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Note: This is the first chapter of my new fanfiction Where I Belong. I have already thought up the plot but not every detail. There's a twist and Private finds out Skippper had been hiding something from him.

Private felt completely alone. The unruly, brisk gusts of snow grew más vigorous por the minute. If only he had got his uncle to take him inicial o stayed in the H.Q. To make matters worse neither Skipper, Kowalski, o Rico knew where he was. His life long scheme would end up in tradgedy. Struggling to substain from collapsing, started picturing the time he had spent with his cherished friends. imágenes of all them flashed before his eyes. A tear dripped from his innonce eyes. Before he knew it he has on the ground fighting to keep consiousness. Why couldn't his friends just work it out. It wasn't their fault, and Private knew it.


Two weeks ago:
It was a humid, muggy summer morning in New York City. The sun hadn't even come up and Skipper had gotten the team up for early training at four 'o' clock. They moaned and groaned which caused Skipper to obtain a outraged and crabby mood.
P: "Skippah, do we have to get up so early for training?"
S: "Well, geeh, Private! I'm sorry for trying to strengthen tu boys' stamina!"
Skipper slapped Private.
S: "If tu boys want to serve in this unit. I suggest tu get used to it o get over it!"
K: "You have to admit 0400 ia little bit early for exerices."
Rico began to let out a fatigued yawn.
S: "That's it, men! Give me 50!"
P: "Not push-ups!"
S: "Yes, push-ups!"
R: "djghsuistsjbd!"
Rico mumbled to the others who were doing their push-ups.
S: "What was that, Rico? Are tu complaining? Well, if tu think I'm being so unfair, tu won't mind seeing what the rest of the team thinks. Boys?"
P: "Um... kind of,"
K: "Sorry, Skipper."
S: "I see, I have to toughen tu men up!"
K: "Skipper, we're tired!"
S: "You don't think I am?"
P: "But you're not doing any of the work!"
S: "I didn't back talk my commanding officer!"
R: "Neither did Kowalski o I!"
S: "Fine, go back and sleep! I don't care if you're in shape, anymore!"
They ciclomotor into the H.Q. while Skipper stormed into it. While getting coffee, Skipper noticed his team watching TV.
S: "Wait, I thought tu boys are too tired!"
P: "To train, but we can't fall back asleep."
S: "Maybe, tu all wouldn't be so tired if tu didn't stay up so late, Kowalski."
K: "I didn't know we were training so early, Skipper."
P: "Can't we have a día off of training, Skippah?"
S: "Negative, not today. It's my job to keep tu soldiers fit and capable of fighting skills."
Kowalski whispered to Private, but Skipper over heard.
K: "To keep us fit you'd have to be fit yourself!"
S: "I heard that, Kowalski, also I know that tu wouldn't be without me."
Kowalski was about to speak his mind but stopped himself.
S: "What were tu going to say, Kowalski?"
K: "Nothing,"
S: "Oh, really? tu weren't about to say tu didn't need me?"
Kowalski held his head low.
S: "Well?!"
K: "You're right."
S: "Well, I don't need tu o any of you! I'm better off alone!"
P: "Skippah, please!"
S: "No, Private! You're better off without me, too. I'm sorry..."

Private forgot what Skipper had dicho siguiente because it was incomprehensive to him. He had no clue that it would come to his mind later and make sense.

Skipper packed up his posessions, and headed out silently. Private thought about the way he had left that evening all night.
P: "I miss Skippah, Kowalski."
K: "What am I supposed to do about that, Private? There's no getting him back. It's your fault!"
Private began to cry. Kowalski hugged the tiny penguin.
K: "I'm sorry, Private! I'm just frustrated."
P: "Do tu miss him, too?"
Kowalski sighed.
K: "No,"
R: "shfahfga dfhsjg sdgfutgus dsakgfu stgiufd."
K: "Maybe, we should go our seperate ways."
P: "No!"
K: "I'm sorry, Private."
Later that night, after they all had packed up, Private snuck out with his bags when no one was looking.

Private felt a missing part of him come out again. Like an old wound that had been cut into again, but denser. When Private was a chick his father had left and his mother fell in amor with another penguin. He made it his goal to meet his real father and get to know him.

Two weeks later:
Private felt his body shutting down. This was his last chance.
P: "Help! Somebody, help! Help!"
The weather got worse and Private's eyes were half open. A stubby figure stepped forward, but was hard to make out.
Flashback

It was 12 years ago, Skipper and Karen got married and Private was an egg. They all were sitting in the living room. They got a letter from the military, Blowhole had a new, dangerous plan. This mission was probably the most dangerous mission, so it needed the best soldiers. Skipper had to be a leader of a team A, which includes six soldiers: Kowalski's parents, Rico's parents and Manfredie. Karen was a leader of a team B with six soldiers too: Johnson and five other soldiers. Katherine had to stay with Private. The mission was going to start on the siguiente week.

Present Time

"So our parents...
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posted by misscrazel
Kowalski was sitting in his cama when he heard the transporting truck. He went topside. His girlfriend, Abigail, was there.
Abigail had green eyes and long eyelashes. Her feathers were soft and shiny. She was Skipper's sister.
Kowalski hadn't seen Abigail since high-school.
Kowalski was about to hug Abigail when he realized that she might not like him anymore. They hadn't seen each other in such a long time.
Abigail ran over and kissed Kowalski.

I have writers block now, sorry it's so short. I'll write más later.
The siguiente día was sunny and warm. Katherine and Skipper felt better and they all were sitting in the HQ.
“So, Can tu tell me now the whole story about my past?” Private asked.
“Private, I don’t know if you’re able to...” Katherine dicho but Private sent them pleading look “Alright” she said. Kowalski and Rico, interested in a topic, approached them “Ok, so what do tu want to know?”
“Something más about my mother. From the beginning”
“So you’re starting, Katherine” Skipper said.
“Ok, well...” Katherine started “It happened when I was nine and Karen was fifteen,...
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posted by Penguinator
This is chapter 2 of The Vampire Epidemic. Enjoy!
Chapter 2
“The night is still early!” Pat proclaimed. “Let’s go find our newest vampire brethren!” Private dicho as the two vampire penguins left the HQ and división, split up, looking for their siguiente victims.
Private stayed in the pingüino, pingüino de HQ, searching for his first victim, Kowalski. “Hello Kowalski.” Private dicho in a deep, demented voice. “Hello Private. It sounds like tu have a cold.” Kowalski said. “No, I don’t Kowalski. Look closer!” Private said. He noticed the feathers on Private’s chest were a dull grey, and Privates...
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"According to my calculations, it should be hidden in one of the trees" dicho Kowalski.

"Kowalski?"

"What?"

Skipper slapped Kowalski.

"We are in the forest! Do tu know how much trees are here?" dicho Skipper.

"Ok, I'm thinking... this is probably árbol which differs from the other" dicho Kowalski. They went to other side of forest. There was escarpment and trees. Everywhere were frogs.

"like thi tre?" asked Rico what means: like this tree? when he jumped on the árbol closest to the precipice.

"Yes"

Rico find hollow in the árbol and pulled something, what looked like a mask.

"Good, we have got something round,...
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Although Monique and Kowalski were together, she doesn't always see eye to eye with Skipper. Usually it's her way of sneaking around o her passtimes that tend to bug the leader, but what they always tend to butt heads over is the way that she fights. Skipper and his team fight in a sophisticated and semi organized manner, while she ends up fighting in a rhythmic matter that's partially controlled por anger. Whenever she tries the moves Skipper teaches his team, she always feels like they are just not her.
One day, she felt like she wasn't taking control of what she feels like she should be doing...
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---Skipper's mission---
He heard Private's blood curtling scream. Terror filled the leader's body. "Private! Where are you!? Private!"
He raced in the direction he heard his scream. Finally he reached the alley. His eyes immediately met Private's feathers on the ground. The bold leader, feeling ashamed and sorrowful, wept. Little did he know that some one was sneaking up behind him.

---Flashback---
After a dangerous mission the penguins decided it was best if baby Private got a new home. Finally they found Private a family who wanted to adopt him. Skipper never wanted to let him go. All of the...
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“Kowalski, analysis” dicho Skipper, leader of the penguins team.
“I think we have got all… Rico?” dicho tall penguins Kowalski, who was a scientist.
Rico checked his stomach, which was a magazine of theirs weapons. He nodded.
“So we can go” dicho Kowalski.
“Ok, everybody are ready?”
“Yes, sir” dicho three penguins.
“Operation: Blowhole, start… now” dicho Skipper and all penguins went out of their HQ.
“How we get to Blowhole?” asked young pingüino, pingüino de Private.
“We can go por subway”
Penguins went to New York city town and get to the subway. In subway weren’t any people, so...
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    Skipper and Eve continued walking through New York. It was almost sundown again, and snow was still drifting gently from the dark cloudy sky. They hadn’t gotten far within the last few hours. It was difficult to walk through such harsh weather. To try to keep as warm as possible, Skipper and Eve were walking with their flippers around each other, pulling each other close.

    “Hey Eve…”

    “Yeah Skipper?”

    “I think I found a way we can get out of this cold without stopping.”

    “Yeah?”...
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Okay. I know that I'm in the middle of Book 1 but eventually, every 5 chapters that i make, i'll put a trailer. so enjoy!

Previously...many things happen before the destiny will come true. First off, young Private started to have visions of him meeting Henry. The treasures and the answer are coming one por one. Next, Private and Phoebe moved in the orphanage. This time, the destiny starts...

Chapter 5: Tragical News

"Why Blowhole?!"Private angrily asked. "Of course young Private, it passed off one por one from my ascendant then to me. If only the real chosen one was here, he would have been dead...
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posted by Private1sCut3
Marlene: "Good day, my Lords!"
*Penguins look at Marlene*
Kowalski: "Orbs of great fire!"
Marlene: "I bid you! I know not of thee!"
Skipper: "Greetings! Beauteous are thee...thou art very pretty...Uhh...Wherefore needest it thou? .... *looks at Kowalski* Sir Kowalski,what say you?"
Kowalski: "By my troth! Henceforth thee dwelling midst a mistress!"
Marlene: "I know not that name!"
Kowalski: "Tis most slendid of oppourtunities, dost thee whence of wisdom before shall canst a goodly length in thee past of times!"
Marlene: "Wilt thou speak of thee? I trow not!"
Kowalski: "Mistress fare thee in thou tongue of flibbbergim!"
Marlene: "Thee speak of nonsense, good sir-"
Kowalski: "Incredulous!"
Marlene: "Naught thee! My name be thou- *Kowalski grabs her tongue* MMarr-lenne!"
Skipper,Private and Rico: "Arlene!"
Skipper: "Ye art hath thee hearts of noble men!"
Marlene: "My..lord?"
Skipper: "My lady dicho thee!"
    She woke slowly, she realized she was somewhere inside, she couldn’t feel the cold winter crisp on her cheeks. It was warmer here. At least she was warm until ice cold water landed in her face. She shook her head and spat out water, then realized she was tied to a chair. When her vision cleared, she saw Skipper standing there, pointing a water gun at her, a bucket full of ice water a few feet away. He spoke with fierce anger to his voice. “Where are my men?”

    “Like I’d tell you.” She replied with a straight face, she had a thick British...
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For the siguiente nine days, Skipper wasn't himself. All day, every day, he mobed in the rocking chair. He would stare out the window. Sometimes he'd watch the sky. Others he would groggily daze out at the woods, o fix his eyes on the tame flow of the lake.
The once great leader would find himself waking up those days after noon. Losing one of his men, was practically losing, not a battle, but a war. Very surge of confidence from his body had seemed to be demolished.
It had come to the point where Rico and Private went to do things without him.They begged Skipper to get and do something, but it...
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June 27, 2004
1352 Hours


    Amanda was in her bathroom in her and her husband’s Londres apartment. She was pacing back and forth. She was nervous, not knowing what to expect. She looked at her watch again. The 15 minutos were up. She picked it up and examined it. She beamed and began crying tears of joy. She couldn’t wait to tell Hans. He was stationed in Denmark at the moment but was scheduled to be back tomorrow afternoon.

1824 Hours

    Amanda was in the living area of her 5th floor apartment reading. She heard the light pattering of rain outside,...
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posted by peacebaby7
Note: This is just supposed to be a conversation between all the animals. After I've completed, feel free to give suggestions for the continuing of the conversation. Lastly, I hope tu enjoy it! :D

Skipper: "And the zoo's meeting will now come to order!"

KJ: "Oh smelly waterbird! I will have a frutas zalamero, batido de frutas with mangoes, grapes, um... granada and--"

Skipper: "Not that kind of order!"

KJ: "Well siguiente time tu will be making yourself más clear! I was looking adelante, hacia adelante to that smoothie..."

Mort: "I will make the smoothie!"

Skipper: "Can we just get on with the meeting please!"

KJ: "I am royalty! I...
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Dumb Kowalski's conversation with Skipper

Kowalski:  Hi, I'm a penguin.

Skipper: Okay.

Kowalski: Are tu a penguin?

Skipper: Yes.

Kowalski: Yay! We're sisters!

Skipper: We'd better go outside. It's almost feeding time.

Kowalski: I like feeding things!

Skipper: We are the ones that get fed.

Kowalski: I hate feeding time. Why can't we feed ourselves?

Skipper: tu can.

Kowalski: Yay! I amor lemurs!

Skipper: Fine. *goes up the ladder*

Kowalski: No, Skipper, don't leave me here alone, with all the monsters! *clings onto Skipper's foot like a toddler*

Skipper: Then tu can come out with us.

Kowalski: Hooray for fish!

Skipper: *sigh* 
posted by peacebaby7
The siguiente Day...

It was now time to get the plane down. Rico hacked up some knives & the penguins were carefully slicing the vines that were holding the plane in the tree. "OK! This bird's about to fall! Everyone stand back & prepare yourselves!" Skipper announced to the crowd of lemurs down below. Julien, on the ground, dicho to Maurice, "What bird? I see no bird..." Suddenly, with a lurch, the plane fell.

It wasn't as bad as was predicted. Once it hit the platform, it bounced once, & landed with a thud. The lemurs then began cheering. The penguins leaped down from out of the trees...
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posted by peacebaby7
Note to reader: I decided to start doing my artículos in más of a story form instead of a script-like form...It's much easier to work in details. Those who have read my anterior artículos know me to do my artículos that way. Anyway, please enjoy the siguiente chapter of Madagascar Epilogue.

Madagascar

Three Months Into Construction...

The past 3 months of construction has been very progressing for the animals. The platform is now nearly completed, & the penguins were now getting ready to bring down the plane after careful analysis of the plane's engine state.

The four mischievous penguins were now...
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posted by peacebaby7
Madagascar

Marty, Alex, & The Penguins...

Marty: "We're comin' Alex!"

Alex: "Great but, I can't see Melman from here...Oh no tu didn't get the pengu--"

Skipper: "Hold on Hippi! We're here to help!"

Alex: "Marty! Why did tu bring them!?"

Marty: "Melman was busy."

Skipper: "With that attitude maybe we'll just leave tu in that tree!"

Alex: "Good! I'd be safer!"

Skipper: "Fine! C'mon men!"

Marty: "Oh, uh-uh! tu four have to go help him!"

Skipper: "Look, Stripes! He obviously does not need o want our help! He can just wait up there until later on. It'll probably be very late at night when Tall Guy...
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posted by Skiparah
I clenched my eyes shut as the sting nipped my back. I tried to stop a cry of pain from escaping my beak but it broke free, echoing in the large room. I heard the slicing whack again and the sensation of lightning shooting through me made me yowl in agony, sweat poured down my face. I looked over my shoulder at Blowhole, a pleading expression on my face, "Blowhole, this is unnecessary! If tu want revenge kill me!" Blowhole chuckled. The lashings stopped. The purr of his segway neared me, "Alexander, this IS revenge. What better way to enjoy it, than to watch tu suffer?" He lifted the whip...
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