smack,” I shrug as I put on my most innocent face.
    Meredith glared at me but dicho nothing more.
    Don’t tu just amor the feeling of having the last word?...

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World of Shadows- Ch. 8

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MULTIPLE LIVES o LIVE FOREVER. -Erica

I was rudely thrown in a miniature room. He didn't say much when he lugged me here. Although, I could sense others nearby but when I looked there were no ghost o anyone near. I had finally gotten rid of the feeling to only have it come back again. This time I saw who it was. "Erica?" A shimmery figure exposed itself to me. A little surprise but not as surprise as Erica who was now flickering on and off like a light bulb.
"Who are tu and why did tu attack me?" This Erica was not the one I remembered from...