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For this one writeing assignment in class we got a bunch of notecards, 5 words for each like and we couldnt switch the words around . and i had weird words but do tu think my poem turned out okay for not chooseing my words??

except i added the , as, where ,has, when and the cuz were allowed to add those.and the título i amde up.here it is.

Unheard dream
the sad imaginitive realistic dream that swells

as forest breezes listen immersely and stare

where quite delirious unknown chaos has soul

when tangy lyrical danger crashes happily

the swaying seasonal rosas whisper passionatly


i know it dosent make any sense..but i couldnt mocve the words around to differnt lines.lol
 outsidersfan_14 posted hace más de un año
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Magicuser said:
not sure if my opinion means anything... but i like it!
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katana64 said:
it sounds ok to me dado the circumstances
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thanks(: yove answered a lot of my stuff anything i can do tu you??
outsidersfan_14 posted hace más de un año
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i do it for fun, really i have to thank tu for putting it up
katana64 posted hace más de un año
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okay(:
outsidersfan_14 posted hace más de un año
CMJCMJLG said:
It's really great I would like to try that some time!

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make notecars with a bunch of misceláneo words..even flamingo!!!! and then shuffle it and draw five and put it in five piles and those are your words!
outsidersfan_14 posted hace más de un año
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