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posted by Harrypotter148
I'm not a fan of this but I would like to know what everyone thinks about this little section of Chapter 1. Please be nice when it comes to the spelling, I do understand I need to work, and sometimes spell check does not always have the right word. So please tell me what tu think, I would just like to know if it sound okay.


Fight Your Destiny

    Aria Glass stood in the small cocina watching everyone was they pondered the news they were just told. She wanted to sit down, but every time she did, an annoying discomfort washed over her forcing her to stand. Everyone was on edge, wanting to hear what Kal had to say. This was the first time he had ever come to see them and was alone, so this had to be important.
    “The others are planning something.” Kal dicho his voice serious, and he was looking Aria, Jared and Toby in the eyes. “Something they don’t want me to know,”
    “And why the hell not?” Jared said, his usual annoyed expression on his face, it seemed like it was permit when Healers came. Both Aria and Jared’s bother Toby wished he would easy up a little, especially on Kal; he had been the nicest to them since all this Healer crap happened.     
    “Because, they think I will try to stop them.” Then Kal moved his focus to Aria, “And they are right. I am your protector, and if there is anything that could parentally harm you; I will stop it.” Aria gave a weak smile to him. At least they had someone on their side.
    “Well that’s good to know” Jared muttered relaxing back into his chair.
    “What do we do? They won’t listen to Aria o you, so what now?” Toby asked taking a long sip of his cerveza as he sat atop the cocina counter.
    “We do the same to them” Aria dicho before Kal could speak, “We don’t listen to them, ignore their request, o demands. If they are going to keep things from us, and plan things behind Kal’s back, then screw them. I will not be pushed around por a group of holy assholes.” Everyone agreed to this, even Kal. Just por the look on his face, the three of them could tell Kal was getting sick of his fellow Healers as much as they were.
    “They are not going to like this,” Kal said, but there was a hint of a smile tugging at his lips, which he tried desperately to hide. “But” he continued after a moment, “They cannot harm you, o Jared and Toby”
    “Kal, just because they cannot, does not mean that won’t “ Toby dicho with a frown. But he was right, almost all the Healers they have met have been a royal pain in the ass, all had a temper. But Kal was nothing like them, he was so much different, he looked, acted and treated them differently, and the trio was not the only ones to notice either. That is not a good thing, Aria could tell the Healers hated it when things did not go there way, well here comes there biggest wakeup call. Things were about to change, and not for the best.
    “So tu think your lame culo Healers will do anything to you?” Jared asked, and for the first time being the first to make eye contact with Kal without being forced.
    “I’m not sure, they all do have tempers, and we will have to see. But don’t worry about me; I can fight my own battles. tu three are far más important anyway.”
    Aria did not por that crap; he was not going to be a martyr, not for them. But she let it go deciding it is best to bring it up if necessary. It just seemed like everyone was ready to jump into battle for her, but if she was the key to everything, then why can’t she fight her own battled? No matter what anyone says, they are not going to die fighting a battle that was meant for her while she sits in the sidelines.
    To be honest Aria hated being the center of attention, and here she was in the middle of everything. For Christ sake, she just found out she was one of them, a Healer. Well she was only 50% Healer, but they still considered her one of them. Although they told her crap, she was still part of the bigger picture, and they needed her, she was the key to everything. She had powers, o abilities that the others did not, her human half and Healer half mixed made one mean son of a bitch. But she did not care about power, she cared about her family, (Toby and Jared) and about trying to keep the world save from Demons. After all that is her job, o was, now she had a lot más on her plate and such little room. There was barely enough el espacio to breath.
    “Well that’s one más thing we have to worry about,” Again Jared muttered, but everyone ignored him.
    “Kal, we need to know más information, like how to kill these things.”
    “I’m sorry Toby; I am not allowed to discuss that information. I might be – indifferent about what the others may be doing, but I still have rules to cover, and I cannot break all of them for you.”
    “So now tu are going to keep secrets from us?” Jared barked, standing up and walking with tense shoulder to the fridge for another beer. “Well” Jared continued waving his cerveza in the air, “’that’s just great!”
    “Jared, tu have to understand, I have rules, restrictions! If I tell you, the moment I return to headquarters, they will demand my head on a stick. So sorry if I am a bit concerned with keeping myself alive so none of tu die!” There was rage, in Kal’s eyes, something they had never seen before. He clenched his hand into a fist and then released, a new form of determination in his eyes,
    Jared made a face but kept his mouth shut for once, he always believed the Healers were in it for themselves, because most of them were, but not all. Kal was one of them, but Jared refused to believe that he was unlike the others. Both Toby and Aria believed it, they had hope, but that was something Jared was lacking. Something he lost a long time ago, but it was strange, when Toby was on the edge of crazy, Jared did everything he could to help his brother, and that was mostrando him there was still hope left, and it worked.
    But yet, Jared still remained stone cold.
hI EVERYONE THIS ONES GOING TO BE SHORT BUT VERY IMPORTANT SOOOO READ ON.............................


I walked up the stairs dragging my bag behind me, once i reached my bedroom, I threw my bag in the corner and threw myself onto my bed. And i began to cry, i cried about every little problem i have ever had. My Mum, Zane and his freinds, Damon, and all the things that irritate me. i didnt stop untill my dad drove into the drive way. i quickly ran into the bathroom and washed my face.
"Belle?" Mike shouted from the kitchen, i quickly jogged down the stairs and smiled when i saw him.
"Yeah?"...
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I missed the air particles at Ethan's place. Here, running away from something that's not even chasing me, the air particles manage to croak; "Run, run, run."
And then it hit me. What I was really running away from was chasing me. I was running away from my emotions and I didn't realize that they were, in fact, backpacked onto me. They were heavily weighing down on my back. My back felt fragile, broken... like my heart.
I felt like crashing to the ground. The thick tears and emotions were superior, rising above me. The día before at school when I nearly melted my esophogaus, I felt numb,...
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fecha Night *sequel to Prom Night*
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: the night of my life
Anne was sitting at the cocina mesa, tabla when Jordon came in with Lucy and the twins, Mia and Joey crawling behind. Anne said, “What’s up?” Jordon didn’t answer. He looked mad at Anne. Anne sighed. “Jordon-talk to me.” She begged. He rolled his eyes and went upstairs. Anne got her cell phone and called Hannah. “Hannah, its Anne. Call me back. Thanks.” She left a message. Then she called Haley, “Hey.” Haley said. “What’s wrong?” “Jordon stopped talking to me.” She said. “Oh,...
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posted by mitchie19
8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T


My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the corazón monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...
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So Tom Closes The door...and heads back into The bathroom With bill.
"That was Gustav" Tom said.
"what did he want" bill asked
"he was Wonderin if we was Ready" Tom Replied.
"Well mabye we..." bill dicho but got inurupted por Tom Saying
"Shh." He dicho as he licked The parte superior, arriba of his Nips softly.
"mmmmm Tomi u Gustav." bill moaned.
"and Wats The point Wats n america 4 us?" Tom Asked
"i dont know but u should stop" bill said.
"mmm o billy u Know u Want it," Tom moaned. bill looked at the ducha, ducha de head as Tom Took off his pants. Tom Then looked billnin his Eyes.
"is This Wrong?" Bill asked
"im not sure. but i...
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This Story begans with a man. And his Brother Tom. Tom Was 20 yrs old n Played Gutiar in a band called Tokio hotel. Tom Was cacasin n had dirty blonde long dreads. Always Wore Gucci Close n Fifty59s (Type of hat) he Was 6,2. his Twin Brother bill on the Other Hand. had blk long Hair like a lion. Cacasin n Dresses Rocker Style 6'2. Wears Make up n Nail polish. n is The lead Singer in Tokio hotle. in That band r 2 Other mebers of That band Gustav n George
Gustav has Short Hair big Glases n is The Drumer. George has Shighty long hair down 2 his Sholders n Was The bajo Gutairest. This band n These...
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They say it was like small estrella falling from the sky. o meteorite. was it these? No. It was just POOKIE.
From the heavens he fell, crashing into the ground. God! what was that smell? It was pookie's one final toot.

pookie was rushed to the vet. will he survive? the docotors couldn't belive what they saw.. he had a few broken bones from the fall, and segundo degree burns on his butt.
The nurse looked at the doctor. "what does this mean?" she asked. and the doctor replied. "Beans"

Pookie had healed fast. he was realeased. and dado ointment for his ass.
Free at last! Go! pookie go! Pookie ran for...
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Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought tu here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are tu guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampiros like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...
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Katherine’s POV
I leaned off the muro smiling. “I can tell that tu didn’t miss me.” I dicho turning to Stefan my smile fading.
I turned back to Damon smiling. “I can’t tell much if tu miss me with all that ‘I amor tu Elena.” I glided my hands over his perfectly sculpted abs. His camisa, camiseta so thin tu could feel every little curve.
My fingers moving up his stomach one por one. “You seem to amor Elena so much, have tu ever wanted to tasted her blood, because I know I’ve been dying to.” I dicho running my thumb over his lower lip.

Damon’s POV
From the moment she spoke my body...
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Chapter 3

Jeremy POV
Every thing was getting dizzy, I didn’t understand any thing that happened at the house, all I know is Uncle John is dead, there’s two Elena’s and I’m turning.
I could here the car running things were heightened. I could here all the gears moving to a rhythm. Elena was breathing hard I could feel her body heat radiating off of her.
“Elena, I need it now o its over.” My throat was dry I turned towards Elena and could see her veins flowing with blood. Every thing then went black.”

Elena’s POV
I pulled the car over and took a deep breath. The last time I did this...
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As I weave through dark allies, trying to make my way home, everything feels wrong. It's día time and there is crickets chirping. The moon is shining along with bright stars while the brilliant sun sleeps. Annabella was not there. This time, it wasn't Annabella and I running away from one of our idiotic but awesome stunts. I was running for a different reason. I needed to get inicial so I could cry. I needed to sit there in my crying corner and let the tears flow. I did not make it inicial in time. I collapse onto the harsh cement and burst into tears, right there in an alley.
Hours pass. I lose...
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Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s día party. Just a few más steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...
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Hey..x
Sorry it's been so long (been on holiday and trying to like choose all my exam choices for año 10)lifes been pretty hetic but enough of my life!!! Last time I left off Nessie and jake were going to keep their baby and now we visit them 9 months later. No one actually knows what to expect but the exact being of Aimme (youll know who she is when tu read the chapter) will be discovered in the siguiente chapter. Also tu would have noticed that this chapter is from Jakes point of veiw I had a fab time escritura it and I hope tu enjoy lectura it eaqually as much! Thankz for lectura and please...
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posted by amethyst44
 Never did I think that the person I was to face would be the beginning of a war I never wanted to get involved in.
Never did I think that the person I was to face would be the beginning of a war I never wanted to get involved in.
I sat confused and dazed, looking at the numbers that swam before my eyes. There was the dull humming the back of my mind that reminded me I done this essay with years and years of repitition, but there was no confidence in me that proved the evidence. I slumped back in my seat, tossing the pencil across the escritorio and closing my eyes, drifting into a light sleep.

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The forest brimmed with vibrant lights, glowing sharply beyond the bramble of branches and approaching the lake in the background. Drinks were passed around cheerfully, and the fuego roared with appreciative boldness. Dance music...
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1: New York Minute
Choices.
We make them everyday, all day. Most of the time, the ones we do make are small and insignificant to our lives: what we wear, what we eat, which way we go to work, and the things we comprar for. All are mundane and we hardly think twice when we make them.
With age, the amount of choices we make and the consequences of them are más severe than mommy and daddy grounding us: whether o not to take that hit from the joint, whether o not to drive inicial after one too many beers, whether o not to cheat on a test o a significant other, whether o not to race the guy in the...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what tu think of it, please?


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Have tu felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until tu burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! tu will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.
 For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the perrito, cachorro tu always wished for to follow tu around.
For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the puppy you always wished for to follow you around.
It always starts with darkness. Just like the rumors that vampiros were made to sign Satan's book with blood as the registration, it was thought that a vampire's soul was consumed por darkness. For the first couple months, that's what it really feels like; darkness, always there like the perrito, cachorro tu always wished for to follow tu around. Sadly, I never had a puppy, so this was all awkwardly new to me.
"That's how it's going to be for a while." Adrian told me one día while I woke up from a deep sleep, facing the sunlight. I had forgotten that we were now affected por that sunlight más than humans....
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 tu may think that vampiros are the most godly creatures on earth, but it takes más than just a bite to be beautiful.
You may think that vampires are the most godly creatures on earth, but it takes more than just a bite to be beautiful.
When those three were together, they represented the family I never had.
Adrian was just Adrian; even though he was astonishingly ragged in appearance, there was something about him that symbolized him being the younger brother. He was dangerous, fast, and cunning with his tongue. I almost thought, that one time I saw him and Marcus battle it out, that Marcus should just give up before he got himself killed. Of course, Marcus knew that already, and they weren't even really fighting to begin with. With what started with growls and ferocious snapping ended up being laughs and pats on the shoulder....
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 But I guess this is the price for not agreeing with a vampire.
But I guess this is the price for not agreeing with a vampire.
I woke up to the wailing of birds in the distance and the acrid smell of compost nearby. I couldn't see; it appeared that the night sky blended in with the darkness behind my eyelids when closed. I felt my body plastered against a marble slab that was the same length as my being, and sweat was misted against my skin. Strangely, the only way I could tell this was por leaning my head down to take a peek, realizing my skin was so white that it would be hard to tell if I had any blood at all in my body. My flesh felt numb, and shivering once brought my senses into a lighter view, but only enough...
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posted by HarryPLover
 "Do tu see the "Game Over"sign?
"Do you see the "Game Over"sign?
Enough is enough,right?After tu feel like tu just got punched into the stomach fifty times should be enough to let tu know that tu should stop fighting...right?When tu can literally feel your corazón ready to burst out of your chest and your soul completely crumble into pieces, pieces that travel all the way down to your toes?

You'll know when your corazón is torn...right?

Well I know that mine is,completely actually.After tu just lost the one person tu thought tu would be with forever.After giving them so many chances,that tu ran out.Now that they're gone.....gone with your ex-best friend.After...
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