Alpha and Omega: Debt paid with Blood
Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm
The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone toro grazed below, it chewed on the wild césped, hierba it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.
The wind shifted , as the Old toro cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the arbusto, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.
The toro was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the arbusto, bush and the field of tall wild grass.
Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the toro turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of pelaje, piel and the toro staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the toro was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The lobo stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"
The old lobo spoke With words of stone
"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden pelaje, piel always soft , and the scent of flores that were always with her.
He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He dicho finnaly after their short howl. " what do tu mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if tu know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like tu the way tu are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"
Chapter 2: The return
A winter later humphrey patrolled the tranning grounds , His pelaje, piel rippled with new powerful muscles , his face a darker , más confident look with powerful eyes. Over the time he spent traning with Winston he had learned to kill with scary efficency . He could track deer from a mile away. He could Almost become invisible to anything unsuspecting. He leapt from rock to rock till he stood on the cliffs peak. He laughed to himself he recalled when it had took him half a día to traverse it now a matter of segundos . That was just part of his traning . He had to hunt with his eyes closed , pescado and command pack members which was hard because who wanted to listen to a former omega? He had also sparred personally with Winston who despite claiming such, held nothing back , each día humphrey went to sleep bruised and bloody , so sore that as soon as he hit the ground he fell asleep. Then came a día during the sparring he seemed to feel like winston was moving slower , he could see his blows before they came and dodged them as he returned with powerful hits shaking winston. " He must be going easy on me" Humphrey thought. "Surely this isn't all you've got Winston" dicho Humphrey dodging a slugish blow . " Of ... course ... not " coughed Winston Panting. Then it came , Humphrey saw an opening and took it . Slamming Winston's side and turning him over , then Humphrey jumped on him and pushed down. "I give Humphrey "still panting as Winston got up "nice ... Job" Humphrey smiled barely breathing heavy at all. "It's time for the mountain " Winston spoke regaining his breath "The Mountain" Humphrey dicho quietly.
"The Mountain" Was for what its worth a very steep rocky colina covered in dirt and very sharp fist sized rocks meant to cut up paw pads. What's worse is that the Trainee Humphrey in this case has to traverse the mountain while it was raining turning already loose dirt into mud making it very hard to climb up the last boulder to the peak . " This is not going to be fun is it Winston?" Winston just chuckled and moved to the viewing position.
Lightning cracked and thunder bekoned for Humphrey to start . He Sighed and took his position at the base. As if a signal the rain began to fall " Of course now it can't be just a ducha, ducha de '' Humphrey dicho weakly. "All right Humphrey get ready ... set ... Go!"
Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm
The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone toro grazed below, it chewed on the wild césped, hierba it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.
The wind shifted , as the Old toro cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the arbusto, bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.
The toro was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the arbusto, bush and the field of tall wild grass.
Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the toro turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of pelaje, piel and the toro staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the toro was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The lobo stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"
The old lobo spoke With words of stone
"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden pelaje, piel always soft , and the scent of flores that were always with her.
He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He dicho finnaly after their short howl. " what do tu mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if tu know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like tu the way tu are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"
Chapter 2: The return
A winter later humphrey patrolled the tranning grounds , His pelaje, piel rippled with new powerful muscles , his face a darker , más confident look with powerful eyes. Over the time he spent traning with Winston he had learned to kill with scary efficency . He could track deer from a mile away. He could Almost become invisible to anything unsuspecting. He leapt from rock to rock till he stood on the cliffs peak. He laughed to himself he recalled when it had took him half a día to traverse it now a matter of segundos . That was just part of his traning . He had to hunt with his eyes closed , pescado and command pack members which was hard because who wanted to listen to a former omega? He had also sparred personally with Winston who despite claiming such, held nothing back , each día humphrey went to sleep bruised and bloody , so sore that as soon as he hit the ground he fell asleep. Then came a día during the sparring he seemed to feel like winston was moving slower , he could see his blows before they came and dodged them as he returned with powerful hits shaking winston. " He must be going easy on me" Humphrey thought. "Surely this isn't all you've got Winston" dicho Humphrey dodging a slugish blow . " Of ... course ... not " coughed Winston Panting. Then it came , Humphrey saw an opening and took it . Slamming Winston's side and turning him over , then Humphrey jumped on him and pushed down. "I give Humphrey "still panting as Winston got up "nice ... Job" Humphrey smiled barely breathing heavy at all. "It's time for the mountain " Winston spoke regaining his breath "The Mountain" Humphrey dicho quietly.
"The Mountain" Was for what its worth a very steep rocky colina covered in dirt and very sharp fist sized rocks meant to cut up paw pads. What's worse is that the Trainee Humphrey in this case has to traverse the mountain while it was raining turning already loose dirt into mud making it very hard to climb up the last boulder to the peak . " This is not going to be fun is it Winston?" Winston just chuckled and moved to the viewing position.
Lightning cracked and thunder bekoned for Humphrey to start . He Sighed and took his position at the base. As if a signal the rain began to fall " Of course now it can't be just a ducha, ducha de '' Humphrey dicho weakly. "All right Humphrey get ready ... set ... Go!"
Ok i got new ideas for spirit corazón flames n, roses. I drew a few pictures of Zoe. It will be publicado tomorrow. If it can. But spirit corazón lobo is in the gallery. tu have to buscar through the alpha and omega pics on fanpop. So spirit corazón I might make a new episode. The project x i don't have enough ideas. I already got the xbox in it and booze, violents, Simba init. In part 5 there will be sex for the ones that like Kate and Lilly. Each fan gets a turn though. Soooooo.... I need new ideas for the project x, the spirit corazón series I got new ideas for that. But I'm having really hard time getting tu guys init. In part 5 I might put in grand theft auto, one of us has to steal a car, and the sex thing I already told you. So give me a few ideas.
verse 1:
dark in this womb here
i cant hear, cant see clear
damn this fate for
damning me in this place
verse 2:
there is a light i can feel
warm feel, my deal
with the devil trapped me
damning me forever in here
chorus:
now im
born free
my destiny calls me
from this womb i
am born now i can see
now im born free
i flow to my black sea
born free
to run
now im
born free
verse 3:
screams in this dark place
shivering haste, fog haze
beats i can hear
bereave me of all fear
verse 4:
the pulse is racing in this cell
the sound of a bell, "is this hell?"
the world i can now see
now im born free
chorus:
now im
born free
my destiny calls me
from this womb i
am born now i can see
now im born free
i flow to my black sea
born free
to run
now im
born free
born freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (the eee's following tune)
now im born free
my destiny kills me.
dark in this womb here
i cant hear, cant see clear
damn this fate for
damning me in this place
verse 2:
there is a light i can feel
warm feel, my deal
with the devil trapped me
damning me forever in here
chorus:
now im
born free
my destiny calls me
from this womb i
am born now i can see
now im born free
i flow to my black sea
born free
to run
now im
born free
verse 3:
screams in this dark place
shivering haste, fog haze
beats i can hear
bereave me of all fear
verse 4:
the pulse is racing in this cell
the sound of a bell, "is this hell?"
the world i can now see
now im born free
chorus:
now im
born free
my destiny calls me
from this womb i
am born now i can see
now im born free
i flow to my black sea
born free
to run
now im
born free
born freeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (the eee's following tune)
now im born free
my destiny kills me.
should i write about life after the first alpha and omega movie or
life after the first alpha and omega movie with me in it or
life in a completely different pack with me in it and new characters o
life with a character from the first alpha and omega omega movie in my town
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i needed más words so ignore the ses plz help por commenting
life after the first alpha and omega movie with me in it or
life in a completely different pack with me in it and new characters o
life with a character from the first alpha and omega omega movie in my town
ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
i needed más words so ignore the ses plz help por commenting
1. humphrey
2. garth
3. lilly
4. tony
5. winston
6. eve
7. salty
8. shakey
9. mooch
10. marcel and paddy
11. all the alpha wolves.
kate was the only one that ever survived. the creature didnt come back to kill her. cause spring was over. jeeper creepers was known as a demon thats a bat from hell. in every spring it gets to eat. but when springs over. it wraps up like a shell. but kate never found humphreys body. o shakeys body. so this is not the end of the story. tu will find out later.
There's a fuego starting in my corazón (D)
I heard that your dreams came true (S)
Don't underestimate the things that I will do (S)
There's a fuego starting in my corazón (D)
Reaching a fever pitch And it's bringing me out the dark (D)
Now rumour has it she ain't got your amor anymore, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
The scars of your amor remind me of us (D)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all (D)
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited (S)
Rumour has it! (R)
I heard that you're settled down (S)
That tu found a girl and you're married now. (S)
But tu played it (D)
(You're gonna wish tu never had met me) (D)
tu played it (D)
Rumour has it (R)
Never mind, I'll find someone like tu (S)
tu played it (D)
We could have had it all (D)
tu played it to the beat. (D)
I heard that your dreams came true (S)
Don't underestimate the things that I will do (S)
There's a fuego starting in my corazón (D)
Reaching a fever pitch And it's bringing me out the dark (D)
Now rumour has it she ain't got your amor anymore, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
Rumour has it, rumour, (R)
The scars of your amor remind me of us (D)
They keep me thinking that we almost had it all (D)
I hate to turn up out of the blue uninvited (S)
Rumour has it! (R)
I heard that you're settled down (S)
That tu found a girl and you're married now. (S)
But tu played it (D)
(You're gonna wish tu never had met me) (D)
tu played it (D)
Rumour has it (R)
Never mind, I'll find someone like tu (S)
tu played it (D)
We could have had it all (D)
tu played it to the beat. (D)
hola guys, Mack lobo here, i'm just posting this to tell tu guys im escritura a new artical and news on my other one.
Ok the new artical "Life with the Pack" is my segundo fan fic ever
it's about a week since Kate and Humphrey and Lill and Garth became mates and life is great tell they run in with a very odd 14 año old boy who know's how to hunt, and after they meet, the 3 pack leader's: Winston, Eve, and Tony make a very odd questian for the boy to registrarse the pack. how will Humphrey, Kate, Lilly , Garth and the whole pack deal with this boy and how long befor they start a fight o become friends?
so that's the new artical, now on the news with "Life with Wolves" i have not giving up on it i'm just on writers block and i've thought of all these other articals to write so im just taking a break don't think i'm giving up im not.
well that's basically it so im done, peace bro's and bra's
-Mack Wolf
Ok the new artical "Life with the Pack" is my segundo fan fic ever
it's about a week since Kate and Humphrey and Lill and Garth became mates and life is great tell they run in with a very odd 14 año old boy who know's how to hunt, and after they meet, the 3 pack leader's: Winston, Eve, and Tony make a very odd questian for the boy to registrarse the pack. how will Humphrey, Kate, Lilly , Garth and the whole pack deal with this boy and how long befor they start a fight o become friends?
so that's the new artical, now on the news with "Life with Wolves" i have not giving up on it i'm just on writers block and i've thought of all these other articals to write so im just taking a break don't think i'm giving up im not.
well that's basically it so im done, peace bro's and bra's
-Mack Wolf