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Jacob
Urrrgh. I don't feel well. Why am I so cold? What happened? Why do I feel like there's something in my shoulder? I tried to stand, but then realized I WAS standing. I opened my eyes. Everything was blurry, and my ears were ringing. Suddenly, the ringing stopped and the scene in front of me became clearer. There was a redheaded boy wearing a dress suit, and a lovely-but strangely familiar-girl in a cream-colored wedding dress. This was no wedding like I've ever seen, though.There was no preacher, but an altar covered in bottles with heavy scents and a candle. The girl and boy looked at me, blue and brown eyes. But as soon as I saw her eyes, everything came back to me.
"Renesmee! Nessie, look at me! That's Mark!" I yelled. Why isn't she terrified? I struggled, but the chains around me suddenly grew tighter.
Renesmee spoke. "I know this is Mark. And you're Jacob Black, the most filthy, cruel, ridiculous, dog I thought I was in amor with before I saw Mark." Then she looked at Mark with adoring eyes, and then I realized that her pupils didn't change to focus the light. She was in a trance. Mark looked at me wickedly. I struggled some more, only to feel pain as the chains grew tighter.
"Don't even think of breaking loose. Those chains will just grow tighter until tu suffocate. And don't try to phase, either, o yoou'll be cut in half." He laughed and kissed my Renesmee. I screamed and struggled again. Pain seared through my ribs. Tears were spilling like mad down my cheeks. The ceremony began. Mark dicho something in Latin, and I could only make out a few words, thanks to lessons from Bella. "Soul...Body...Not...Wed?"
"I object! Renesmee, listen to me! He's put a spell on you! tu don't amor him; tu amor me! Look in my eyes and tell me tu don't amor me!" I screamed because the chains squeezed more. Renesmee looked ready to do just that, but as soon as she looked in my eyes, her pupils changed shape and she blinked. She shook her head, like she relived a bad memory, and then looked again. "I don't amor you, Jacob Black." she dicho in a sure tone. I screamed, but this time, I'd rather it were the chains that did it. My corazón felt like it was slowly ripping apart, like 10x a band-aid from skin. 1,000,000x. She blinked again, and a tear spilled down her cheek.
"Oh, Jacob, I didn't-" she cried.
"Are tu mad, girl, love? tu don't amor him, tu dicho so yourself!" interrupted Mark. He brought her back into her trance. "Now, on with the wedding." He continued, but used unfamiliar words, so my only guess is that he was using witchcraft. He rubbed an ointment over Renesmee's left wrist and his. He took blood from her finger and used the same cuchillo on his, and dripped the mixed blood on the candle, which's flame grew stronger. He tipped the candle upside-down, putting dripping wax on their wrists. All the meanwhile I was screaming Renesmee's name, over and over again. He was about to put the seventh drop on her inner wrist, to finish the ceremony, when he screamed. He dropped Renesmee's hand, which made her gasp in pain and fall to the ground. I saw eight, pale figures run towards the altar, the smallest stopping at the árbol I was tied against. One small tug, and Alice freed me. Mark was still screaming as Edward lept towards him. I started to lose consiousness from the chains. I fell to the ground. Before everything went dark, I heard Mark's final scream cut off, and felt a small hand, burning at the wrist, touch my cheek.
Jacob
Urrrgh. I don't feel well. Why am I so cold? What happened? Why do I feel like there's something in my shoulder? I tried to stand, but then realized I WAS standing. I opened my eyes. Everything was blurry, and my ears were ringing. Suddenly, the ringing stopped and the scene in front of me became clearer. There was a redheaded boy wearing a dress suit, and a lovely-but strangely familiar-girl in a cream-colored wedding dress. This was no wedding like I've ever seen, though.There was no preacher, but an altar covered in bottles with heavy scents and a candle. The girl and boy looked at me, blue and brown eyes. But as soon as I saw her eyes, everything came back to me.
"Renesmee! Nessie, look at me! That's Mark!" I yelled. Why isn't she terrified? I struggled, but the chains around me suddenly grew tighter.
Renesmee spoke. "I know this is Mark. And you're Jacob Black, the most filthy, cruel, ridiculous, dog I thought I was in amor with before I saw Mark." Then she looked at Mark with adoring eyes, and then I realized that her pupils didn't change to focus the light. She was in a trance. Mark looked at me wickedly. I struggled some more, only to feel pain as the chains grew tighter.
"Don't even think of breaking loose. Those chains will just grow tighter until tu suffocate. And don't try to phase, either, o yoou'll be cut in half." He laughed and kissed my Renesmee. I screamed and struggled again. Pain seared through my ribs. Tears were spilling like mad down my cheeks. The ceremony began. Mark dicho something in Latin, and I could only make out a few words, thanks to lessons from Bella. "Soul...Body...Not...Wed?"
"I object! Renesmee, listen to me! He's put a spell on you! tu don't amor him; tu amor me! Look in my eyes and tell me tu don't amor me!" I screamed because the chains squeezed more. Renesmee looked ready to do just that, but as soon as she looked in my eyes, her pupils changed shape and she blinked. She shook her head, like she relived a bad memory, and then looked again. "I don't amor you, Jacob Black." she dicho in a sure tone. I screamed, but this time, I'd rather it were the chains that did it. My corazón felt like it was slowly ripping apart, like 10x a band-aid from skin. 1,000,000x. She blinked again, and a tear spilled down her cheek.
"Oh, Jacob, I didn't-" she cried.
"Are tu mad, girl, love? tu don't amor him, tu dicho so yourself!" interrupted Mark. He brought her back into her trance. "Now, on with the wedding." He continued, but used unfamiliar words, so my only guess is that he was using witchcraft. He rubbed an ointment over Renesmee's left wrist and his. He took blood from her finger and used the same cuchillo on his, and dripped the mixed blood on the candle, which's flame grew stronger. He tipped the candle upside-down, putting dripping wax on their wrists. All the meanwhile I was screaming Renesmee's name, over and over again. He was about to put the seventh drop on her inner wrist, to finish the ceremony, when he screamed. He dropped Renesmee's hand, which made her gasp in pain and fall to the ground. I saw eight, pale figures run towards the altar, the smallest stopping at the árbol I was tied against. One small tug, and Alice freed me. Mark was still screaming as Edward lept towards him. I started to lose consiousness from the chains. I fell to the ground. Before everything went dark, I heard Mark's final scream cut off, and felt a small hand, burning at the wrist, touch my cheek.
hi i dont know what to call this but heres the first chapter if tu have any ideas tell me
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
"Alice we don't need to dress up it's just high school.again." I dicho under my breath.
"Oh come on Bella can't tu let me have some fun today."
"Fine." I dicho giving up trying to argue with Alice. Alice had me in dark washed skinny jeans and high heel ankle boots,with a purple long-sleeved layered casual t.
"Just today though."Not wanting her to get the wrong idea that i would let her do this everyday.
"Agreed.Now stay still I'm almost finished.
"Time to go Renesemee,Jacob."I yelled upstairs. Jacob was now moved in with us we all pretty much not breath anymore but we had to get used to it again since we can go to schol again beacause renesemee is 7 now and stoped ageing
Its short sorry. its supposed to be a cliff hanger. the siguiente one is a lot longer.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper dicho at once.
I promise.
Bella's Pov.
We all looked at each other. That scream was SO familiar. Where's Alice?
Alice?
"Alice? Alice where are you?!" I shouted.
Then there was another yell coming from the middle door.
Then we realized. Alice went ahead of us and went towards the middle
section. We all ran as fast as we could. Edward smashed the door
and there they were. Alice, The mysterious man, and Jasper, with
mysterious purple eyes.
"Surprised to see me?" the man and Jasper dicho at once.
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back siguiente to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he dicho gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back siguiente to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he dicho gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
'Twilight': Which 'New Moon' scene should debut on the mtv Movie Awards?
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | por Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's mtv Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The pregunta is: Which one do tu most want to see? If tu haven't read the segundo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- o Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lobo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
May 18, 2009, 07:00 PM | por Mandi Bierly
Categories: Film, Twilight, Waiting
Robert Pattinson, Kristen Stewart, and Taylor Lautner will be on hand at May 31's mtv Movie Awards to introduce a never-before-seen clip from the The Twilight Saga: New Moon. The pregunta is: Which one do tu most want to see? If tu haven't read the segundo book in Stephenie Meyer's series, STOP NOW. We're obviously talking SPOILERS here....
I vote for Bella jumping off the cliff -- that way we'll get to see how they handle her hearing Edward's voice, while they give us a visual because they want to put Pattinson on screen whenever possible -- o Bella running to stop Edward from stepping into the sun. I bet those will be too F/X-driven to be ready to screen in May, since the film doesn't open until November. (Ditto any scenes involving the lobo Pack transforming....) Your pick? Bonus points if it's practical.
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I feeling really bored right now, so i guess i thought about all of tu guys/girls :D
I want to congratulate tu all for making such awesome and great fanfiction. So it must be said, so everyone can read about you're fanfiction :-)
I read most of the fanfiction (allot actually) myself and i just adore them i sometimes print them out and start lectura them like a book, it's really amazing that people are still so broad-minded :o)
*****To all fanfiction writers out there continue the great job and don't ever stop :D lol and to the people who want to start a fanfiction on there own, good luck and enjoy what tu write :D*****
Golden brown eyes, like hardened syrup in a pool like shape of a continuance lifetime of some burdened sadness.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
Lifeless he is, like a beautiful statue, numb to the world around him.
Only the silent whispers of feeble minds he hears.
The red seductive toxin running through their veins, of which he hungers for… his ‘own personal brand of heroin’.
His thirst for normality is torturous to his eternal, tormented soul.
A secret torture for this masochistic lion,
This old face holds many secrets, some unable to tell but all not forgotten.
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