please don't be harsh this is my first chapter and i hope tu guys will amor it. thanks for lectura and comentario

Chapter 1
As I looked at my baby brother, I felt the sudden to shed some tears. I looked at his beautiful blue eys, I couldn’t believe this baby would be able to know his real parents and think that his aunt was his mom and his uncle was his father. Our parents abandoned us when jake was born. My name is Sarah and im his older sister. Im 17 and we live in Rancho Cordova. We aren’t poor, o rich. The night our parents abandoned us they dicho that they’re going somewhere because...

I've seen a lot of artículos about Faeries online, but it seemed that quite a lot of them were más about Winx/Disney-type hadas then the Faeries I think of.
So here's just some of the 'darker' stuff on Faeries...:)
A good thing to keep in mind is that Faeries have different morals than we do. That does not mean they are evil; they just view right and wrong differently than we do.
For that reason, it is good to be cautious around Faeries, and to never anger them. Don't do anything that will let tu see them without their permission, for example, putting Faery Ointment on your eyelids o touching...