harry potter vs crepúsculo Article: Breaking apart

posted by bamagirl5899

okay so tell me what u think of this.

May pov

I was speeding down tha familier calle I wished my 2010 yellow camaro with black racing strips was faster. Though I about missed the calle to my old friend's house. I pulled up to a 3 story house. Alice ran out of the house to my car sometimes she was annoying. "Wat up little pixie?" I said. "Nothing much." was all she replyed she looked sad. "Wats wrong Alice?" I dicho not joking anymore."Well eveything is just falling apart and were going to this new school but were still living here it's just getting confusing." "Wat new school?" In truth I just got accepted to a new school they usually don't take 16 año old's o that was what alice was pretendind to be if she got in at my new school. "A school with a stupid name it's called Hogwarts how stupid is that name. Plus were going to be gone the whole año with no shopping and ur going to need a shopping spree." She dicho eyeing me clothes. I was wearing some blue jeans and a tanktop. "Wait u dicho hogwarts I got exceppted their to." "All of us got exceppted except Bella and reneesme. Oh and Edward,Emmet,and Jasper missed u and it was amusing to see them get beat up por a girl. Those were the good times." she said. and in truth those were my favorito! times evan though Edward liked me it was still fun to beat Emmet at arm wrestling."Well were going to all be togather now for a few years though if the three dumbo's are going I might not." I dicho laughing."Dont call my bf a dumbo." "Fine Edward and emmet are the dumbo's. We entered the house everyone was watching tv Bella gave me an icy stare I don't care what she thinks I wispered to alice. I knew she heard vamps ability's were sometimes amusing though evan though i was one.Me and alice have been friends since i was 11 and figured out their secret and they changed me at 17."Wat's up everyone." I said. they ignored me. "Fine c u guy's at Hogwarts." we were leaving tomarrow and the looks on their face was priceless

bamagirl5899 hope u like it if not i dont care my opinion matters not everyone ealses but still comment

bamagirl5899 oh and it will get better at hogwarts

bri-marie Having it in this really long paragraph format is kinda hard to read. I know that Fanpop isn't always happy to put articles in the format you want, which is why I'm not going to make a big deal out of it. However, it is something you should watch out for. Watch your punctuation and spelling! Do not use chat speak ('wat', 'u', 'c') unless the person who is doing the talking is [i]actually[/i] texting. It's irritating and, to be honest, makes you look lazy. So far, over all, the story isn't off to a bad start. we could use a little more information about your main character (i.e. how she knows the Cullens) and more visuals (i.e. what does May look like?).

Bellatrix-Black This is terribly written. It might have been a good story, but it's too much work to read. When you write, you want to make it easy to read, you don't want to force the reader to work. For example, I didn't know the speaker's name was May until bri-marie said so.

bamagirl5899 well read the last couple of sentences and u can see how she knows the culles.

bri-marie . . . Alright, looking over the large fact that Alice was in a mental institution for years, you now have the large problem that at the beginning of this (very small) chapter, you infer that your character is sixteen. At the end, you say she was changed into a vampire at seventeen. Which one is she? Mary-Sue alert.

bamagirl5899 listen dont be mean dont like it fine dont care i dont like people like u who r mean commenting on this

bri-marie How am I being mean?

DracoLuver Bri isn't being mean. It's called constructive criticism. You need to know the things your reader doesn't like so you can improve your writing. She's being very nice and straight-forward. Also, PLEASE don't call Hogwarts a "stupid" school. It's offending. Maybe, "I've never been there, but the name sounds stupid."

bamagirl5899 well u hp fans say offending stuff about twilight so why can't i say something about hog warts

1-2vampire Um, Bri isn't being mean. As DracoLuver said, it's called constructive criticism, say someone wrote a really terrible book, and everyone was like "yeah it's great, honest!" just to make them happy, it wouldn't end up good, because Simon Cowell-like publishers would be like "what the hell was that?" and they wouldn't be able to make it better. There are quite a few mistakes and confusing parts in there, like for instance I can't read the writing because of the "text talk." Besides, the world wouldn't be right if there was one book out there which hadn't had someone criticize it. You can't please everyone at the same time, so don't try.

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Me and my friends' fanfic part 1 of many

posted by emilyroxx

When me and my friend Fiona were in the sixth grade, we decided to write a fanfiction about the Twilight characters going to Hogwarts. (We were both major Twilight fans then.) I wasn't the best writer in those days, so the beginning of the fanfic isn't great, but it gets better as we go along.
You'll notice that our seprate entries can get a bit confusing at times, and that's because we were escritura por e-mail because she lives six hours away from me, and we were just making it up as we went along. Fiona is escritura about the character Peace, and I am using the character that I use for EVERYTHING,...

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Cha-ching!

posted by HecateA

So lately I've been thinking of the Cullens and how damn rich they are. And then I stop and go, wait a minute, how is that possible?

So I am going to compare the Cullen expenses and the average normal-people expenses in this chart.

Expense Normal People The Cullens

-Food X X*
-Clothing X X*
-Shelter X X
-Gas X X
-Inssurance X
-Electricity X X
-Running water X ?*
-Heating/cooling X
-School supplies X X
-Blood X
-At inicial
Medical supplies
and medicine X X*
-Private island X*
and its maintenance X
-Cottage o
campground, etc X
-Travel expenses X X*
-Cell phones X X
-Useless Twilight
merchandise X
-Lunch money...

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Wizards Vs vampiros

posted by rangarajvignesh

The World is flat!
Well, I know tu pregunta my sanity, now. Obviously, the world is round and that’s a proven fact, from the moment Galileo stepped out of his ship. And now, there’s a pregunta again. Is the World really round? I hate that word, really. The word which gives rise to a lot of preguntas and seeks for explanations.
‘Imagination is más important than knowledge,’ dicho a wise man once. And, it’s true. Well, tu need not be aware of the complications of four-dimensional el espacio fabric to accept this theory. What all tu need to...

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what i think of bella swan-1

posted by emilykuru

BELLA cisne _ part 1

Ummm…. What can i say about her………….er…….nothing interesting but i can mostrar u guys why she spoils the story

1.she is a hopeless char.she degrades herself,

2.she is stupid 2 leave her mom and come to forks when she begs her 2 comeback.

ok! if u guys say that it was because of the amor for renee then it is totally wrong.

which daughter who loved her mom so much as to go 2 the place which she considers
hell just for her moms happiness would forget all about renee when jumping off a cliff to hear edwards voice.
doesnt she always worry in the story that she has...

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HPbest's anti story!

posted by harrypotterbest

There is, in the world, a girl called Z-----. más commonly known on this website as Best, that is the name that shall be used for this anti story.
Now, when best was 11 years old, she had read all the Harry Potter books, and loved them. I’m talking about waiting for her Hogwarts acceptance letter to come and carving wands. She truly loved the series. In 2009, she went to a wedding. Her aunt there had read the Harry Potter books, except for the last one. She also had a cousin there, who was a huge fan of Twilight. Now, at that time, best hadn’t read Twilight. Her aunt was also a huge fan...

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The Final Battle: Part 3

posted by harrypotterbest

As Edward and Harry settled the final means of the battle, Ron, Hermione, and Ginny had a talk.
“Who wrote this rubbish?” asked Ron. “Sparkle in the sun, battle with debate, they don’t even drink proper blood!”
Hermione, as usual, was the one to answer. “Ron, everyone knows Stephanie Meyer wrote this ‘rubbish.’ She’s not a very good writer, according to The Daily Prophet, and for once I agree with them,” Hermione rolled her eyes. “At least OUR writer, the brilliant J K Rowling, didn’t make US sparkle in the sun. What nonsense!”
“Do tu know where this Meyer person...

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Thorough Look as to Why Harry Potter is Better.

posted by MarauderForever

I'm tired of repeating myself and other HP fans repeating themselves constantly so here is my opinion on why Harry Potter is better. So tu don't think I'm being biased, let me tell you: I read Harry Potter when I was 5 and have been a fan since (and that shuts down the comentario that little kids can't read it por the way) and when I was 13, I read Twilight (before the bandwagon) and loved it. Then just recently, I got off the Twilight High. So I know how it is to have liked Twilight and to like Harry Potter.

First, we can look at the authors. JK Rowling is the epitome of Rag to Riches. She started...

hary potter v twilight!!!

posted by NataliaLidia

i persenally dont like ether series and heres why!!!

books
twilight
1) i am a reel vampire and i do not sparkl!!! stephanie shud have pardo, dun her reasearch before she wrote a book about vampires!!!
2) bella is a bad roll model!!!
4) edwerd is abusiv!!!
5) its unrealistic!!!
6) its badly writen!!!
7) edwerd is describd to much!!! it gets boring!!!
8) its boring overall!!!

harry potter
1) its not relatble!!!
2) its made for kids!!!
3)harry always beets te bad guy!!! he never looses!!!
4) harry gets away wit everything in skool!!!
5) they hav bad frends!!! ron leaves nd dosnt stay wit harry when peeps make fun of him!!!
6) its boring!!!
7) snape keeps his job even tho he bullys students nd is a deth eater!!!
8) dumbledoor doesnt reely care about harry!!! he leaves him at da durslys even tho they are abusiv!!!

movies
both cine hav bad actors nd the filmers didnt follows the boks the way they were suposed to!!!

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Bella&Edward poem

posted by HaleyDewit

Bella
My name is Bella and there’s something I need to tell
I’m dating this cute vampire, he’s just hot as hell
He’s fascinated por my none existing mind
And I fall apart whenever I stare in those liquid topaz eyes

Edward
My name is Edward and there’s something I need to say
Bella’s gonna freak when she finds out I’m gay
But I can clearly understand what she sees in me
Because have tu ever met someone this perfectly

Bella
I used to live in Phoenix, but now moved to this rainy place
I keep whining about it and I always have the same expression on my face
I’m just a little girl who’s helpless...

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Things Edward could've done with his life....

posted by Confuzzle

1. registrarse an orchestra.
[i] You're inside, anyway.....

2. registrarse an opera.
He has a good voice...right?

3. Go to a tanning salon.
Who wants to be pale all their life?

4. Leave home.
You're a hundred and something and STILL living with your parents. How does that feel?

5. Travel.
Yeah, the sparkling thing pops that bubble a bit, but what are parasols for?

6. Discover...SUNSCREEN.
It protects tu from the sun. Shocking, eh?

7. Begin a knitting business.
Creativity is key. tu can still stay inside, and make money. Plus, tu make friends with the rest of the sweet little old people in the knitting club.

8.Start...

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Rant on argumentation techniques

posted by Aquilia

I'm adressing the rabid Twilight fans if they would listen. I'm also adressing the common fans of both sides of this debate.

There are some things one may and may not do in a formal debate unless one wants to look like - pardon the language - a freaking donkey.

Nr 01: One may not argue against the debaters points por attacking him o her. This is called argumentum ad hominem and is a fallacy. For example: If I am to argue that free elections is wrong and states that the arguer is an imbecile that does not deserve the right to vote, then I have committed a severe personal attack and will be frowned...

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Voldemort vs. Aro

posted by Athiya

Many of tu might have noticed that the golden trio from Harry Potter (Harry, Ron, and Hermione) had always been paired up to fight with the not-so-golden trio of Twilight (Edward, Jacob, and Bella). Now, XDRoseLuvsHP had pointed out a great deal on why HP trio would win against the Twilight's (you can find it link), so I figured perhaps it's time for the villains to battle.

My first thought was off course, James and Voldemort; but then, it didn't seem fair on the Twilight side. James was not a very good villain; his character was poorly underdeveloped and his powers weren't very outstanding...

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Response to "you want reasons? ill give tu reasons !!! mwahahah!"

posted by ChocAttack266

This is a (long) rebuttal to KatiiCullen94's argument, the título of which is in is article's title. (Though you've probably all seen that por now.) I haven't included her points in this, so it will be necessary to read her articulo first.

1. The majority of people in this world cannot relate to Bella. Tell me, how many people can go to a new school and automatically be the prettiest and most popular girl there? How many girls can say that they have FIVE males lusting after them?

Bella does care for people other than herself - her boyfriend. That's it. She was perfectly happy to hurt her father...

My opinions and thoughts on Twilight Characters

posted by Renesmee_XD

This is my last articulo and as tu may know I never really came here to argue, just to figure out what was going on in Twilight-Haters heads.

Bella- Whiny and Moany ?
Everyone says that Bella is so whiney and the point is so what if she ? I am sure if we went into your heads ,you would be as moany as her. She complains about the attention she is recieving from boys. I would too it would totally creep me out if suddenly I moved to a new school and everybody likes me.
The friend problem: Jessica is not a good friend after being to 9 schools so far I have met people like this and only can I comment...

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The Height of Stupidity

posted by DivyaHarry

Firstly, this is not my article. I found it over the internet and pasted it here because I find it really hard to believe that there are people like this in the world who are completely ignorant o just plain stupid.

The e-mail was apparently from Kayla Patterson, a die hard Twilight/Taylor Lautner fan upset about Universal Pictures ripping off the werewolf idea from Twilight.

To whom this may concern:

This movie was a complete waste and I feel that it offends ALL Twilight fans around the world, that including myself. For one, it was a COMPLETE remaking of the lobo Pack from the Twilight Saga:...

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Response to "Analysis of the Opposite!"

posted by XDRoseLuvsHP

Hmm... this could take a while. Haha, I have a lot of reasons for my strong dislike of Twilight. Before I start, I'd just like to explain that I was once a Twilight fan, so I've read all the libros and stuff, but I just can't stand it anymore. Therefore, I can give a más complete explanation of my views. Sorry if it's really ridiculously long.

First reason I hate Twilight: the media. Twilight, in all honesty, isn't a great book. I have read worse libros (though not many... Twilight was pretty bad). However, if Twilighters and Twilight artículos and such weren't all "OMG ITS THE MOST AMAZING SERIES...

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Comparison: Stephenie Meyer and Voldemort

posted by XDRoseLuvsHP

Voldemort is notorious for his fear of death. To avoid death, he is willing to kill innocent people and destroy his very soul.

Now, everyone with any sense knows that Bella is a Mary Sue, and Stephenie Meyer desperately wants to be Bella. I even personally know quite a few Twilight fans who realize and accept this. And what does Bella want? She wants to become a vampire.

Here is some commonly known knowledge about vampiros (according to Meyer):

-Kill innocents for survival
-Practically immortal
-Possibly lose their souls, though this is not known for sure

We see Voldemort killing innocents for survival....

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My Review of Twilight and it fans

posted by Kersian

Okay now I will begin off with something that has really begin to get on my nerve. How Twilight fans write out their artículos on why they like Twilight. Not just artículos other things too. I will give tu and example of one: "For people.....blah blah blah." Like these. Who are they directing these too exactly? I know some the título says it, but they expect only those sort of people to respond. Pff yeah right. I see that kind of título I go in and see what kind moronic things they have to say.

Most Twilight fans I see on this site lack the skills in proper grammar. Okay first if tu ever want...

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Old twilight fan writes about harry potter

posted by nati30

This articulo was actually wriiten por an ex-twilighter(iloveyoudarling), not me, and i dont like the way she wrote it, cuz it is kinda rude, but i publicado it so that maybe some twilighters here could consider giving harry potter a chance because the articulo proves that even though tu amor twilight there COULD be a better book out there:
Dear Twilight fans,

I was tu one day. Addicted to Twilight and couldnt ever stop lectura it even if i had already read it 4 times. But trust me on this one will you. READ ANOTHER BOOOK!!! AFTER tu DO THAT TWILIGHT WILL SEEM LIKE A STUPID ROMANCE STORY.

After...

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venvargie's anti-twilight story.

posted by venvargie

Let's set the scene before this begins shall we? A girl, we'll call her Ven, is walking inicial from school and gets a call from her friend. Ven and dicho friend have not spoken in a while so they start to ask what the other has been up to. They eventually get into the subject of libros they've read. And that's where this little story starts.

So Ven's friend asks her what her favortie book is. "Oh, that's an easy one." she replies. "Harry Potter of course." her friend laughs and says, "Of course. Well, my favorito! book series is Twilight."

Ven, having never even heard of the books, makes a confused...