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Okuni said:
As someone who's trying to become a manga artist and pretty much waste my life on drawing practice, here's my consejos to you. I have to warn tu though, I always give consejos that may seem harsh, but it could help tu a lot. If tu aren't willing to read the consejos however, I can truthfully tell tu that tu don't want to improve yourself. Hopefully that isn't the case. So prepare yourself.
Your picture is good for computer work, honestly I can't really draw on the com without my tablet, but tu are lacking in accuracy and detail. Sure, if it was in a rush, it's understandable if details were minimized, but at the very least, tu have to make your character in your drawing look a little más like the real thing. The head shape does not go well with the body and neck ratio. It's a girl right, then tu should make the chin más obvious and slightly pointed for that girls' look. The eyes are a bit too far up into her forehead, and it seems unnatural. The nose and mouth are fine though. Do tu understand the concepts of drafting? If tu do, please try it on paper to get the human shape right first, then when tu get that right, pinpoint where the facial features should be and draw them into your draft, then add clothes and details after. For the face, tu may want to look into a mirror to see where your own facial features are placed on your face, and that would help determine your drawing's face. Freckles should not be too obvious since they are mostly only lightly sprinkled on someone's face in real life. Take note of the average figure of both females and males for your draft por the way.
For clothes and hair, just draw them along your character's figure, adding some creases here and there for effect. tu can do shading right? It would look strange if tu did shading without the creases, so please don't forget them. Hair should look smooth and not too flat on the parte superior, arriba of the head. Add line details for effect, and also add in highlights if tu know how.
After lectura this, there is only one thing left. Practice. And practice and practice. Take things slow. Drawing is something that cannot be improved quickly. If tu try drawing one o two pictures each day, o at least once every three o four days, tu should get the hang of it. And try drawing things other than humans. Inanimate objects o other living creatures, they're all good. Scenery is good too. Drawing these will help tu get used to drawing harder stuff. Good luck. Hope tu do well and I hope this long-winded answer will prove useful to you! ^^
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