escritura Article: The Darkness (A Poem)

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posted by sapherequeen

*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of escritura I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two minutos ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...

I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m stuck in a world
A world too unbearable
To live
To breathe
To smile

A world where everyone
Is like a manikin

They’re perfectly still
They smile all the time
They sit there all the time
They just look at tu endlessly
And of course
They never feel

I don’t belong in that world
I have to leave that world
I have to breathe
I want to breathe
All
I Want
Is To Be Free
From the Hurting Zone
From the Dark Zone
The Twilight Zone where I
Am Trapped
Trapped
And Broken

God, please help me
Listen to me

Am I
The Only One
Who Can Feel
Who Can See
Who Will Know the Pain Inside of Me

Please God,
What Is My Purpose?

Immediately want to say this is not about me in general. :)

What do tu think?

medouri, Nice-Guy and 10 others like this

June4 this is nice and i love it, i'll save it!!!

sapherequeen Awww, thank you :D

rkrahu real think you give that is all of us have but no one think of that thanks for remembering this

KusjSann Beautiful poem! I relate to some of the parts: a lot of my friends were like manikins, and i just wanted to break free from that fake world! So: Loved it!

lilacool it's pretty ur like realy talented! but make it rhyme the next time!

anime_lover It's nice :)

stephlutz Awesome!!!!!

djsheshe i like it. :)

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posted by sawfan13

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posted by Insight357

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posted by Insight357

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posted by xXxEmoRAwRxXx

Yeah I know it sucks I was bored when I wrote this....so yeah. [Chapter 1]
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Chapters 9 and 10 of my book-Flame Boy-

posted by coolie

Chapter 9

Patrick
Jason walked into the room that he heard the sound from. There, was a human boy wearing glasses, and cupped to the wall. He looked slightly older than Jason.

“Who are you?” asked Jason.

“I’m Patrick,” the boy said, straining his throat.

“How did tu get here?” Asked Jason.

Still struggling, Patrick said,” I was in a play, in my school, Santa Clara High, and I had a flame on my two legs, cause that was part of my character. Then I walked to the school across the calle to pick up my younger brother. Before I could get my brother, I randomly walked into this room with...

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posted by Insight357

“I can’t get tu out of my head either,” I said. Voices broke loose in my head, and I fought to push them all back.
    “What are we going to do then?” he asked unaware of the chaos in my mind.
    “What do tu mean?” I asked confused.
    “We both have feelings for each other. We can’t just ignore it,” Alexander said.
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posted by para-scence

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posted by Insight357

    “Damien, that was years ago,” dicho Alexander as his cheeks turned a light pink.
    “I know, and I don’t understand why the memory is resurfacing now,” I dicho shaking my head slightly.
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The Marred Reflection ~ poem

posted by nomblahnom

As I stare listlessly into the mirror, the fuzzy image that gazes back at me is someone I barely recognize. But I do. They say prison causes profound changes in a man, and the most extraordinary stem from the most incredible circumstances. That man in the mirror has undergone an unimaginable plethora of alterations because he is the absolute worst thing one can be in prison: an innocent man.

I detect the bitterness in his hazel eyes, the constant worry that wrinkles his forehead, the anxiety that sets his jaw like cement and the frustration that has lightened his hair from brown to salty beige....

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posted by Insight357

por the time, I reached Social Services noon had come. I walked inside the one-story, brick building. I looked around the large, blue-walled room the door had revealed. I didn’t see Lucy.
    A curvy, dark-toned woman come up to me. She had curly black hair, and brown eyes.
    “You must be, Damien,” dicho the woman. I nodded.
    “And tu are?” I knew she was a social worker, but that’s all.
    “I’m Stacey, Stacey Sterns,” she said.
    “You’re Lucy’s worker, right?”
    “Yes,...

Faith: The Girl Near The Pond at Midnight *story version* Ch2

posted by sawfan13

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posted by HouseMindFreak

Chapter 17

“Who killed them?!” Koda growled.
Iah was trying to keep Koda calm; from his few encounters with this one he knew anger was Koda’s worst enemy.
“I am not sure…” he replied softly.
“How can tu not know!?” he screamed, charging after Iah. He dug his fingers into Iah’s chest as they turned to claws, slamming him to the ground, his dark red eyes bored into Iah’s sending dark chills through his mind. “You know everything else but tu don’t know who killed them?”
Iah cringed in pain, trying to speak.
“I do not know but…I have a feeling who may have done…it”...

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Psychoanalysis: Chapter 5

posted by Insight357

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I walked to work. The asylum was only three blocks away. As I walked I worried over people criticizing me. Or, making fun of me. What if I treated the wrong patient? What if I messed something up? What if I got lost?
My stomach started to tighten as I thought of the day...

Unforgivable Ch. 8

posted by para-scence

His hair was a medium brown. He was so tiny too. Even now, I could see my features in him... and Ty's. I stood there motionless, looking at the little thing in the suitcase crying and throwing his arms and legs in every direction.. Lucy had dicho once tu saw that little baby, you'd instantly fall in amor with it. It must not work on all people. I felt nothing for this thing.

I picked it up, re-wrapping the sweater around him. His body was warm; I could nearly feel it through the sweater. I closed the car door and locked it, and went for a walk. The baby continued to cry in my arms, and that...

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Unforgivable Ch. 5

posted by para-scence

A little while after the holidays, Alice left for California. It wasn't long before I felt the despair of loneliness. Alice was the only one I've really talked to for months. Once she was gone, for the first time in a long time it felt like I had really run away. Not like I had gone to a seguro haven, but like I really was in an unfamiliar town.

I went to work , and Alice had only been gone for two days. Work just wasn't fun that day. I found it harder to be nice to rude customers, and the día seemed endless.

"Yeah, Alice kind of brings light to this place, huh?" Georgie, the cook asked. I nodded...

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Unforgivable Ch. 2

posted by para-scence

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posted by Insight357

    I stepped outside the asylum doors onto the sidewalk. A blonde-haired, blue-eyed woman stood looking at me. She stood about 5’7”, and was my age. She walked over to me, and took my hands.
    “I’ve already talked to Dr. Laveney. Your siguiente appointment has been set-up, and tu have three refills on your meds,” Grey said. She had always been on parte superior, arriba of things, literally. “Come on,” she pulled on my hand, toward the lot.
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Rhinestones: Chapter 4

posted by StarWarsFan7

I start changing into my purple tank parte superior, arriba and blue denim jeans as soon as I get home. Thinking about Dustin and how he ended up in the hospital is...tough. The police dicho he crashed into a telephone pole when he hung up off the phone. I feel like everything is my fault! Hopefully he gets better soon. "Mrow?" My cat named Puma meows. "I'll be back." I start. I grab my magenta bolso, monedero off the wooden dresser. "I have some work to do."

When I say 'work' I mean it. I shut the door behind me leading outside to the driveway. My mom quickly opens the door and pops her head out like a groundhog about to...

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A Dream

posted by ambers1999

CH1 A Dream
I wake up on a shiny sliver mesa, tabla that I can bearly see my reflection in. Two men are beside me smiling down, I get up off the mesa, tabla one of the men try to grab my arm but I shake him off."Give off me" I dicho shaking. I started to run but as I turn the corner I drop on my butt and put my hand over my mouth. With my boyfriend right in fornt of me."Get in there tu stupid mutt" one of the fat guys snared."Jason I'm scared whats happening"? Suddenly I pop my eyes open and almost fall out the bed, but I catch myself."It's just a dream Sandy, just a dream" I told my self in sigh of reilf....

Thoughts of ashes pt.2

posted by Supergirl14

The club
We got to “Club monstruo” Their was the bouncer who really smiled when I showed up he let me in and looked at my friends with discontent, “They are with me, Mitchell!”He smiled again, “any friend of Angela is a friend of mine,”He replied in his gruff voice.
Smoke and strobe lights, half-dressed girls and boys dancing filled the room, “where is Juli,"I yelled, a girl almost half my size(I am 6'5)black hair /w pale rosado, rosa streaks in a messy bun came in, the bulimic look did not fit her, she looked like a skank and did not look good as one. “ready to get it good?” I asked."only...