Alpha and Omega: Debt paid with Blood

Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm

The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone toro grazed below, it chewed on the wild césped, hierba it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.

The wind shifted , as the Old toro cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the arbusto, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.

The toro was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the arbusto, bush and the field of tall wild grass.

Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the toro turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of pelaje, piel and the toro staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the toro was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The lobo stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"

The old lobo spoke With words of stone

"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden pelaje, piel always soft , and the scent of flores that were always with her.

He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He dicho finnaly after their short howl. " what do tu mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if tu know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like tu the way tu are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"

Chapter 2: The return

A winter later humphrey patrolled the tranning grounds , His pelaje, piel rippled with new powerful muscles , his face a darker , más confident look with powerful eyes. Over the time he spent traning with Winston he had learned to kill with scary efficency . He could track deer from a mile away. He could Almost become invisible to anything unsuspecting. He leapt from rock to rock till he stood on the cliffs peak. He laughed to himself he recalled when it had took him half a día to traverse it now a matter of segundos . That was just part of his traning . He had to hunt with his eyes closed , pescado and command pack members which was hard because who wanted to listen to a former omega? He had also sparred personally with Winston who despite claiming such, held nothing back , each día humphrey went to sleep bruised and bloody , so sore that as soon as he hit the ground he fell asleep. Then came a día during the sparring he seemed to feel like winston was moving slower , he could see his blows before they came and dodged them as he returned with powerful hits shaking winston. " He must be going easy on me" Humphrey thought. "Surely this isn't all you've got Winston" dicho Humphrey dodging a slugish blow . " Of ... course ... not " coughed Winston Panting. Then it came , Humphrey saw an opening and took it . Slamming Winston's side and turning him over , then Humphrey jumped on him and pushed down. "I give Humphrey "still panting as Winston got up "nice ... Job" Humphrey smiled barely breathing heavy at all. "It's time for the mountain " Winston spoke regaining his breath "The Mountain" Humphrey dicho quietly.

"The Mountain" Was for what its worth a very steep rocky colina covered in dirt and very sharp fist sized rocks meant to cut up paw pads. What's worse is that the Trainee Humphrey in this case has to traverse the mountain while it was raining turning already loose dirt into mud making it very hard to climb up the last boulder to the peak . " This is not going to be fun is it Winston?" Winston just chuckled and moved to the viewing position.

Lightning cracked and thunder bekoned for Humphrey to start . He Sighed and took his position at the base. As if a signal the rain began to fall " Of course now it can't be just a ducha, ducha de '' Humphrey dicho weakly. "All right Humphrey get ready ... set ... Go!"