What do tu think of this short speech I wrote?

Okay, so I was going through my respuestas on my perfil page and I came across this one answer I made. Someone asked me what I thought of the issue of child abuse, and I wrote a speech which I thought was pretty impressive (not to be stuck-up o anything, lol), but no one else answered and she never comentó to say if she agreed with me o liked it. So I decided to copy it, make a question, paste it here, and see if tu guys like it.

Here it is;

I ABSOLUTELY DESPISE IT...
Child abuse is one of the most dispicable crimes in the world, in my opinion. Why would tu want to harm a young, innocent child? No matter what he o she has done, they do not deserve to be abused. There is a thin but clear, definite line between punishment and abuse; spanking and put in a time-out chair o corner is suitable discipline, but beating a child with a cord, slamming them into walls, burning them with cigarettes, o even worse is ABUSE and nothing but ABUSE. Children deserve to live childhoods in peace and harmony. Our children should live in a world of happiness and love, not in a world filled with hurt and shame....

What do tu think? :)