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What do tu think of this idea?And would tu read it?(do not copy!!!!!)

Kim is your average 13 año up until her 14 birthday when she discovers she has extraordinary powers.She wakes up in the middle of the night to find that her eyes have gone a light sparkly rosado, rosa colour.Her parents tell her they have powers too.Kim then takes special classes to train her powers were she meets this gut called Kristian.Kristians power is to make people fall in amor with him.Little does Kim knoe her real parents are 'evil' and trying to rid the world of powerless people!Kim falls for Kristian.Kristian asks Kim back to his house where he drugs her.Kim wakes up in her real parents house strapped to a chair!Her own parents are going to kill her for their own daughters powers!!!!!!!
What do tu think of this idea?And would tu read it?(do not copy!!!!!)
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I would so read that story sounds good
princesspinkla posted hace más de un año
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tu had me at the sixth line.
dragonrider posted hace más de un año
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tu lost me at the part about amor
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greekgirlA said:
please write it and publish
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cheeeese said:
thats a good story :) whats kim's powers?
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Kims powers are: Controls weather with her moods,plant growth she can kill tu if she touchs tu she can control liquids and thats only a few!!!!!I havent thought of anymore!
Cullen-fan posted hace más de un año
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what about... can manifest the 4 elements??
1-2vampire posted hace más de un año
Elie_star said:
Mmm, I don't know. I'd like to read it... Maybe Kristian will fall in amor with her?
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Dearheart said:
(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...)

Sounds to me like tu have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest tu run your character(s) through this test before tu go any further.

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It should help tu get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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(Sparkly, light-pink eyes?? *facepalm* OMG...) Sounds to me like tu have a class 1 Mary Sue in the making. I strongly suggest tu run your character(s) through this test before tu go any further. http://www.springhole.net/quizzes/marysue.htm It should help tu get a better idea of where your character's at and which cliches to steer clear from.
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What exactly do tu want me to do!!!?
Cullen-fan posted hace más de un año
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I'm sorry for being rude...it's just that this sounds too much like something you'd find on FanFiction.Net. Like I said, just take a few minutos and go through the test. I really think it will help.
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Chill out. No need to cuss. And dearheart was making A FREAKIN SUGGESTION
Fairstepshaven posted hace más de un año
forbiddenLURVE said:
sounds really good!!! if tu become an autor and get it print i'll read it [:
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BiteMeCullen107 said:
nice but tu should describe it more. i would so read it.
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Cullen-fan posted hace más de un año
1-2vampire said:
REALLY GOOOD!! i wanna b an autor and am riting a story too!!! im on chptr 11 so im not done yet, my link for the first 2 chapters is,

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PLEASE LOOK AND COMMENT!!!
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Cullen-fan posted hace más de un año
booklover101 said:
that is awsome r u going 2 finish it i would tottaly read it!!!
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anakin_fan81 said:
This sound kind of wierd. Maybe tu should work on the idea a bit and make it less confusing.
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Shepard14 said:
I like the Idea...Although DearHeart? Why is it tu sem so critical of other ppl's writing? I don't mean to sound antagonistic when i say that....I am just curious....You know...a thought just occured to me....what if celebridades have profiles on here...hahahah that would be funny
to see their reaction when they see how many fans they have on this website alone..hahahaha
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lol that was so misceláneo with the celebrity thing. but that would still be awesome!
BellaCullen96 posted hace más de un año
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I KNOW RIGHT! COMPLETLY RANDOM...but i just thought of it and i HAD to share it
Shepard14 posted hace más de un año
renesmee13 said:
write más will ya?
it was pretty good =)
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samoangirl96 said:
i like the story except the kristian part sorta freaky but other then tat pretty cool story can't wait to read más of it
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THE KRISTAN PART IS THE BEST PART!
bananafreak18 posted hace más de un año
sickla said:
wow
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writer67 said:
laws of stone of magic rules, do not allow others fall in amor it must be free will, for safety reasons!
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sixtynugget said:
How about while she is attending this magical school she befriends a geeky nerd who can mindread and use telekinieses
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that sounds cool
annalia posted hace más de un año
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GOOD IDEA
bananafreak18 posted hace más de un año
bananafreak18 said:
WHEN U FINISH IT GIVE ME A HEADS UP CUZ THAT IS A AWESOME STORY!
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tall said:
nic story
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prim17luvr101 said:
My personal opinion is it's kind of boring and not well developed at all.
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Shirohige1939 said:
The story sounds great. I would read it. Sounds very interesting
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Sutelc22 said:
geat escritura my friend.
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