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Would anybody here read my poem?

I made it a few days hace when somebody dicho something to me. Will tu read it and tell me if tu think it's good o not? It's called Nobody Girl.

The Nobody girl

She leaves with the wind

No one can help her

She knows she can't win

She's heard with the echos

Because her voice is not hers

A howl at the door

Every time the wind stirs

The Nobody girl

Her pain is quite real

But she's always ignored

No one cares how she feels.

She soars off forever

Into her own little world

The only place she has

For Nobody girl

And in this new world

All her dreams are quite bright

Her visions are clear

Here, she knows she's alright

And in Nobody girl's world

With the rain and the trees

Her imagination runs wild

She let's it run free

She knows the meaning of life

The feeling of sound

Things most people would find

If they ever stuck around

The rain is still pouring

All is calm and relaxed

Until she wakes up

And she has to go back

Back into reality

Where nobody cares

Nobody forgives

And nobody shares

She's dado a choice

The raindrops still fall

She hears shouts from the forest

Nobody girl's world always calls

But she can't go back to her world

Until later tu see

She has to face the real world

So she can learn to be free.


 Would anybody here read my poem?
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I got one of my poems published
dsgirl posted hace más de un año
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Awesome dsgirl :))
peterslover posted hace más de un año
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I decided to post my poem in the poesía spot!
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peterslover said:
This is an excellent poem! Very well done. Worthy to be published! Really! I can FEEL the sadness of her. I FEEL her need to go to the other world so she can feel understood, a part of, loved. So well done in fact, I HOPE she's not tu in poem form :(
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Best answer and the poem is amazing:D
ashesandwine posted hace más de un año
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Thanks my dear ♥ Just saying the truth :))
peterslover posted hace más de un año
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this poem is great, i feel her nobody'ness
topazEYEs91 posted hace más de un año
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i amor your answer it is so true
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BaybieBetty009 said:
i read it.<3
She sounds lonesome.
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RedDice99 said:
It's Great! :) :) :)
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laspanglish said:
:o nobody girl...omgsh the poem is gr8!!well done bree,u shuld definatly do más poems,cuz this i reeli reeli fab!thers a lot of emotion in this poem,an it has a meaning,thts wot makes it awsome 5/5 frm me!!well done hun x
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crestfallen96 said:
luv it <3
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miniabby33 said:
i loved it. U r like william shakespere follow ur poesía dream and reach for the stars. The worst thing that could happen is hit the moon.
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Nice :P
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PreBanned said:
Nice ^_^
Reminds me of how crapy life is..XD

Acctually reminds me of my life...
No one bothers to listen to what i say, and about half of the people on here will skip past this answer..And i won't care nor notice it.....




Anyway,,, very nice,i enjoyed it :)
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 Nice ^_^ Reminds me of how crapy life is..XD Acctually reminds me of my life... No one bothers to listen to what i say, and about half of the people on here will skip past this answer..And i won't care nor notice it..... Anyway,,, very nice,i enjoyed it :)
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I care for tu dear ♥ tu can "chew on my ear" anytime :))
peterslover posted hace más de un año
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:) O_o What does that mean?? XD lol :)
PreBanned posted hace más de un año
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im here to listen to what u have to say ;)
topazEYEs91 posted hace más de un año
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I've noticed tu answer a whole lot of preguntas on this spot, so I always look for yours after I post mine. =)
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avatarluver990 said:
so sad :( but gud :)
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dsgirl said:
Awesome!!!
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Angel_W said:
OMG!that was AWSOME! the best one of the best poems i've ever read! wonderful.fantastic...specially i loved the last part so so so much!you are awsome!i wished i could right like you! i write songs.my dad asked me to publicar it o give to some singer bands! but i am too afraid to face it.....lucky you:)i am even afraid to put it in fanpop!
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 OMG!that was AWSOME! the best one of the best poems i've ever read! wonderful.fantastic...specially i loved the last part so so so much!you are awsome!i wished i could right like you! i write songs.my dad asked me to publicar it o give to some singer bands! but i am too afraid to face it.....lucky you:)i am even afraid to put it in fanpop!
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luv-the-cullens said:
I like it
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taytrain97 said:
...wow.

That poem...I just...it's...whoa. O_O

I'm speechless, but in a good way. =)
That's probably one of the most well-written poems I've ever read. It truly does deserve to be published.
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schnoodle11 said:
:')
this made me cry a little.
SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!
I LUFFS IT!!!!!!!!!
i feel like i can relate to it.
I LUFFS IT!!!!!!!!!
:')
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frosti529 said:
I amor it its so beautiful
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