escritura Article: chapter10:the escape

posted by joe-edwardfan

I KNOW ITS SHORT BUT I WASNT IN THE MOOD TO WRITE AND IF I WROTE más I AM SURE I WOULD WRECK IT!
SO ENJOY AND I WILL POST THE NXT CHAP SOON CAUSE MY EXAMS ARE OVER FINALLY!
Chapter 10: the escape bellas pov
Previously on Chapter 8:(chap 9 was Edwards pov)
I looked at Damien he was sitting on his knees a beautiful black box with the most beautiful ring in it.oh no god no I don’t want to marry him!
-Bella will u please marry me?
-no
I dicho coldly Damien got angry maybe this was hard for him to hear the truth I mean he didn’t most of the time he just made me do anything he wanted, making me his imaginary Bella he was in amor and daydreamed marrying someday….
Suddenly Damien got up and slapped me in the face I flew to the árbol and hit it probably living a dent on it my clothes covered with blood but my body healed in seconds
-what the hell is your problem?
He asked his face all red
I called all the elements and charged them at him, Damien flew a couple miles away so I took advantage of his absence and ran away.
Chapter 10:
I was running as fast as I could but I knew it wasn’t enough and Damien could catch me at any segundo so I changed my direction and headed to the schools parking lot to get my bag and some money and drive to the airport. After a few segundos i go there and flashed through my car and drove away.
Edwards pov:
I was wondering what Bella was doing now ALONE in the jungle with Damien and picturing every way I could kill him
-edward….
Alice dicho but blacked out, having a vision I saw her vision with her and my dead corazón broke
Vision(alices pov):
Damien was dragging Bella (the same direction we saw him drag Bella earlier and disappeared)Bella was angry but he ignored her and continued dragging her then he stopped and and faced Bella a sweet/evil smile on his face then he sat on his knees and brought a beautiful black box out of his pocket and opened it a beautiful ring shine out of the box
-Bella will tu please marry me?
End of vision and back to Edwards pov
What Bella is going to marry that mutt!
-what did tu see Alice ?
Emmett dicho while eyeing me
-Damien proposing to Bella
-what? Seriously? What did she say?was she happy?
Emmett asked eager and I growled under my breath
Oh sorry edward Emmett thought and looked back at Alice
-I don’t know what she dicho but she definitely wasn’t happy…
-so lets go and see what's happening?
Jasper suggested
-no!
Rosalie half shouted
-I mean let give them some privacy….
Then she caught her reflection on angelas glasses and started admiring herself again
-look!
Jasper and Emmett dicho at the same time and gesturing their fingers towards bellas car then I saw, it Bella was running in an inhuman speed even faster than me! her body was covered in blood that made me very very angry for no reason then she got in her car and drove out of sight in a seconds.
-what was that all about?
Rosalie asked her thoughts around Bella and her happy ending with Damien..ugh! it made me sick!
-I don’t know
Alice dicho and looked at me I just shook my head
-lets go and see then!
Emmett dicho exited and grabbed my hand and dragged me out of the school
-wait for us!
Jasper and Alice dicho they were busy persuading Rosalie to come
-ok
Emmett dicho evily and walked faster.

vampiregirl16 i thought that it was really good b/c i wanted to see edwards reaction

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missing chapter one

posted by kayleebabee

"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward dicho hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 37

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

I hated seeing her cry. Knowing it was my fault immediately made me hate myself, not that I didn't already. I needed to hear her voice, know she was really here.

Some part of me registered the fact that I'd sat down, and that I had touched her, if briefly. I had said, "Tell me."

She met my gaze, looking terrified. She closed her eyes firmly, as if she was living a nightmare. Maybe she was.

"I know I hurt you, and I'm sorry," she whispered, looking anywhere but at me. "I thought it would be better that way, tu had your whole life ahead of tu and I couldn't take that away because of my...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 30

posted by BellaSwan636

Serena

"You have no idea what I've gone through!" the girl tearfully screams at me.
"You're right. I don't. I have no idea what you've gone through, but that doesn't mean I don't care," I say calmly.
"Why would tu care? tu don't even know me."
"And tu don't know me. How would tu know that I don't?"

Kayla hesitates a little before answering.

"Because sometimes, not even being related to someone is enough to make them want to care. My own goddamned mother didn't even stick around long enough for me to remember what she even looks like!"
"Growing up must have been pretty awkward."
"You have no idea,"...

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Broken Dreams Chapter 5

posted by BellaSwan636

Tia

When it comes to relationships, I'm no idiot. I could totally see what was coming. But come on; who didn't?

The new girl and Shaun. Plus he didn't like attack her o anything when she sat at his table. What was so special about her, anyway?

Sure she was pretty, but there where way prettier girls, who'd each thrown themselves at him, (he wasn't that bad looking, actually) he'd ignored since freshmen year.

I flicked my hair over my shoulder. I could see she liked him too, she'd looked around the cafeteria yesterday and looked way disappointed when he wasn't there.

So I waited a little after...

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Gods: Chapter 6: Love.....ugh

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

Later on that día when I am in my bedroom and Ethan is downstairs watching the game. I lay on my cama doing nothing but thinking. I hear my name being called I get up and walk downstairs. Ethan is at the door, someone is asking for me. I start to walk towards the door and see Adam he sees me and smiles I smile back. Ethan turns and sees me his expression is anger, he walks away. I walk up to Adam. “Hey, I didn’t see tu at school today” he said. I wondered how he knew where I lived and why was he here. “Ah yeah I’m a bit sick” I dicho putting on a husky voice. “I see that anyway,...

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The Powerful Word, "Because"

posted by Pushkin319

THE POWER OF BECAUSE

You're standing in a long line to pay for your groceries. Which sentence do tu think will get tu through?

1. "May I go ahead of tu please?" Put on a really sincere face.

2. "May I step ahead of tu please, because I'm really late for my doctor's appointment?"

Using the word "because" will get tu closer to 'yes' in almost any circumstance. Why? Because your request is followed por a reason, an explanation for the request. If the request is reasonable, then why not say yes?

The word refers the listener to some background, some circumstances, a framework related to the request....

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Poem: A was an Artist

posted by emmett

A was an Artist who wasted his talent
B rode a Bicycle and was very gallant
C was a Conductor with a musical ear
D was a Drunk, addicted to beer
E climbed Mt. Everest and achieved his goal
F was a Fireman and slid down a pole
G was a Glutton and ate what he got
H was a Hunter, a very good shot
I was an Ice skater with brand new skates
J was called Jane and couldn’t pay the rates
K was a King who ruled all the land
L was a Lady, a white guante on her hand
M was a Milkman who turned leche into cheese
N was a Nanny who made the children say please
O mined Opals and sold what he got
P was a Princess who bought...

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posted by Rob_patt_fan

hey... so this is my new story... I don't like the other one! So... I started this one! don't forget 2 comentario and rate!

Something was missing. Something big, like my heart! I couldn't find it. I got up from my own screams. I couldn't breathe. He wasn't there to hold me in his cold hands. He wasn't there anymore. I doubted if he would ever come back. I was thinking of everything I could do to get to him. Tears came down of my face and dropped on my almohada as I tried to stand up and go to the bathroom. Charlie was already downstairs so I hurried and made him breakfast. I didn't eat anything like...

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amor tu Always-Chapter 1

posted by Office_001

A little peak of sun shone in his window, yes! It was Saturday; Jake Scott loved Saturdays because these were the days when his mom, Terri, and he would go to the park for a picnic. Jake was so excited for today that he slept in his clothes though the were now wrinkled but he didn’t care. Creeping down the hall way quiet enough as to not wake his mom Jake went and made himself his favorito! cereal. Jake usually had his mom help him get his cereal because he was seven and short that he couldn’t reach the cabinet, but he wanted to surprise his mom, he wanted to make his own breakfast today....

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The Poetic Works of C.M. Wishine

posted by OneFoggyNight

(Please do note that these are poems I wrote in like two minutos so yeah they might not be that great...)

***You'll never be alone***

Even through the toughest times
Someone will always be there
If tu have friends
You’ll never be solo
Even if it doesn’t go right
Even if tu think tu might die
If tu have friends
You’ll make it to the end
Even though it all seems to fade
Receding in the darkest night
Having friends
Makes it all go away
Times may be bad
Times may be good
But if tu have friends
You’ll never be alone
______________________________

***No Going Back***

Believe not this lie ive told
I am not...

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posted by housefrk

For those of tu who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that tu like the best, let me know in the comentarios o in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...

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Today's a lost Cause - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?

And let the día go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you

There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...

Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.

Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...

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Bleed - A poem

posted by Sweet_Pants

Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last

Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...

She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...

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posted by Bella_Swan3

If tu spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would tu take it? If tu had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would tu still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the cuchillo to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...

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missing chapter 3 restrictions.

posted by kayleebabee

The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting más and más annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...

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missing chapter 2. Race.

posted by kayleebabee

Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do tu think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...

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Different Worlds - Chapter 2

posted by Bella_Swan3

She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening por the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...

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posted by summerfrog

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Murphy
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posted by Lindy52

Chapter Sixteen

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posted by sweetpea92

    CHAPTER ONE
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