"My name is Melody Willgrove and I am a werewolf."
"Now I never found myself pretty o anything I am just a normal girl(well as normal as a werewolf girl can be any way).''I am just a normal girl .Though every guy in the pack thinks I am sexy, but I have know idea why .''I mean what so good looking about me I have deep red hair (which has a mind of it own ),I am too skinny (blow away in the wind to skinny ),I am a shorty (5 foot ) ,and I am pale (burn a lot ).''The only two things I like about myself is my grey eyes(their like my dad's ) and my b-cups ,hey if I am going to be skinny I derserve some boobs ."
"Interesting ,so when did tu learn that tu were a werewolf?"
"Oh , that I knew since I was a baby .since I do live in a pack of hombres lobo after all."
"What I mean to ask tu when did tu change into one ?"asked the doctor .
" I first change when I was 9 years old on a full moon like the supersition ,but not like the supersition we can change when we want .''The only two things that are true about the supersitions are that we do go raging killer crazy when the full moon comes up and that silver does burn when I am in lobo form ."
"Do tu have any thing special about tu that the other hombres lobo in your pack can not do ?"
"Yeah I am the only one who knows how to play the guitarra and piano.''And I am the fast female there though I think that because I am skinny ."
"Alright I think I heard all I need to know about tu .''How about tu tell me about the reason your here .Go head and tell me the whole story ."
"Well ok but it long story !"
the end of chapter 1
To be continued in the siguiente chapter
thank tu for lectura my story sorry if it was boring .tell me if tu want to hear the siguiente chapter.
"Now I never found myself pretty o anything I am just a normal girl(well as normal as a werewolf girl can be any way).''I am just a normal girl .Though every guy in the pack thinks I am sexy, but I have know idea why .''I mean what so good looking about me I have deep red hair (which has a mind of it own ),I am too skinny (blow away in the wind to skinny ),I am a shorty (5 foot ) ,and I am pale (burn a lot ).''The only two things I like about myself is my grey eyes(their like my dad's ) and my b-cups ,hey if I am going to be skinny I derserve some boobs ."
"Interesting ,so when did tu learn that tu were a werewolf?"
"Oh , that I knew since I was a baby .since I do live in a pack of hombres lobo after all."
"What I mean to ask tu when did tu change into one ?"asked the doctor .
" I first change when I was 9 years old on a full moon like the supersition ,but not like the supersition we can change when we want .''The only two things that are true about the supersitions are that we do go raging killer crazy when the full moon comes up and that silver does burn when I am in lobo form ."
"Do tu have any thing special about tu that the other hombres lobo in your pack can not do ?"
"Yeah I am the only one who knows how to play the guitarra and piano.''And I am the fast female there though I think that because I am skinny ."
"Alright I think I heard all I need to know about tu .''How about tu tell me about the reason your here .Go head and tell me the whole story ."
"Well ok but it long story !"
the end of chapter 1
To be continued in the siguiente chapter
thank tu for lectura my story sorry if it was boring .tell me if tu want to hear the siguiente chapter.
#1: BLAND PROTAGONISTS:
It mostly seems to be female protagonists.
They just don't care for anything, they look like they don't even want to be in this film..
#2; MAIN CHARACTERS ARE ASSHOLES:
And these are the GOOD guys.
#3: JUMP SCARES:
Just stop.. Maybe tu can try having actual SCARY stuff.
Weird images, dark shadows, that type of stuff..
#4: VILLAIN WON'T SHUT THE HELL UP:
tu have him at gun point, and he's tied to a chair.. Fucking shoot him already!
#5: TRAGIC VILLAIN:
I don't mind this one, it often works.
But still, can't he just be evil, for the sake of being evil.
Like Michael Myer's in the original film?
#6: POINTLESS REMAKES:
Stop.. Just stop.
It mostly seems to be female protagonists.
They just don't care for anything, they look like they don't even want to be in this film..
#2; MAIN CHARACTERS ARE ASSHOLES:
And these are the GOOD guys.
#3: JUMP SCARES:
Just stop.. Maybe tu can try having actual SCARY stuff.
Weird images, dark shadows, that type of stuff..
#4: VILLAIN WON'T SHUT THE HELL UP:
tu have him at gun point, and he's tied to a chair.. Fucking shoot him already!
#5: TRAGIC VILLAIN:
I don't mind this one, it often works.
But still, can't he just be evil, for the sake of being evil.
Like Michael Myer's in the original film?
#6: POINTLESS REMAKES:
Stop.. Just stop.