Please note..
This isn't like my other stories that involve creepy pastas.
This one is fully serious.
But still contains brutal violence and swearing.
So don't read it, if your sensitive to that stuff.
The point of this story is mostrando how it COULD of been written.
Instead of the twisted comedy it really was made into, with three brain dead fillies, and a horny psychopath.
This verison one has NO sex..
Sorry if tu were hoping for that.
But I'm not a friggin pervert.. :(
It's meant to be terrifying.
So, Be aware of that.
The story is inspired from Walking Dead NO SANCTUARY..
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Hi, it's me Scootaloo.
It started off as any normal day.
And the three of us were hanging out as usual.
When suddenly, out of nowhere, we were approached por that Trixie girl.
But something seemed off about her.
For one thing, she usually has such beautiful eyes.
But today they seemed, empty looking. And oddly spooky.
And then there was her fur.
Trixie has always been one to keep pelaje, piel combed and shiny.
But today it was the complete opposite. Witch is odd.
She looks like she's been up for weeks.
"You okay Trixie. tu look... Different" I insisted.
"Sorry.. Been really busy lately.. Helping Pinkie with her new... Hobby" Trixie said, actuación strangely.. Even for her.
Pinkie?
What is up with her these days anyway.
First arco iris Dash goes to help her with baking.
And the very siguiente day, Pinkie goes around telling everyone that Dashie has moved away from Ponyville forever.
And Pinkie herself is always hiding out in that in that creepy basement.
Only coming out to give us these bizzare numbers.
"Say. Rarity has asked me to take care of tu three" Trixie said, still actuación strangely.
"Ya mean like babysit, Were a little old for that" AppleBloom giggled.
"It's.. Uhh.. A little different than that" Trixie said, still actuación strangely.
"What tu mean?" I asked, getting suspicious.
"Uhhh... Who wants a cupcake?" Trixie asked, nervously handing three cupcakes.
"Well.. They DO look good" I said, eyeing the chocolate one in the middle.
"It's Pinkie's specialty... She heard what I gonna be doing for Rarity, and insisted on using these" Trixie told us.
This was an odd thing to say. But we didn't care. We ate them up.
"What now?" AppleBloom and I both asked the blue unicorn before us.
"Now, tu sleep" Trixie dicho quietly.
Puzzled, I opened my mouth but felt instantly light-headed. A wave of dizziness washed over me, the world spun, and segundos later I collapsed to the floor.
I'm guessing the other two did as well, because I heard falling sounds before blacking out completely..
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After what I assume to be few hours, I slowly began regaining consciousness, seeing a blue mare in my blurry vision.
But I must been taking too long to awaken because she soon slapped me, while yelling out "WAKE UP!"
With a small scream I was now fully awake.
"... Trixie?" I asked, now being able to see the mare properly.
Trixie didn't respond, she went into the back.
I'm pretty sure I heard a large cuchillo being sharpened from back there, witch started scaring me.
I struggled to mover but what I failed to realize till now, is that my hooves were chained against a wall.
I was literary trapped there.
"S Scootaloo?" asked a familiar voice.
"A AppleBloom!?" I asked, looking around, but it's too dark to see anything.
The whole room was pitch black.
Where were we!?
"Hey. Keep it down" Trixie said, returning to the room.
But sense the room was so black. All I saw were her big purple eyes.
But as I dicho before.
All the usual beauty they have, is replaced por a very unpleasant feeling they were giving out for the first time in.. Ever.
"It smells funny in here!" AppleBloom whined.
"I can't see!" Sweetie Belle whined.
"Oh. Right.. Thanks for reminding me" Trixie's voice said, before the lights were flipped on.
But the truth is.
I think I much preferred the darkness.
There were no windows, and with that, no feelings of hope o nice sunlight.
It was some kind of large construction room.
Against the muro were various tools.
Most of them being large cuchillo like objects, all of them clearly sharp.
Some even had blood on them.
there was also a blood stained wooden bat against a corner.
But the rest of the room had barely anything inside it.
But there was strong smell of something dead inside the room. But whatever it is, must be hidden somewhere.
Only thing I saw was sometime of trough in the middle of the room.
All this was only worsened when I realized I was chained again the wall, por my hooves.
I looked over.
So were Sweetie Belle and AppleBloom.
"Let us go Trixie!" I demanded.
"Or what?" Trixie laughed.
"Or we're tell Saten!" Applebloom cried, fear in her voice.
Trixie coldly laughed.
"Go ahead.. Tell him.. He already knows.. He knows what I do here.. Because unlike like your sister.. I never lie to him". Trixie cried.
This made me realize.
Trixie is still upset about how Saten fell for AppleJack before Trixie.
"Y.. Yer still upset over that?" AppleBloom asked nervously.
"(sighs).. Yes... (suddenly smiles a little) But don't worry... That isn't why your here.. This isn't PERSONAL.. What I do here.. It's never personal.. It's just, how it has to be.. It's just business" Trixie explained.
"B Business?" I asked nervously.
"Yes... And besides. It's Rarity who wants tu gone. Not me" Trixie added.
GONE!?
What the fuck dose that mean!?
To be continued..
This isn't like my other stories that involve creepy pastas.
This one is fully serious.
But still contains brutal violence and swearing.
So don't read it, if your sensitive to that stuff.
The point of this story is mostrando how it COULD of been written.
Instead of the twisted comedy it really was made into, with three brain dead fillies, and a horny psychopath.
This verison one has NO sex..
Sorry if tu were hoping for that.
But I'm not a friggin pervert.. :(
It's meant to be terrifying.
So, Be aware of that.
The story is inspired from Walking Dead NO SANCTUARY..
-------------------------------------------------------------------
Hi, it's me Scootaloo.
It started off as any normal day.
And the three of us were hanging out as usual.
When suddenly, out of nowhere, we were approached por that Trixie girl.
But something seemed off about her.
For one thing, she usually has such beautiful eyes.
But today they seemed, empty looking. And oddly spooky.
And then there was her fur.
Trixie has always been one to keep pelaje, piel combed and shiny.
But today it was the complete opposite. Witch is odd.
She looks like she's been up for weeks.
"You okay Trixie. tu look... Different" I insisted.
"Sorry.. Been really busy lately.. Helping Pinkie with her new... Hobby" Trixie said, actuación strangely.. Even for her.
Pinkie?
What is up with her these days anyway.
First arco iris Dash goes to help her with baking.
And the very siguiente day, Pinkie goes around telling everyone that Dashie has moved away from Ponyville forever.
And Pinkie herself is always hiding out in that in that creepy basement.
Only coming out to give us these bizzare numbers.
"Say. Rarity has asked me to take care of tu three" Trixie said, still actuación strangely.
"Ya mean like babysit, Were a little old for that" AppleBloom giggled.
"It's.. Uhh.. A little different than that" Trixie said, still actuación strangely.
"What tu mean?" I asked, getting suspicious.
"Uhhh... Who wants a cupcake?" Trixie asked, nervously handing three cupcakes.
"Well.. They DO look good" I said, eyeing the chocolate one in the middle.
"It's Pinkie's specialty... She heard what I gonna be doing for Rarity, and insisted on using these" Trixie told us.
This was an odd thing to say. But we didn't care. We ate them up.
"What now?" AppleBloom and I both asked the blue unicorn before us.
"Now, tu sleep" Trixie dicho quietly.
Puzzled, I opened my mouth but felt instantly light-headed. A wave of dizziness washed over me, the world spun, and segundos later I collapsed to the floor.
I'm guessing the other two did as well, because I heard falling sounds before blacking out completely..
-------------------------------------------------------------------
After what I assume to be few hours, I slowly began regaining consciousness, seeing a blue mare in my blurry vision.
But I must been taking too long to awaken because she soon slapped me, while yelling out "WAKE UP!"
With a small scream I was now fully awake.
"... Trixie?" I asked, now being able to see the mare properly.
Trixie didn't respond, she went into the back.
I'm pretty sure I heard a large cuchillo being sharpened from back there, witch started scaring me.
I struggled to mover but what I failed to realize till now, is that my hooves were chained against a wall.
I was literary trapped there.
"S Scootaloo?" asked a familiar voice.
"A AppleBloom!?" I asked, looking around, but it's too dark to see anything.
The whole room was pitch black.
Where were we!?
"Hey. Keep it down" Trixie said, returning to the room.
But sense the room was so black. All I saw were her big purple eyes.
But as I dicho before.
All the usual beauty they have, is replaced por a very unpleasant feeling they were giving out for the first time in.. Ever.
"It smells funny in here!" AppleBloom whined.
"I can't see!" Sweetie Belle whined.
"Oh. Right.. Thanks for reminding me" Trixie's voice said, before the lights were flipped on.
But the truth is.
I think I much preferred the darkness.
There were no windows, and with that, no feelings of hope o nice sunlight.
It was some kind of large construction room.
Against the muro were various tools.
Most of them being large cuchillo like objects, all of them clearly sharp.
Some even had blood on them.
there was also a blood stained wooden bat against a corner.
But the rest of the room had barely anything inside it.
But there was strong smell of something dead inside the room. But whatever it is, must be hidden somewhere.
Only thing I saw was sometime of trough in the middle of the room.
All this was only worsened when I realized I was chained again the wall, por my hooves.
I looked over.
So were Sweetie Belle and AppleBloom.
"Let us go Trixie!" I demanded.
"Or what?" Trixie laughed.
"Or we're tell Saten!" Applebloom cried, fear in her voice.
Trixie coldly laughed.
"Go ahead.. Tell him.. He already knows.. He knows what I do here.. Because unlike like your sister.. I never lie to him". Trixie cried.
This made me realize.
Trixie is still upset about how Saten fell for AppleJack before Trixie.
"Y.. Yer still upset over that?" AppleBloom asked nervously.
"(sighs).. Yes... (suddenly smiles a little) But don't worry... That isn't why your here.. This isn't PERSONAL.. What I do here.. It's never personal.. It's just, how it has to be.. It's just business" Trixie explained.
"B Business?" I asked nervously.
"Yes... And besides. It's Rarity who wants tu gone. Not me" Trixie added.
GONE!?
What the fuck dose that mean!?
To be continued..
