IF U HAVNT READ CHAPTER 1 o 2 DONT READ THIS
when we got to the garoa mountain and got too where the shooting estrella landed, there was just an unconsous cat there. misery, hyper and curious as usual, went up and touched the girl. "OW WAT THE HELL" misery screamed. she had burnt her hand some how and then it started to rain. tuesday, confused, dicho "wat the hell just a girl? u mean that this girl was the estrella that fell from the sky? arc r u sure this is where the estrella landed?"
arc replied "tues have i ever been wrong?" arc was más of our tracker of sorts. then misery burst of in screaming "U MUST B KIDING ME THAT CAT (misery is not very fond of cats) WAS THAT BEAUTIFUL LIGHT IN THE SKY NO NO NO IT CANT B Y A GIRL Y NOT oro o GEMS o MONEY SO WE CAN GET A inicial BUUUTTT NOOOO IT HAS TO B SOME misceláneo GIRL CRAP CURSE U LORD!!!!" then from miserys screaching, the mystious girl awoke. she looked around staring at the odd group of animales around her. she seems to glow almost and had half arco iris pelaje, piel and half black fur. her eyes were white purple and they had a confused look in them. then misery grabs her por her dress and screams "WAT THE HELL WHO R U JSUT SOME GIRL WHO FELL OUT OF THE SKY MISSY U GOTS SOME EXPLAINS TO DOO" flana pushes misery aside and misery drops the girl. flana helps the girl up and más nicely says "can u plz explain who u r and y u r here?" i stare at the girl she wont speak and i wonder y. then she stares back at me and like after i use to much electricity, i had a electric over load and i fainted
when we got to the garoa mountain and got too where the shooting estrella landed, there was just an unconsous cat there. misery, hyper and curious as usual, went up and touched the girl. "OW WAT THE HELL" misery screamed. she had burnt her hand some how and then it started to rain. tuesday, confused, dicho "wat the hell just a girl? u mean that this girl was the estrella that fell from the sky? arc r u sure this is where the estrella landed?"
arc replied "tues have i ever been wrong?" arc was más of our tracker of sorts. then misery burst of in screaming "U MUST B KIDING ME THAT CAT (misery is not very fond of cats) WAS THAT BEAUTIFUL LIGHT IN THE SKY NO NO NO IT CANT B Y A GIRL Y NOT oro o GEMS o MONEY SO WE CAN GET A inicial BUUUTTT NOOOO IT HAS TO B SOME misceláneo GIRL CRAP CURSE U LORD!!!!" then from miserys screaching, the mystious girl awoke. she looked around staring at the odd group of animales around her. she seems to glow almost and had half arco iris pelaje, piel and half black fur. her eyes were white purple and they had a confused look in them. then misery grabs her por her dress and screams "WAT THE HELL WHO R U JSUT SOME GIRL WHO FELL OUT OF THE SKY MISSY U GOTS SOME EXPLAINS TO DOO" flana pushes misery aside and misery drops the girl. flana helps the girl up and más nicely says "can u plz explain who u r and y u r here?" i stare at the girl she wont speak and i wonder y. then she stares back at me and like after i use to much electricity, i had a electric over load and i fainted
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of tu are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give consejos in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when tu bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot tu then telport tu inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B tu JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no tu never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we mostrar ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do tu want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when tu bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot tu then telport tu inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B tu JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no tu never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we mostrar ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do tu want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She dicho softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They dicho "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was o were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get inicial ASAP."
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She dicho softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They dicho "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was o were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get inicial ASAP."