Sonic fan Characters Article: Burning Shadows ~ PART 2

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posted by PhoenixRoyale

Javinx

Vivina followed the blood to the back door and quickly ran down the steps. When she pushed the door that leads to outside, she bumped into someone and fell to the ground. She rubbed her head and got up. "Why don't tu w--" she froze when she saw a black hedgehog with red eyes standing in front of her, with blue streaks.

"Why don't I what?" he dicho in a dark voice.

"N-nothing..." Vivina said, blushing.

"Who are you?" the hedgehog asked.

"V-Vivina...w-what about you...?" she asked.

"Javinx. I'm a vampire." he replied coolly.

Vivina jumped back. Her eyes turned red and her medieval flail flashed in. "Stay back!" she growled in a rough tone. Javinx dicho nothing, he just looked at her.

"Are tu looking for a fight?" he smirked. Vivina's medieval flail vanished and her eyes turned back into an icy blue once again.

"N-no...You're a vampire, so I thought..." Vivina didn't want to finish what she was saying. Then, Mistera appeared por Vivina's side.

"What do tu think you're doing, standing in front of a vampire that Benelin loves?" Mistera growled. "Stay away from him!"

"But...I l--" Before Vivina was about to finish her sentence, she slapped her hands onto her mouth.

"You what?" Mistera's angry tone turned into a mixture of curiousity, suspicion, and seriousness.

"I'm not telling you..." Vivina dicho in a muffled tone.

"Tell me!" Mistera growled.

"I want to know what tu were about to say, too," Javinx stated also.

"Like...you..." Vivina then slapped both of her hands on her face, while it was turning red.

"Like him?! Are tu kidding me?!" Mistera gagged. "Step away from him!"

"L-like me...?" Javinx blushed. Vivina ran off of pure embarrassment.

**
Vivina slammed the front door and saw Jorafi, giggling. "I heard everythingggggggg!" Jorafi said, bursting into laughter. "So who do tu truly love, then? Javinx o Adren?"

After a few hours of whipping Jorafi with a medieval flail, Vivina crawled into cama and slept. She started shivering violently when she started having nightmares about what happened:

'"YOU amor HIM?! THAT'S IT! YOU'RE GOING TO GET IT!" Benelin yelled as she drilled a crowbar into Vivina's head.

Vivina screamed, struggling to move, then she lay there, limp. Benelin bursted out in evil laughter.'

Vivina woke up in a gasp. "Good thing it was a dream..." she sighed, relieved.

Jorafi went into her room, still giggling. "Javinx sent...flowers...!" Jorafi screamed, jumping up and down. "FOR YOU!! COME SEE!!! NOW!!!!!" she screamed.

"He sent flowers?!" Vivina's face turned red and she ran to the dining room. A bouquet of red roses
with a white tag on it.

'Could tu try to be in amor with a vampire?' it dicho on the tag.

**

Vivina kept following the trail of blood, until she saw the dead corpse of Adren, burnt.

"Nooo!" she yelled, sitting siguiente to his body. "Well, I guess I have another person to love, at least..."

"Don't even think about loving him!" a dark growl interrupted her. Vivina gasped, and spun around. Her eyes widened, and she saw Benelin's eyes glowing red, holding a large knife. "If tu think tu can get away with dating Javinx, tu go through me!" Benelin growled.

**TO BE CONTINUED**

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Skye the Echidna

posted by unknown99

Born in the City of Fire, he is raised as a tough child. He suffer from domestic violence and managed to escape his own city. He then joined the Andromedian pyrokinetic academy. Which he met a lot of other people enhancing their abilities. He went to his dormitory with 3 other people sleeping in the same room. They are Grey, Joey and Amethyst (male). He was mostly quiet and do not talk to others. the same like grey who was spending most of his time working on his homework. When the time of the exam comes, their abilities were tested in the arena which they have to fight their way through with...

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The Prank

posted by NoctusLynx

“Hey, Noctus?” asked a familiar voice to me.

“Uh.. what?” I asked back, snapping out of my daydreaming.

“It’s Gatage. He’s holding a meeting, and he’ll know if we’re missing.” It was Cooro, a lifelong friend of mine. Ever since just recently joining this group, we had been having some sort of friction for some reason. I don’t know why, but it’s almost as if our friendship was beginning to falter.

“Fine, I’ll get up,” I complied reluctantly.

Standing up, I saw that there was no meeting. I searched outside of my den, and still, there was no sign whatsoever of a meeting...

Chrome the pantera, pantera, panther Part3: Saving the forest!

posted by Dragonfruit44

Selena was about to shoot the chao when something jumped in front of her," LEAVE THEM ALONE!" It shouted and tripped her. She fell and saw a white cat standing over her," get out of my way freak! tu have no business here!" Selena shouted and shot a couple fireballs at Tiny. She dodged quickly, but only for them to hit más trees. " you're destroying my home, I have every right to be here!" She yelled and went to puñetazo, ponche Selena. Tiny was surprised when Selena caught it. Selena laughed," tu just made a big mistake, cat girl. I not only shot fire, I can control it." Selena caught Tiny's entire...

Chrome the pantera, pantera, panther Part 2: Selena the Hedgehog

posted by Dragonfruit44

Selena

Cliff ran to an old árbol trunk. He looked around and then waved his hand towards some trees. Nook and Scar ran from behind the árbol and ran to Cliff. Cliff opened a secret hatch on the árbol stump and climbed in with Scar and Nook after him. When they got to the bottom, they ran down a couple of hallways and got to a big room. Bard was waiting for them," Well? Is half the forest gone?" He asked. "No, sir. We had some trouble with that stupid wild cat. We only got a quarter of the forest cut down." Bard slammed his hand against the wall," That's not good enough! We need to cause huge amounts...

Status Update on the Acid-Monster Race

posted by SierraDawnV2

This is basically just a lista of all of the Acid-Monsters in existence as of this very moment. I have this here just in case my computer crashes. (I'm super paranoid about that.) And before tu say something like "This isn't part of this fanbase!" Yes it is, and if tu do say that, tu weren't around when Yxari Sadaris first came out as a character. Acid-Monsters originated as a Mobian species.

So, as of today:

Full-Bloods--
Paris Blake
Almodea Blake
Albus Anguis (Owned por TheTacoMan)
Jakob Enu
Milo Smalls
Melik (owned por TakTheFox)
Ryker (owned por MephilesTheDark)
Yxari Sadaris
Yukari Nale
Ana-Luisa Oliviera
(Ana-Lysa and Sayofrick-- deceased.)
[You can only make a full-blood if I like tu and tu get my approval.]

Half-Bloods--
zorro, fox (soon to be a full-blood)
Nazareth Runner
Rynk (Owned por TakTheFox)
[Room for discussion as to making a half-blood...]

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My Character-Cario

posted by SilverFox73

Name: Cario
Species: Parrot
Personality: Wacky, loud-mouthed
Powers: Can manipulate and copy a large amount of sounds and voices, flight.
Skills: Sword fighting, pickpocketing, element of surprise.
Story: Long ago, Cario was part of a pirate crew, and was first mate of the captain. He was very skilled member of the crew, with his experience and looting skills. But one day, the pirate's ship was inexplicably struck por lightning! Cario was one of the few crew members who managed to escape por raft, and spent days at sea, hoping that he would find dry land. One day, his prayers were answered when he...

Prolouges: Gatage

posted by NoctusLynx

The fuego blazed on as más freshly cut firewood was tossed into it with Menae's vectors.

“We’ll I guess I’m next,” Gatage said.

“Whoever dicho tu were going next?” Menae argued.

“Would tu like to take the stand, Menae?” Gatage asked.

Menae thought of this for a moment, and dicho “point taken,” making Gatage nod, and allowing him to continue.

“So, in a nutshell, I was raised to become the best there was at the art of shooting,” Gatage began.

“Shooting a pistol can be considered an art?” Sanae asked. Gatage simply gave her an annoyed glare, and continued.

“Anyways, I was...

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fan Character Guide.

posted by Shade2145

Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of tu are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give consejos in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!

Chapter One

Mary Sueing is when tu bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.

N00b133!!!: I shoot tu then telport tu inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B tu JUST MADE UP AN WORD

See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no tu never.

Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we mostrar ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do tu want that? No.

Chapter 2.

Never Mary sue.
That is all.

Roleplay Fighting

posted by TakTheFox

Yeah it took a while for me to think up something to whine about X{D, but here’s one. FIGHTING IN ROLEPLAYS. NO, this isn’t going to be me complaining about “VIOLENCE IS BAD! NERRRRRRRRR!” I mean… yeah Violence is BAD, but th- okay right, off topic, sorry.

Anyway, Fighting in Roleplays is usually… one of the most annoying things ever. If someone is fighting someone else in a roleplay, it is can be at times what I like to call “Stubborn-one-sided” where both side will act like no matter what, they are the ones in control, and the superior. Now I originally was going to say that...

Nightmares Part 11 (Final)

posted by Dragonfruit44

Everyone ran to the room that Rose was in. See was at the far wall, staring. Thorn ran to her and hugged her," Rose! I'm so happy you're alright! I was so worried I-...Rose?" Rose was staring into the purple mirror, the mirror reflected nothing but flames. Thorn stepped back and looked at Flare," What's wrong with her? Why isn't she responding?!" "She's being controlled por these stones called nightmare crystals. If tu stare into for even a second, tu go into a dreamlike state, where your nightmares seem real. tu could be stuck there for days, and it would only feel like seconds." Flare said...

Nightmares Part 10

posted by Dragonfruit44

Flare looked around for some way out, but everything looked locked tight. " Do tu see anything that could help us, Thorn?" Flare asked. Thorn shook his head and then noticed the rusty bars of their cage," these look like they're really really old, maybe we can break them?" Thorn grabbed one bar and shook it. The bar became loose, but was still stuck in place. "It's moving!" Flare yelled, then suddenly covering her mouth so Bard and Scar wouldn't hear. Bard had fallen asleep and so had Scar, and they still seemed to be snoring away. Flare helped Thorn try to mover the bar. It seemed to get more...

Rachel's Songs

posted by Rachel_Savaya

Follow My Dreams (Rachel's Theme)
by: Rachel Savaya

verse 1:

ive been hurt
ive been crushed
ive been told
im just crazy
but i will not listen to them
anymore

chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my corazón wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take me
ill follow my dreams
anywhere

verse 2:

ive been lied to
been shut down
i just cant
take this anymore
but now ive got friends to
help me through this
and i will hang on cause

Chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my corazón wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take...

Nightmares Part 6

posted by Dragonfruit44

Rose immediately let go of the people's arms. " No...No it can't be!..." Rose knew these people because the people were Rose's parents. "Rose, help us!" "You're not my real parents...You can't be..." Rose's parents stepped adelante, hacia adelante her. "Remember the fuego Rose? The fuego you created? The one that killed us?" Her father said. "We always told tu not to play with fire.", dicho Rose's mother. Rose shook her head. " It wasn't me! It was an accident, caused por a cloth being por the stove!" Her parents got closer and as they did, they became más and más fire. " No, stay away! I don't like the fire...

Nightmares Part 5

posted by Dragonfruit44

Nat walked down the tunnel, hand against the muro and flashlight on. She walked around until she came to an open room. Nat walked around gazing at how big the room was. She shone her flashlight around and then something caught her eye. The light was reflecting off of something. She walked towards the shining object. Then she stepped on something. She looked down and noticed some purple crystals. "What are these doing in these tunnels?" She looked up and saw a mountain of treasure. She stepped back in awe and tripped over something. She got up quickly and was face to face with eight giant eyes....

Nightmares Part 2

posted by Dragonfruit44

Nat finished making some eggs and tocino, bacon when Flare woke up. "Good Morning. Did tu sleep well?" Nat asked, getting her a plate. "I slept like a baby! How about you?" Flare answered, digging into her breakfast. "Not one of my best sleeps, but I'll pull through the day." Nat answered then yawned. She got herself a plate and sat por Flare. "Did tu have any dreams? I had a strange one about going to the public pool and then ending up in the ocean and finding treasure. Very strange." Flare said. " Nothing interesting, I'm sure of that." Nat said, uneasily. Flare seemed to notice. " You're lying....

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Nightmares Part 1

posted by Dragonfruit44

Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the comida they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I por a tree? She went to put the...

The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11

posted by mephiles97

The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11

Kyle released a quiet groan as he slowly began waking up from the effects of the tranquil dart that he had been hit with. He struggled to open his eyes as his stamina very slowly began returning to him. He finally did manage to open his eyes, struggling to focus his blurry vision on his surroundings. He was sure that he had been captured por the Dark Horses.

Finally managing to get his eyes to focus, Kyle slowly moved his head around to observe where he was. He was in a fairly large cell made of solid concrete, so they would most likely be very sturdy. Since he was...

Matt The Lynx(A New Beginning):Episode two

posted by Mapware3640

So the small city-like village of Crystal city was in a bind,with the greedy tyrant Bubba closing in to take all the folks prisoner,the people of Crystal city worked like clockwork to retrieve the gems from the caverns in order to pay off the bill.However all the gems were incinerated due to the heat surrounding the smoldering remains of MTL's pod,The villagers quickly gathered everything and brought it to Bubba,however it didn't meet the proper amount,Angered por this,Bubba shouted "Cheapskates!I was generous enough to give tu vermin the título of this land and tu try to trick me out of it!?You...

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Conflicts Arcane (Reboot) chapter One Part Two (FINALLY!!!!!)

posted by TakTheFox

Part Two “Problematic Circumstances”

Talon slowly opened his eyes. He was weary and dizzy. “What… wh-where?” He slowly turned his head and pushed himself upward to get a better look at his surroundings. He was in a metal room… with a locked door… one light… and one bed… a cell? He was in prison?

“How did I get here?!” Talon jerked to his feet and yanked at the door handle; obviously it would not open, but why not try anyway?

“Wait a second…” Nick closed his eyes and concentrated on what happened before this. “There was the… fire… then I was taken por the cops!...

My personal regrets and praise during the creation of the original MTL series.

posted by Mapware3640

Heh,I bet tu didn't think I was going to write this,huh.XD

Okay...time for the shit storm of shit storms.The original MTL series...oh dear lord,where to begin?Well the creation of my original fan character was no easy feat,Back when I created my FC I never understood the concept of Gary-stus and Mary-Sues(Until mephs pointed out sometime later),but where to begin...I suppose let's get the easy part of this articulo out of the way,My regrets and mistakes with the original series.First regret...cliche back story.Again,long before I knew anything about cliches I decide to give MTL a back-story...