CHAPTEH FRIGGIN' FIVE
--------------------------------------------------At this point, Mef was gnawing on Sonic's right arm, Zim was pulling his left, and Brianna was shouting in his ears. They all stopped and looked up. "What are tu looking at?" Sonic asked. A claw grabbed Sonic's head and trapped him in a dome and pulled him up. He struggled to get out, but to no avail. "Thank tu Zim, but I need your help no more! Here's your reward! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!" Dr. Eggman shouted, and dropped a emparedado, sándwich de on Zim's head. "Traitor!" Zim shouted as Robotnik flew away with Sonic. Once Robotnik had reached his building, they saw Sonic get out. He growled and turned black and chased Robotnik through the building. "And at this point, Humpteh Dumpteh is screwed!" gir said. Scourge walked por and said, "So... that didn't work out. Want to registrarse the Suppression Squad?" he asked. "Are they capable of destroying Mobius?" Zim asked. "Maybe. But I do know that they are alot stronger than Robotnik." Scourge said. "We're in!" Zim shouted. "Great!" Scourge said. "First job?" Zim asked. "Anything evil." Scourge said. "We are going to go plant some bombs, then." Zim said. LATER.... They noticed a fat cat sitting in a place where they had planted a bomb. It finally blew up."Help! I've fallen and I can't get up!" It shouted. Another one blew up where a red echidna was sitting. He was holding a giant green emerald. He dropped it, and it landed in Zim's hands. "Hahahaha!" Wait 'til Scourge sees what I found!" Zim said, running with the giant emerald.
TO BE CONTINUED
Chapter 6 coming soon! What will the Suppression Squad to with the giant emerald?
--------------------------------------------------At this point, Mef was gnawing on Sonic's right arm, Zim was pulling his left, and Brianna was shouting in his ears. They all stopped and looked up. "What are tu looking at?" Sonic asked. A claw grabbed Sonic's head and trapped him in a dome and pulled him up. He struggled to get out, but to no avail. "Thank tu Zim, but I need your help no more! Here's your reward! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!" Dr. Eggman shouted, and dropped a emparedado, sándwich de on Zim's head. "Traitor!" Zim shouted as Robotnik flew away with Sonic. Once Robotnik had reached his building, they saw Sonic get out. He growled and turned black and chased Robotnik through the building. "And at this point, Humpteh Dumpteh is screwed!" gir said. Scourge walked por and said, "So... that didn't work out. Want to registrarse the Suppression Squad?" he asked. "Are they capable of destroying Mobius?" Zim asked. "Maybe. But I do know that they are alot stronger than Robotnik." Scourge said. "We're in!" Zim shouted. "Great!" Scourge said. "First job?" Zim asked. "Anything evil." Scourge said. "We are going to go plant some bombs, then." Zim said. LATER.... They noticed a fat cat sitting in a place where they had planted a bomb. It finally blew up."Help! I've fallen and I can't get up!" It shouted. Another one blew up where a red echidna was sitting. He was holding a giant green emerald. He dropped it, and it landed in Zim's hands. "Hahahaha!" Wait 'til Scourge sees what I found!" Zim said, running with the giant emerald.
TO BE CONTINUED
Chapter 6 coming soon! What will the Suppression Squad to with the giant emerald?
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking dulces form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed zorro, fox walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so tu say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the zorro, fox he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
tu can have a detailed character, if tu want so.
tu can have simply character, if tu want so.
There is only one think tu must remember:
Make the character's diseño fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic fan Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
tu can have a detailed character, if tu want so.
tu can have simply character, if tu want so.
There is only one think tu must remember:
Make the character's diseño fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I