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dang it, writer's block, can tu help me, i will tell tu the last few paragraphs so tu can tell whats going on

“Oh wow Ryuu, tu have 2 swords, tu must be a samurai now just like your father” she says with excitement. “Yes I am Sakura” “hey Ryuu tu don’t mind if I….” she pulls the katana out of the vaina, funda and swings it a few times. “Sakura your not supposed to use full size swords” I say “what are tu going to reportar me” she says taunting me and running into the woods. She did the same thing when I got my bokken; she took it and ran of into the woods and she started using it to cut down branches on a tree, so I can only expect that she will do the same now so for the sake of the árbol I ran in after her.
    I catch up to her and another samurai is near her and he draws his sword. I told her she shouldn’t have run off with a katana. I draw my wakizashi and charge at the other samurai. The samurai tries to bring his sword down on Sakura but I block his sword with mine. “Ryuu you’re here.” Sakurai cries. I take my katana from her and hold it in my right hand and the wakizashi in my left. The samurai goes for me and tries to slash at me horizontally. I block the attack with my wakizashi. The samurai brings his sword for a vertical slash but I put my katana in a position to strike horizontally and slash before he can attack. My sword cuts into his chest and causes blood to spurt out of the wound in the samurai’s chest where my sword hit.

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if tu want to read the whole thing i will be posting it in the samurai fanclub when its done
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Silverain said:
Wow! I like the action in this scene:) I'd like to know a little más so I can understand whats going on in the whole story. But so far its good. From here tu could have them attacked por the fallen Samurai's commrands o tu could discover that the dead samurai is someone very important and a price is put on there heads to capture o kill them? If I knew más about it I could give something better but thats what I got:) Hope this helps!
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i might go with that, thank tu
katana64 posted hace más de un año
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You're welcome and good luck:)
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mpepin04 said:
tu have great story- siguiente time remember "Oh wow Ryuu," tu write it"not like Öh wow Ryuu" a comma.
I can't really help that much it's good- just calm down and the words will natrully flow to your head. Go outside and sit down and really think, but don't think too hard. Enjoy.
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thats a good idea, i will remember that
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3nala said:
I can't make any suggestions, cuz I don't have any, but try listening to música for some ideas. It's my cure for writer's block!
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im listening to música now :)
katana64 posted hace más de un año
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I just think that it may help when tu know the lyrics. It helps me with my story. I would listen (if i were escritura your story) to something up-tempo... but it's great that you've tried ;) It doesn't really work for some people.
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well the songs i was listening to didnt have lyrics, video game themes and stuff like that
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