-2 years before-
Darkness - *sits on bed* hmm...
Demon - What little poni, pony can't handle missions to kill other Ponies?
Darkness - that's not it...
Blackshadow - give him a break.
Demon - Shut up! Also tu should address me as master.
Blackshadow - I'm not you're maid I'm you're fiancé... And I don't want to-
Demon - cut this crap! *slaps her* hehe... You're mine...
Demon King - can tu take it like that Darkness...
Darkness - ...
Demon King - *gives dagger* tu chose... *leave room*
Demon - Yea kill yourself because tu drag us dow- ugh...
Darkness - *have dagger in his body* I don't follow orders *slices neck* ... *looks on BlackShadow* sorry...
Blackshadow - I didn't cared about that asshole...
Darkness - ... K the
Blackshadow - what tu trying to do... Why tu joined us...
Darkness - I'm on exile...
Blackshadow - why tu joined someone who kill your family...
Darkness - do I know *going to bed* let me sleep...
Blackshadow - *walks up to his bed* what is it tell me.
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - Great... Stay mute...
Darkness - tell me what is friendship... Love... And all those feelings...
Blackshadow - I... Can't explain them...
Darkness - who is my friend who is enemy.
Blackshadow - I know Im your friend...
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - ...
Darkness - we know ea h other for 2 years...
Blackshadow - what do tu insist...
Darkness - let's run away...
Blackshadow - what...
Darkness - I don't want to live here...
Blackshadow - neither do I...
Darkness - same as lab eh...
Blackshadow - do tu remember the day...
Darkness - in the garden... We were stupid...
Blackshadow - "when I grow up we gonna get married" I still remember...
Darkness - Still... Ponies treated tu like trash...
Blackshadow - tu were only poni, pony that liked me...
Darkness - ....
Blackshadow - Do tu still feel the same... About marriage...
Darkness - I don't know what I feel... But I want to protect you.
Blackshadow - *sigh* *whispers to self* I hope tu once will tell me the words...
-1 año later-
Blackshadow - you're leaving?
Darkness - indeed...
Blackshadow - why...
Darkness - Its time to end this war...
Blackshadow - don't leave me...
Darkness - Who dicho I am...
Blackshadow - huh?
Darkness - I will need your help...
-present time-
Lightning - I never knew tu had someone that close...
Bluewave - I feel amor in the air!
Lightning - Hehehe... At least now I know tu weren't alone this whole time...
Darkness - I think I am too but I can't say that is love.
Blackshadow - *sigh*
Whiteheart - I can see it... *grab sword*
Lightning - I think so to- WAIT!
Whiteheart - *stabs Darkness from behind*
Darkness - w...why...
Whiteheart - tu killed my family... So this is vengeance...
Darkness - *falls on ground*
Lightning - DAMNIT!
Blackshadow - NOOO! *falls on knees* no... no... nononono... *grabs her scythe* ... You're... Going to die with him...
Whiteheart - huh...
Blackshadow - *prepares to attack*
Darkness *grabs her hoof* stop...
Blackshadow - But...
Darkness - I deserve to die here...
Bluewave - *slams on table* No... We are comrades... I never believed tu would do something like that Whiteheart... I believe tu *takes medic pack* hang on...
Blackshadow - I'll try to use magic!
Whiteheart - I-
Lightning - leave... Please... I'll. Comfort stuff...
Whiteheart - *leaves tent* what... Did I... Why did I...
T.B.C
Darkness - *sits on bed* hmm...
Demon - What little poni, pony can't handle missions to kill other Ponies?
Darkness - that's not it...
Blackshadow - give him a break.
Demon - Shut up! Also tu should address me as master.
Blackshadow - I'm not you're maid I'm you're fiancé... And I don't want to-
Demon - cut this crap! *slaps her* hehe... You're mine...
Demon King - can tu take it like that Darkness...
Darkness - ...
Demon King - *gives dagger* tu chose... *leave room*
Demon - Yea kill yourself because tu drag us dow- ugh...
Darkness - *have dagger in his body* I don't follow orders *slices neck* ... *looks on BlackShadow* sorry...
Blackshadow - I didn't cared about that asshole...
Darkness - ... K the
Blackshadow - what tu trying to do... Why tu joined us...
Darkness - I'm on exile...
Blackshadow - why tu joined someone who kill your family...
Darkness - do I know *going to bed* let me sleep...
Blackshadow - *walks up to his bed* what is it tell me.
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - Great... Stay mute...
Darkness - tell me what is friendship... Love... And all those feelings...
Blackshadow - I... Can't explain them...
Darkness - who is my friend who is enemy.
Blackshadow - I know Im your friend...
Darkness - ...
Blackshadow - ...
Darkness - we know ea h other for 2 years...
Blackshadow - what do tu insist...
Darkness - let's run away...
Blackshadow - what...
Darkness - I don't want to live here...
Blackshadow - neither do I...
Darkness - same as lab eh...
Blackshadow - do tu remember the day...
Darkness - in the garden... We were stupid...
Blackshadow - "when I grow up we gonna get married" I still remember...
Darkness - Still... Ponies treated tu like trash...
Blackshadow - tu were only poni, pony that liked me...
Darkness - ....
Blackshadow - Do tu still feel the same... About marriage...
Darkness - I don't know what I feel... But I want to protect you.
Blackshadow - *sigh* *whispers to self* I hope tu once will tell me the words...
-1 año later-
Blackshadow - you're leaving?
Darkness - indeed...
Blackshadow - why...
Darkness - Its time to end this war...
Blackshadow - don't leave me...
Darkness - Who dicho I am...
Blackshadow - huh?
Darkness - I will need your help...
-present time-
Lightning - I never knew tu had someone that close...
Bluewave - I feel amor in the air!
Lightning - Hehehe... At least now I know tu weren't alone this whole time...
Darkness - I think I am too but I can't say that is love.
Blackshadow - *sigh*
Whiteheart - I can see it... *grab sword*
Lightning - I think so to- WAIT!
Whiteheart - *stabs Darkness from behind*
Darkness - w...why...
Whiteheart - tu killed my family... So this is vengeance...
Darkness - *falls on ground*
Lightning - DAMNIT!
Blackshadow - NOOO! *falls on knees* no... no... nononono... *grabs her scythe* ... You're... Going to die with him...
Whiteheart - huh...
Blackshadow - *prepares to attack*
Darkness *grabs her hoof* stop...
Blackshadow - But...
Darkness - I deserve to die here...
Bluewave - *slams on table* No... We are comrades... I never believed tu would do something like that Whiteheart... I believe tu *takes medic pack* hang on...
Blackshadow - I'll try to use magic!
Whiteheart - I-
Lightning - leave... Please... I'll. Comfort stuff...
Whiteheart - *leaves tent* what... Did I... Why did I...
T.B.C
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw cine (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her más like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for más of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw cine (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her más like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for más of my latest story..