hola Guys!! Here's some short songs I wrote....give me your opinions and suggestions...hope tu like 'em

The first one is called 'Hi friend':
All the minutos I spent with tu
were always what I wanted to do

When tu were far away
Everyday I used to pray..For tu to come back home..
For tu to come back home...

SO Hi friend..Hi again
tu really made me feel the pain
SO Hi friend..Hi again
tu really made me feel the pain

When everybody left me alone
When everybody left me home
Anybody I wanted to find..Then I found tu por my side..

SO Hi friend..Hi again
tu really made me feel the pain
SO Hi friend..Hi again
tu really made me feel the pain


The segundo one is The Sun Will Bright..it's a duet:


Guy:
canto this song
Feeling alone
where all my friends are gone?
I tried to scream
I tried to fight
I tried to keep my head up high

Girl:
I know it's hard to be alone
I know it's hard to get along
tu have to keep holding on
Cus..I'll help tu to fight
I'll spend the night
With tu por my side
The sun will bright

Guy:
I was alone
I was afraid
Until she came
Until she said

Both:
I'll help tu to fight
I'll spend the night
With tu por my side
The sun will bright

Both:
So if you're angry
If tu wanna hide
Just keep smiling
Just keep trying
Cus the sun will bight...