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ángel was so excited, her best best friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate tu so much!” ángel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.
“Was Summer being mean to tu again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she dicho that my friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about tu having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly ángel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started canto happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. ángel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the campana rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after té we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” ángeles mum maravilla shouted. First of all ángel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a flor craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in arco iris order.
“Oh thank tu Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” dicho Aliona feeling pleased that ángel had liked her gift.
“Mine siguiente mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”
After their magnificent party té the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the parte superior, arriba of the water, waving. A few segundos later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of segundos passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel
They waited.
“It's been over nine minutos now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing tu guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and ángel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed ángel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minutos since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” ángel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” ángel cried “I'll stay here!”
So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a división, split segundo she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her corazón freeze.
ángel was so excited, her best best friends were coming for her birthday sleepover at five o clock! Time crept slowly to ten past five and still not a single soul in sight! Suddenly her little sister Summer shouted “Ha Ha they're not coming they hate tu so much!” ángel ran upstairs weeping and charged desperately into her sister Friday's room.
“Was Summer being mean to tu again?” asked Friday
“Yes, she dicho that my friends weren't coming because they hate me and that's not true!”
“Don't worry its only because she is jealous about tu having the best sleepover ever”said Friday
Suddenly ángel heard a knock at the door “I'll get it!” she called out. As soon as she opened the door Yvonne started canto happy birthday and was holding a large oval shaped present neatly wrapped up in sparkly purple paper. ángel and Yvonne hugged and while they were doing so Tillie appeared holding a square box covered in 'Happy Birthday' paper. They were all catching up on gossip when the campana rang “That must be Aliona!” shouted Yvonne and they all ran to the door. “Hello people!” Aliona shouted in her excited American voice.
“I hope you've all remembered your swimming costumes because after té we're going for a swim in the lake!” exclaimed Angel
“Right time for the presents!” ángeles mum maravilla shouted. First of all ángel opened Tillie's present which was a short book and a flor craft set. Then she opened Aliona's, which was an art box with pencils and charcoal all neatly in arco iris order.
“Oh thank tu Aliona! I have been wanting this for ages!”
“Your pleasure” dicho Aliona feeling pleased that ángel had liked her gift.
“Mine siguiente mine next!” shouted Yvonne. Yvonne's gift turned out to be a massive tub of sequins, beads and lots of arty things.
“Oh thanks Yvonne!”
After their magnificent party té the girls went to the lake near Angel's house. “I'll be first in!” Aliona shouted. So Aliona jumped in the lake and screamed at the temperature. The others were too scared so they just left Aliona in there. “I'll try and touch the bottom then” Aliona said. Aliona ducked down sticking her feet in the air and sticking an arm up over the parte superior, arriba of the water, waving. A few segundos later Angel, Tillie and Yvonne heard some splashing and saw some bubbles where Aliona had gone down. “She must of reached the bottom!” Tillie shouted excitedly. A number of segundos passed and still no sign of Aliona!
“Where is she?” asked Angel
They waited.
“It's been over nine minutos now!” Tillie shouted, almost in tears.
“What are we going to do?” asked Yvonne who was the smartest of the lot. It was bad news if she couldn't even think of an idea. “We can't exactly tell Angel's Mum, she'll go ballistic!”
“And so will Aliona's parents! They'll never want to see us again!” Things were looking very bad for the girls and they still didn't know what to do.
“Right I'm going in!” cried Yvonne “What? We cant just stand here and do nothing!”
“Y...v..v..v..vonne's right” stammered Tillie who was in tears now “We have to help A..A..Aliona!”
“Right” Yvonne declared “It was nice knowing tu guys!” she hugged both of them and jumped in. Tillie and ángel burst into floods of tears. It was bad enough losing one best friend let alone two!
“Yvonne shouldn't of followed Aliona down there, it could be dangerous!” exclaimed ángel (The
worrier of the group). It was getting dark and the two girls who were still dry were very very worried! It had been over 11 minutos since Yvonne had jumped in and 18 since Aliona had disappeared! “Lets go inside and get Mum!” ángel suddenly decided after lots of pondering. “She'll know what to do!”
“But what if they come back up?!” ángel cried “I'll stay here!”
So Tillie went pelting back towards the house, faster and faster, when she saw a hooded figure in the distance. For a división, split segundo she thought it was Angel's Mum but no, it couldn't have been. For Angel's Mum didn't have fiery red hair. Angel's Mum wasn't that tall. Tillie slipped out a small scream. Her legs had frozen. She didn't know why, she didn't know how. The hooded figure turned. It had a chalky white face. Tillie felt her corazón freeze.
"Gwen,Gwen,Gwen!" Ms.Barton dicho as I was asleep in history class."What?" I dicho when I woke up."had a nice dream?" "S-sorry Ms.Barton,it won't happen again"."let's hope not." She said. When the campana rang to go to lunch,my best friend,Marlon came up to me."What happend back there?" Marlon asked.To tell tu the truth,I've always had a crush on him.I always had a feeling he liked me back."Nothing,nothing at all,i was just dreamin." "What about?"he asked with a smile."I'm not telling you!" I dicho with a smile.When we went back to class,Ms.barton wanted to talk to me."Gwen,you have been sleeping in my class far to long". "sorry Ms.B,I havent been myslef lately." I dicho with a frown."OK,first of all,dont call me "Ms.B",and tu must go to sleep on time." She dicho with a light smile."sorry,it hared to fall a sleep in my house." well then...ther is only one thing to do...you need to,wake up..."