escritura Article: Nature's perfect killing machine

posted by ZekiYuro

The Australian cocodrilo is the largest cocodrilo in the world.It can grow up to seven metres long and the biggest can weigh up to 1000 kilos.It has only 2 muscles to open its mouth but 40 to close it!

What makes crocodiles so dangerous is that they attack incredibly quickly and they take their victims under the water to drown them.They usually attack in the water,but they can suddenly come out of a river and attack animales o people,and they can run on land at 17km/h.

Every año in Australia there are cocodrilo attacks on humans.2 years hace a 24-year-old German tourist died when she went for a swim in a lake.Although there were signs warning people that there might be crocodiles,the girl and her friends decided to have a midnight swim.The girl suddenly disappeared and siguiente morning her body was found.Near it was a four-metre crocodile.And only last mes 2 Australian boys watched in horror as their friend was killed por a cocodrilo when they were washing their moutain bikes in a river.They climbed a árbol and stayed there for 22 hours while the cocodrilo waited below.

But tu CAN survive a cocodrilo attack.Last año Norman Pascoe,a 19-year-old,was saved from a cocodrilo when his aunt hit it on the nose.Norman's aunt said:'I hit it and I shouted,"Help!"The cocodrilo suddenly opened its mouth and my nephew escaped.'

Try My Life (Chapter 2)

posted by mitchie19

2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a estrella on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. pato, drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...

Yeah, Me; The Nerd: Chapter one.

posted by cute20k

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student o something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When tu know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...

Darkened Bliss: 5th and 6th page - Chapter One

posted by Heya

“What?!” I half cried. I grabbed his camisa, camiseta and gasped from the air in my throat wanting to get out.
    “Get ready, we are going to be late. tu okay?” he asked calmly. You, go, away, my inner self told me.
    “I’m fine. Bye. I’ll be down in a minute.” I said, softly releasing my tight grip on Looi’s white t-shirt. After about 20 minutos of getting knots out of my hair, getting my capa to button, and getting my tote bag ready for school, Looi yelled, “Let’s go!” and I heard him shuffle down the stairs.
    As...

Darkened Bliss: segundo Page - Chapter one

posted by Heya

If I took three showers, and washed with 15 shampoos, my hair would still be enredados after an hour. Looi, my brother, always dicho my hair looked like I dyed it, when I didn’t. I looked down, my shoes were already on with the black shoe laces. I felt like I needed to barf. At least that’s what it felt like. Greeting hopped on the counter and stared at me. The brown cat pelaje, piel was splotched with black dots and white lines. She is a different cat, that’s why I like her. I looked back at the mirror. Well, tu look terrible today, I thought.
“Greeting, tu can’t look...

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Welcome to Birchmoss vista previa & Chapter 1

posted by cassie-1-2-3

This is something I'm working on.. It's the first long piece I've attempted. People often told me I'm too good at imagery and descripción to write anything short. Perhaps I use too much imagery? I'm curious about what tu guys think.

I already know it's a bit shakey at some parts. I still need to do some revising. I revise every time I finish lectura a book. I feel each book teaches me más and más about writing.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Welcome to Birchmoss
preview
(This was just a part of my planning and organization. It is subject to change)

Violet kept her skeletons right where they belonged. Hidden away...

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amor kills chapter 12 part 1

posted by hannah_vampire

thxs for the comentarios plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it más hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before tu say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...

Kingdom Hearts: Ansem's Return 2. New and Mysterious

posted by DestinyGirl

Thanks to all those who read the last chapter, oh, and please be apart of the War of Hearts Rp!!! It's really fun to do!:D

~2. New and Mysterious

Suddenly, a great light shone before me in the dark. And the Key responded to it, so - as if on instinct - I lifted the magic Key and pointed it right at the light. I heard a sound, like a door opening, and suddenly I was engulfed in the pleasant warmth of light.

Very slowly, I opened my eyes and blinked a few times until my vision cleared. I immediately saw tall town-like buildings, a white stoned ground (the ground I was sitting on), and clear, open...

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slaven

posted by serenacullen93

I wish that my mother was here that stupid drunk driver had never been born it was my fault that she died that she is now six feet under the ground . I remember that night like it was yesterday I had snuck out with my friends to go to this party down town . Things got out control I called my mom from the side of the road for my mother to come get me one of the guys from the party zoomed down the road and hit my mother head on . I saw it I was right out side the car I saw the red hot metal cut into my mother flesh ending her life with one feel-swoop like the cut of a blade. The ones who should...

Howling At The Moon Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

(this is realistic-fiction, some parts are true and some are false. that should become evident as time goes on ^.^)

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Everything fell when David left.

I never understood why. He was just a friend to me at that time, and friends back then were any people that I could get in a conversation with. They were people that listened. And really, seeing him leave was just as normal as any of my other friends that left during that year. There was nothing too it; I would convince myself over and over again that he would eventually come back, and that we might even meet up in the future and talk about our...

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amor kills chapter 8 part 1

posted by hannah_vampire

I sat on the table, Wondering why my dad was so pissed off not just at me but also at something else the doctor dicho that it would healing very fast dont ask me how but he dicho it would.

2 Weeks later

I healed really quick to my suprise even though i didn't believe what he dicho was true for some reson I felt like it was and what do tu know it was. I drove to school thinking how it could be true and having that guys vocie in my head i mean my dad lying to me but why?.

When i got out of my car, I decided to go sit on one of the tables were soon after i was joined por one of the vampire freak show's...

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A Flaming Wonderment

posted by starwarsfangirl

I wrote this is five minutes. Not that good, I know.
It's in the point of view of a fire.
It's in a fireplace in a living room.
Hope tu enjoy.
Read to the rhythym tu would
'The Night Before Christmas'

I flickered and jumped
and sat on the logs
and watched as the human
kicked off his clogs.

The dog soon followed
and sat por his side
and they soon were asleep
and my flame soon died.

But a flicker did linger
and I wondered a bit.
When would be the siguiente time
that I would be lit?

-starwarsfangirl
5/4/10

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amor bites ch. 5

posted by Funnygirl77

After a long día of school and making new friends Kisa is tired, but happy. She starts on her inicial work and is finish with in ten minutes. Then she starts on math her hardest subject, it takes her fifteen minutos to finish. When she is done she text Erick and a bunch of her other friends, They all agree to meet at the mall. Kisa asked Zack if he wanted to come and he shook his head.
"NO thanks моя влюбленность"(my love) "I am fine" Kisa smiles and turns to leave "goodbye принц ночи" (good bye prince of the night)Zack was not shocked that Kisa knew about him. "she is...

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Falling Like Hell

posted by EmoKidSteven

I am bored with love
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two por fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make amor to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the rosas are dying

Lisa and Minrough chapter 4

posted by Flana_2

We walked down back to what I thought was his house. It was actually his tiny hospital hut.
“You healed me”?
“Yeah. On your head. tu were banged up pretty hard.” He dicho that with pride and a smile. At least there was that. He could heal people that make them amor him, it fills him with so much joy. I sat down on the tiny cama and tried to think about my past, if I could remember the ocean ride here. I thought hard but it didn’t come back to me. Hmmm I wondered why, why can’t I remember a single thing about sleeping o riding o anything? Minrough read my...

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Still of the night ch.24

posted by TeamRosalieHale

24: Victim of the Game

The rest of the trip was in relative silence. Rosalie seemed ok after a while, even talking to Luke and Michael. To Jack, she spoke with her mind only. Tristan had gone to his room-to work on something though what no one knew. At long last the carriage came to an abrupt and Tristan came out, his face grim.
“That bad?” Jack asked, looking up at him.
He didn’t answer, just looked down. “What?” Rosalie asked him, sensing that something big had been kept from her.
No one answered, they all silently got off but Rosalie was not done. “What is going on? Jack?”...

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Still of the night ch.9

posted by TeamRosalieHale

9: tu and Me

“So Tristan, how do tu fit into all this?” Alice asked him. He was sitting on a chair closest to the front of the carriage. He looked up from his book and sighed.
“Well, I was created in 1408, por two warlocks known as Magna and Dejan. They took me and molded me into the perfect creature-a creature with the ability to change into anything at will-human, animal, whatever-telepathy, soothsayer, I was the perfect creature. But there are some limits even the could not look past though they are few: I can’t grant wishes, not the way a genie can, I can’t kill anyone at all,...

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Still of the night ch.5

posted by TeamRosalieHale

5: Remember Me This Way

After the initial shock had worn off, Rosalie and Alice had spent most of afternoon outside, neither finding it in them to function. Alice had gone inside the house-Rosalie still could not bring herself to do it-and after quickly gathering some clothing and other practical items for them she had quickly returned. She had silently placed a small bag at Rosalie’s feet and sat down siguiente to her again.
A short time later, the two looked up as Sam, Embry, and Jared came through the trees just in front of them. Sam simply looked at the girls before saying “so, everything...

trentxjamie

posted by Fangirl99

jamie is a beautiful girl. she has long ,blond hair,she has a rosado, rosa camisa, camiseta and dark blue jeans. she was the cousin of lindsey.
she was walking her dog,sweetie,when,jamie tripped on a rock. she thn fell into the arms of trent.
'hell," he said.
"thnks for saving me,abd hi."
"you okay?"
"yeah,but,i,need to rest,and my house is pretty far from here.
"you can com,e over. i live across."
"thanks,um,"
"trent."
"trent."
they went to trents house,and they went up to his rom

"and this is my room."
i had a gray wall,with gutiar poster,and a bed.closet,drawers and other things.
"wow,thats a cool room."
"thanks."
"listen,do tu have a girlfreind?"
"no,why?'
"i dont,do tu wanna go out?"
"okay."
"so.."
then trent kissed jamie,and thats hat went on for the rest of the day.

the buscar chapter 2

posted by Fangirl99

i dindnt say anything for a minute,then i spoke.

'do tu know why?"

'well,she dicho something about an old friend in texas." izzy told me.

"you dont think.."

"maybe.where else could she have gone?"

"come por my house after school,i have plan."

After school,izzy came over.We went to my room.

"what are we gonna do?"izzy asked,as soon as she walked in the room.

"wee gonig to find aslee" i siad,trying to sound as serious as possible.

"youre kidding,right? i mean,where are we gonna go?"izzy said.

"texas"

she stared at me.Blankly.Not saying a thing.As if she was gonna drop dead.

"izzy?"i asked,trying to get her back to reality.

"you must be on drugs," she said

"what?"

"youve got to be joking me.i mean,your mom is not gonig to take us,my mom is dead,and theres no way ere gonna..wait...your not saying?

"yep,wee going to texas"

misceláneo poems

posted by Fangirl99

poem 1:the world

the sun shines bright
there's day,and there's night
both are beautiful sights
this is the world

Winter,spring,summer,and fall
is a magical season
so there is no reason
for tu to hate
seasons so great

we are all one
we need the sun
we need the air
we all care
about the world

poem 2:love

there is something above
we cant see it
we cant bee it
but we all know what it is
it is love

amor is what we need
to live,to breath
to be what we can be
we all need love

amor is power
amor is strong.
thats why amor songs
are so very strong

Poem 3:run (this one isnt all that good)

in the sun
is where i run
away from here
ill not be near

Something that will kill me
something that can be
so deadly and strong
and can kill me with a song

thats why i run
in the sun
i still remember tu hum.
im sorry i must run.