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posted by twilight-7
I looked down at the boy por my side. His hair once a golden colour was now a dirty blond and his bouncy curls were all matted. He held his right arm in his left hand. It was broken and I knew it was very painful for him. He didn’t once whimper o scream o moan in pain. He was very brave.
“Kyo?” I said, quietly.
He looked up at me, his green eyes holding so much intelligence. I saw a flicker of pain cruzar, cruz his pale and dirty face.
“Yes, Father?” he replied, his voice shaking slightly. It was cold outside I knew that but I didn’t think that was the reason his voice shook. We were in one of the coldest and rainiest places in the USA. Trust that man to pick here to live. All I could see as I walked down to his house was trees and más trees. But it kept him hidden and I hoped it kept us seguro too.
“We’re going to be okay,” I told him. I kept my own voice strong and my thoughts positive. “We’ll be seguro from now on.”
Kyo nodded. But I could sense the doubt inside him. It would be a long time before that doubt evaporated. Poor child. Everything he knows and trusts has been violently turned upside down. Everyone he loves is either against him o dead.
“She’s in a seguro place now, isn’t she?” he asked me though not looking at me. “I mean, she isn’t hurting now?”
Loretta.
“Yes, son, she is.”



I woke with a start, tears streaming down my cheeks.
Loretta.
This woman, who I had never met before, caused me so much pain it was unbearable. I felt as if a hole had opened up in my chest and it couldn’t be healed because she was gone. I hugged my knees to my chest and cried hard. I tried to tell myself it was just a dream, nothing more, but the pain was so real. It consumed me just like my anger had last night. I couldn’t get a hold of myself. I was grieving for some woman I didn’t know.
But Zachariah knew her. She was his wife, the mother of his son. And someone had killed her. To think of his wife dead sent another tidal wave of pain crashing down on me. más tears flooded my eyes and spilled down my face. How could I grieve for her? I didn’t know her. I hadn’t spoken to her, spent anytime with her.
“Kayla!”
Charlie’s voice, sounding rough and tired, brought me back to reality. I hastily wiped my hand across my eyes to erase the tears and only succeeded in causing mores. My eyes were sore as I had just realised. Realising my eyes were sore alerted me to the other after effects of visions.
“Kayla!”
“What?” I called back down feebly. I lay back down in bed, hoping to actually sleep this time. My brain was pounding against my skull but that could be from crying as well.
“Why is there a broken vase on the cocina floor?”
An image of Edward lifting me onto the cocina worktops and the vase crashing to the floor. I laughed and my mood lightened a little.
“I knocked it over and forgot to pick it up,” I lied. “I’ll do it in minute.”
I rolled out of cama and made my way slowly but surely to my bedroom door. I opened the door and screamed.
“Hi.” Contessa smiled brightly and waved.
When my corazón was beating normally again I smiled back. She was here again. The fecha must have gone well then.
“You don’t feel so good,” she said, frowning. “And you’re eyes are red. Are tu ill?”
“I’ll be fine soon,” I replied. “Although tu will not feel so good soon. tu got my father drunk last night.”
Contessa’s eyes widened and the she was gone. I laughed quietly to myself and then made my way downstairs. Charlie was eating cereal in at the cocina mesa, tabla and looked as bad as I felt at this moment in time. His hair was all over the place, his face pale and his eyes were bloodshot. I smiled slightly and leaned against the door jamb.
“Shouldn’t drink so much,” I tutted to him. “Bad for you.”
He put down his spoon and yawned, stretching his arms out.
“I haven’t drunk like that in years,” he said, rubbing his face. “I don’t think I can handle it like I used to.”
I walked slowly over to the broken glass on the floor and saw the orchids Edward had brought me. I picked each one up carefully and held then gently in my hands.
“Did Edward bring tu those?” Charlie asked me. He turned around in his chair to look at me.
“Yeah, he did,” I dicho and immediately concentrated on something else so Charlie didn’t know what had happened after he’d brought the flowers. My siguiente thought was Loretta. I couldn’t help it. She was plaguing my mind. Tears slid down my cheeks before I could think of something else. Charlie was up and siguiente to me in seconds, his arms around me.
“What’s wrong?” he asked me. “What’s upset you?”
“I don’t know what’s wrong with me,” I cried. “I don’t know her yet I grieve for her as if I amor her.” I buried my head in his shoulder, the flores crushed against his chest.
“You had another premonition,” he stated. “You feel what they feel. You’re put into their bodies, their minds and tu feel their emotions like they are you’re own. It shows you’re ability is developing and settling.”
“But it hurts now,” I sobbed. “I can’t get rid of it. If I feel like this, what must he feel like?”
I opened my mouth to tell him, explain to him what I saw and felt when there was a knock on the front door.
“I’ll get it!” I heard Tess shout. I wondered where she had run to after I threatened her.
“So what did tu see?” he asked me. His hand stroked my hair in a bid to soothe my pain but it didn’t help.
“It was-”
“I NEED TO SEE HIM NOW!” a familiar voice screamed. “UNHAND ME!”
I pulled away from Charlie, dropping the flores and ran to the door, to him. He was standing half inside the hallway and Tess had a firm grip on his arms. His face was contorted with anger and he was vainly trying to get inside. I pulled Tess off him and he stumbled forward. He stood up straight and looked at me. His face softened and he smiled.
“Michaela,” he said. “How are you?”
“Never mind me,” I said, looking him up and down. He looked just like he had in my vision. “Look at you.”
“Zach?” Charlie dicho behind me. “What happened? Come in, come in.”
“Thank you, Charlie,” he dicho and he stepped forward. In doing so he revealed the small boy hidden behind him. It was the boy from my both my visions.
“Kyo,” I dicho and I felt an overwhelming urge to protect him. He gazed up at me with those intelligent eyes and I had the feeling he was lectura my mind.
“Father,” he said, tugging on Zachariah’s hand. “She had a vision about me.”
So he was lectura my mind. I smiled slightly and walked away though doing so worried me. Kyo was alone and hurt. I should go back and carry him into the living room and check him over. I resisted the urge and followed Charlie into the living room. Tess was sitting on the sofá looking annoyed. I guessed I had upset her with my violent need to see Zachariah.
“Sorry,” I dicho to her and smiled tentatively. She ignored me and walked away into the kitchen. She’d come around. She was too bubbly to be mad at people for long.
“What happened to you?” Charlie said, as soon as Zach and Kyo were seated. “I thought tu were seguro once you’d left the castle.”
The castle. Loren’s castle. They had escaped, Zach, Loretta and Kyo. But didn’t Loren say he was going to punish them? Anger swelled up inside me at the thought of Zach and Kyo being hurt. I could see Kyo holding his arm and grimacing slightly. I knew it was broken. I knew because Zach knew.
“Charlie,” I said. “Ky is hurt. Can tu heal him?” There was a difference to my voice, something behind it that I didn’t recognise. I never called my father Charlie unless I was angry at him.
Charlie looked at me quizzically but held out his hands anyway.
“It’s okay, Kyo,” Zach said, nudging his son towards Charlie. “Just hold out your arm. It’ll be okay.”
Kyo held out his hands and I could clearly see it was broken. It was at an odd angle and tu could see the pain in Ky’s eyes even though his face was blank. Charlie held his hands over Kyo’s broken arm and a silver light emitted from his hands. I remembered the time I’d healed Charlie and how I could feel his skin closing up underneath my hands. Could he feel the bone healing under his touch? The light faded and Kyo looked happier. I felt happier seeing him happy.
“Thank you,” he said, in his quiet voice.
“No problem, kid,” Charlie said, smiling at him. “Kayla, why don’t tu take Kyo upstairs? I’m sure there are some games he could play while Zach and I talk.”
I didn’t want to go and leave him and Zach to talk. I wanted to stay here with Zach. I wanted Zach and Kyo to stay together in the same room. I opened my mouth to argue but Charlie looked at me sternly and I closed my mouth. I motioned to Kyo to follow me and I took him up to my room.
“You’re still in your pyjamas,” Kyo commented, sitting on my bed.
I looked down and saw that I was still in my shorts and t-shirt pyjama set.
“Yes I am,” I said, laughing. “Do tu mind?”
He shook his head. I could feel his eyes on me as I searched through my wardrobe for the old games I used to play with when I visited Charlie.
“Do tu know my mother?” Kyo asked suddenly. I heard the tears in his voice and it stopped me.
“Uh, no,” I answered. My hand touched a cardboard box and I pulled it out. I turned around, box in hand and I saw the tears in his eyes. They hadn’t fallen yet.
“I can see her in you,” he said. “I can see her in your mind.”
I placed the box on the floor and knelt in front of it. I opened the lid and inside was children’s games. Snakes and ladders, Jenga, Monopoly. I pulled out Snakes and ladders and laid it on the floor.
“I can see her in your mind,” Ky repeated.
“I heard you,” I said, as I set up the game. I didn’t want to tell him why she was in my mind. Why I thought about her. It would be too strange for him.
“Red o yellow?” I said, holding up to plastic counters.
“Why is she in your mind?” he asked me.
I put the counters down. I liked yellow so he would be red. He liked to be red anyway so it didn’t really matter. I rolled the die, which came up a three and moved my counter three spaces. I picked up the die and held it out to him.
“You roll now,” I said.
He looked at my hand with the die sitting on it. The die spun in my hand and landed on a six.
“I asked a question.”
“You know why she’s in my mind,” I answered. “I had a vision about you, tu know that. I heard tu ask your dad if your mother was safe. That’s why.”
He tilted his head to the side. His green eyes confused. I dropped the die and moved his red counter six spaces.
“That’s why I’m thinking about her,” I continued. “Because I felt Zach’s pain. I’ll get over it. Don’t worry.”
“You don’t understand,” he whispered. “You aren’t following me.”
I didn’t like his voice. I kept my eyes on the die as it rolled across the floor and stopped on five. I moved my counter the number of spaces and picked up the die.
“She’s in your mind,” Kyo said. “She’s in your mind.”
As tu can tell por the título I don't care who people prefer, to me they are completly different libros in completly different genres- I mean would tu ever see Ron fighting a grizzly bear. Okay so it is possible, but he isn't going to get golden eyes when he drinks it's blood, seriously?

So I decided to end this fight once and for all- although I didn't intentially come across this, I just found it on: link ,so that shows how bored tu get to go to this extent when there's hardly any new Twilight news-right? It's a slow día today.

Okay so I clicked on a thing called google Fight, and it asked...
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posted by dinosteph
For those of tu who are new, Here is chapter 1, 2 and 3.

Chapter 1 - link

Chapter 2 - link

Chapter 3 - link




Ending of Chapter 3


It wasn't raining as much in the woods, the trees protected me from the rain. I didn't realize how cold it had gotten until I noticed the ganso bumps tickle on my arms. I wrapped my arms around myself, still crying and kept walking until my legs and feet grew tired. I spotted a rock and wiped it off before I sat down. I hugged my knees close to my body.

“I can't say here. Where can I go? Renee is traveling with Phil. Would Charlie even let me leave? He wouldn't understand....
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter eight. Hope tu like it please read, rate, comentario and enjoy!!

CHAPTER 8


Bella’s POV

I cannot believe I have left him. But its for the best. He KILLED my parents. o if tu want to put it specifically, he killed my mum and his brother (Emmett) killed my dad. And he expects me to stay with him after that. Uh-huh, right.
    I don’t know what I would have done without Sara. She really is nice, once tu get to know her. She has taught me the ways of living as a nomadic vampire. Without her I would have been crying at the Cullens’ doorstep por now. I don’t...
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter seven. I hope tu like it!! i got my ideas from the Twilight libros so there are connections, but the story has got different points in it! Please read, rate and comment. Enjoy!!

CHAPTER 7

Edward’s POV

She left me. I can’t say I blame her really. I murdered her parents. But I am hurting and I didn’t think she would leave with Sara. Of all people, Sara.
    There is a huge hole in my heart, and I am struggling to keep it together. Emmett’s trying to help. But I know he feels guilty, he killed her father. I’ve heard him blaming himself. ‘Damn, why didn’t...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
third chapter, full of shocks and crazy twists...enjoy!

The La Push students stood out among the vast amounts of students at school. They were tanner, and wore brighter colores than us, a very unusual; thing to do in Forks where your covered in an unclear haze of rain and shadow. The La Push kids mostly kept to themselves, at lunch in most classes, but there would be a rare occasion that they would have to communicate with tu for an assignment o for something they needed help with. I was lucky to be in mostly senior classes, so I didn’t have to worry about that too much. If I sounded stupid,...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
hey, for those who did my question, this is the draft of my story, of edward and jacob for bella's protection, and when they come back, she is in fact, a vampire slayer/witch (havent decided which yet!!!)
let me know if tu like it!

Prologue

I never thought it would happen like this. The Quileute’s on my left, and the Cullen’s on my right. Both people I thought I could amor and trust. Both ready to kill me. I waited in weary anticipation as Edward and Jacob took two steps towards me, both looking upset yet focused at the same time. I felt my new family stir uneasily behind me, bound por the...
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Okay guys, so I had a great idea, I'm still gonna continue escritura this story, but I always seem to never be able to make up my mind on whats going to happen..

So, what I want to do, is ask tu guys, I publicado a pregunta under "Picks" about who is behind Bella.

You guys are going to help me continue my story, and have some imput in how the story works, I'm really excited for this and think its gonna be fun!

If you're just lectura anything from me for the first time, I would suggest going back to read all three chapters and then going under picks and selecting an option...

I think i'm gonna resort...
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This is my first fanfiction so I need tu to be honest and tell me what tu think!

I dont own Twilight o any of it's characters.


My mother kissed my forehead softly, “You know sweetie, tu don’t have to do this if tu don’t want to.” Her eyes bored into mine and for a segundo I actually considered staying in Phoenix. But I knew Phil would be going on the road soon, and I also knew how hard it was for Renee to be away from her new husband. I didn’t want that.
“Mom for the last time I want to!” I replied, putting on the best Valiente smile I could manage, smiling was just so much effort...
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posted by dinosteph
Chapter two guys.


I opened my eyes slowly, noticing the time was 5:34. Early. I closed my eyes again rolling over to my other side. I could sleep for another hora before I had to get up and start my morning routine for school. I could hear Charlie moving around the house downstairs, probably making himself breakfast, and then I smelled burnt toast. Yup. Definitely making himself breakfast. I turned a few times trying to get comfortable when I heard the rocking chair in the corner creak. I peeked through my eyelashes holding my hand over my eyes, shielding the daylight coming in through the window....
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posted by team_edward_
Chapter One-Hunting

I pulled into the school parking lot. Most of the cars were old so my old truck didn`t stand out to much. “Oh my gosh tu must be Isabella cisne right? I`m like Jessica and this is Angela, Mike, Eric, and Tyler. I`m so glad you’re coming here what’s your first class?” A girl about 5 foot 5 has wild, curly, dark brown hair and blue eyes was introducing me to her friends. “Hey please call me Bella not Isabella. Nice to meet yous. I have English first. What do tu guys have?” The guys just stared at me. Jessica dicho she and Mike had English too. The other three had...
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posted by twerdx24x1
Edward comes into the house and says” What the hell is all my stuff doing in the garage?” Then i stood and looked Edward in the face and dicho “we have company who is living with us now. Don’t be rude come registrarse us.” In my head i was thinking to him. ‘They just showed up and knew our names and everything about us. It was awkward at first and then i gave them a tour and Alice saw your room and wanted it. So I helped her with your stuff. Paybacks a pain in the butt, tu shouldn’t have of been mean to me while i was being transformed. Oh yeah, I heard every word tu dicho about me.’...
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posted by nataliaryanfan
"Alice,what did tu see?" I asked her in a soft tone.
"I saw us fighting newborns," she started, "there was only 25 of them and we finished them off in an instance." Alice started to sob again. "After we killed all of them, we started a bonfire and burned all their bodies." She paused. "We división, split up into groups. Well, actually couples- tu and Edward, me and Jasper, tu and Emmett, and tu and Carlisle." Me, Rosalie, and Esme immediately knew who was with who. In her premonition, I was paired up with Edward, Alice was with Jasper, Rose was with Emmett, and Esme was with Carlisle. Alice went...
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 Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Okay so I saw the movie and Taylor was PERFECT!!! I was a little iffy at first about him being my favorito! character, but he really surprised me! He's SUCH a good actor it nearly made me fall out of my seat. He didn't have a big role, of course, but I'm looking adelante, hacia adelante to him in New Moon. He's just so GREAT!!! I mean, he has the smile, the voice, the body, the eyes, the hair, the height...why does Summit want to replace him so badly??? Yes, I understand that in New Moon he grows a lot and gets más muscle, but who cares? Taylor can work out and he'll grow, too. And if it's not enough, I say...
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posted by team_edward_
PART 1 Bella POV

I whispered"I amor tu too"In his ear."I think we should get going Bella.Are tu ready?"This took me a minuto to answer.Who`s ever ready to tell their father that they are divorcing their best friends son?"As ready as i`ll ever be.Bye Jake."I kissed Jacob on the cheek and I left leaning on Edward for suport.

On the way to Charlie`s I kept my eyes closed and didn`t talk."We`re here."I opened my eyes to see Edward geting out and opening my door."Come on."I got up not sure if I could still walk."I`m not sure if I can tell him.He was so happy and Jakes his best friends son."Edward...
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posted by i_luv_twilight
hola this is the first chapter of a story i m writing. if u like it comment! if ppl like it i'll post more!

I was walking outside of my house when I saw him. He was unloading a moving camioneta, van across the calle with who looked like his father. His hair was a glistening golden-red color. I completely froze. I was stunned por the beauty that was standing a few yards away from me.
He caught me staring, causing my face to turn a bright shade of red. I could tell he was laughing at my cherry-colored face.
I rushed into my house almost running my face into the door, because I didn't unlock the door fast enough...
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posted by mrsblack_1089
Here it is: The long awaited, demanded Chapter 10!! Chapter 11 will follow shortly.


Jacob and I kept planning for hours in the cottage.
I decided that Mom, Aunt Rosalie, Aunt Alice, Grandma, Leah, and Emily would be my bridesmaids, and Jacob wanted Billy as a best man, and Dad, Uncle Emmett, Sam, Quil, Embry, and Seth as groomsmen. Uncle Jasper would read the vows. We wanted a house in Forks, in the woods, like Mom's and Dad's, but with a different design. Our interrests differed from theirs. We went to go see Grandma to tell her our plans for a house.
She and Aunt Alice were upstairs in Aunt...
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"You know, I am going to miss this place," I noted as Jacob took my packed suitcase.
"You'd rather stay here than be with me?" he pouted.
"Of course not! I'm just saying..." Oh. He was teasing. He grinned at me and I laced my fingers through his.
I was leaving Brenton. Today was the last día of my first semester. It had been a great experiance, but Jacob was más important than anything in my life right now. On the night of the dance, we had fallen asleep in the silvery moonlight, curled up por each other, under the tree. The siguiente morning he was going to catch a flight back to Washington; he...
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it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie tu know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... o with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e paino for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)

but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
posted by mandapanda
Well, as most of tu know, the Twilight Score is coming out December 9th, and I can't wait for that day! The track listing has been released and I decided to match up the track listings with the movie scenes, and the book. (My guesses are in parantheses) Movie scores usually lista the songs in the order that they are played in the movie. And, if my guessing is right, the movie is following the book chronologically. The tracks that don't have my guesses is because I'm not sure about where they fit. But anyways, please comment, either disagreeing o agreeing, both are welcome. :)

Track Listings...
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okay, so, all these people are complaining about Bella's Lullaby. I heard, "Bella's Lullaby sucked in my opinion" o "The strings and the orchestra weren't supposed to be in the song" o "They need to cut out the orchestra cuz it sucked with that in it". Just stuff like that which is disrespectful to Summit, Carter Burwell, and all the people associated with the project. People don't need to say such rude comentarios about it.

and in my opinion, this is the soundtrack. obviously they are gonna put the score they have that goes with the movie's music. It can't just be a misceláneo piece that doesn't fit in with the rest of the score. that's just what pisses me off. when people judge something too quickly without laying down all the facts.