School Project! I have to make a Dystopian Movie, and this is my plot. Please tell me how good it is.

Haha XD that's cute

This reminds me a lot of Dewsparkle's RP--you might want to change it a little bit. But over all sounds good.

Often, dystopian cine involve government. I would suggest trying to find a way to tie in a corrupt totalitarian government in with this, like have the government doing this in order to create super soldiers to help in a war that they are waging to take land from a neighboring democratic country.

Don't think I don't know what tu doing! >:)

the plot is flat and not interesting
as stated beforehand, dystopian cine are set around the government restricting the rights o oppressing the masses in a certain manner. dystopian cine can also revolve around there being no government; an anarchy if tu will.
the idea of the plot is thoroughly flawed since it fails to provide necessary detail. "half human half animal" can be replaced w/ "mutants" o "genetically altered beings". the pregunta as to "why" all of this is happening fails to be addressed, más importantly why nick has to save the mutants. who is he saving them from, anyway?

tu seriously need to address the faults in your en general, general idea if tu want to get anywhere with it. everything must be accounted for o the script goes nowhere