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posted by bluethunder25
Twilight has come a long way since the first episode of MLP-FiM. At first, she was an antisocial bookworm who wasn't interested in making friends and keep her head in libros virtually all the time. Now.......well, she's still a bookworm, but with más friends. Not only that, but her magic has improved vastly over the course of her studies with Princess Celestia. And with her transformation into an alicorn princess, Twilight has proven to have the potential to be one of the most powerful ponies in Equestria. But with that being said, it's about time that Twilight had a decent rival character.

In the past there have at least 2 characters who have had the potential to be great rivals to Twilight, but have come up short in the ordeal.

First off is The Great and Powerful Trixie. Trixie has often been described as what would happen to Twilight if she allowed her talent to cause her to become overbearing and boastful, which of course, made her to be a perfect foil for Twilight and she was practically the only one who could match her in terms of magical abilities. The episode, 'Magic Duel' had potential to really elevate the rivalry between them; Trixie had a reason to seek revenge against Twilight, heck, Trixie even managed to beat her with the Alicorn Amulet, but after Trixie was defeated por her in the segundo round, she was automatically redeemed. She should've remained a recurring antagonist for Twilight in the series, other than her role in the segundo Equestria Girls.

And speaking of which, that brings me to the segundo character, Sunset Shimmer. Man, tu talk about wasted potential. Now, I'm not saying Sunset was horrible, but she could've much better. She was the perfect foil for Twilight. She was Princess Celestia's student who abandoned her studies when she didn't get what she wanted right away. Basically, what would've happened if Twilight was impatient. Her staredown with Twilight in the first movie was as epic as it could get, so from there, tu could tell this had the potential for something great. It was made even más so por their segundo confrontation in the darkened hallway; she freakin' threatened to take Spike away from her!! Not only that, she manipulated the Humane 5 into disliking each other and di her damndess to make sure Twilight didn't get elected as princess of the Fall Formal. And when that didn't work, she kidnaps Spike and threatens to destroy the portal back inicial unless she gives her, her crown. And when that didn't work, she tackles Twilight and goes for the crown herself and finally gets it, turning into a hellish demon. And just like Trixie, after she's defeated and utterly humiliated, she reforms. One mistake she made was after she kidnapped Spike. What she should've done was threatened to hurt Spike if she didn't give her the crown and then let him go after she gave the crown to her. And don't even get me started on her defeat; there she is lying in a crater, all her power gone, completely and utterly defeated and humiliated, talked down por Twilight, having it all thrown in her face, and she just apologizes. Sunset seems to me like the kind of person who wouldn't just accept defeat like that. Instead of apologizing, what she should've done was get up out of the crater, push Twilight to the side and walk away. That would've left leeway for her to come back and try to get revenge on Twilight for what she did to her. She could've done a lot más to mostrar that she was a capable rival for Twilight. While she works as a reformed villain, she would've worked even better as Twilight's greatest rival.

Now let's talk about a third character who still has potential; Starlight Glimmer. Not much say about her except she's pretty much an equalist
how believes in what she says. What got my attention was when she literally cut off Twilight when she was making one of her friendship speeches and when she rejected Twilight's wisdom after her defeat. She has the potential, but I don't quite see her as an ultimate rival. Only the future will tell.

First, a good rival serves as an antagonistic foil, like looking at one's dark reflection. This in many ways, causes conflict and even relatability between the rivals. This is turn makes the feud even más emotional than it already is.

Second, Twilight's rival should be willing to do whatever it takes to bring her down. Sunset Shimmer came close to this when it came to Spike, but Twilight's rival should absolutely, in no way, shape, o form, pull any punches in order to take her down.

Third, Twilight's rival should equal her in magic. Trixie was able to hold her own against Twilight, but her rival should have the potential to surpass her in magic, so much so to the point where Twilight has to push her abilities like they've never been pushed before.

Fourth, Twilight's rival should be someone who can really make her mad. Someone who can push Twilight's emotions to the edge. Someone whose words, actions, and deeds will get Twilight so furious, that it brings out a side of her that no one ever thought existed.

So with that being said, I think it goes without saying that Twilight is the kind of character that needs a strong, VERY STRONG, rival that can push her to her limits. Someone who can get a win o two over her and really cause her to think about how she can win. Twilight needs this, not only to mostrar just how far she's comes, but to see what happens when she's faced with virtually, a reflection of herself.
posted by FlameMusical123
Hi! I'm new here. Call me Flame. My first post was a picture called 'Meet Flame Air'. This is to introduce her properly.

Name: Flame Air
Coat color: Sunshine yellow
Eye Colors: Blood red(left), sky blue(right)
Hair Colors: Tangerine orange, ruby red
Cutie Mark: 2 musical notes (forgot their names)
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Hairstyle
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Flame's hairstyle has a rig-shaw like design. Sort of like Mordecai from Regular Show.
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Origin
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Flame used to live in Manhattan, till her family got fed up with the insults thrown...
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posted by applejackrocks1
Sugar Sprinkles had packed her clothing and other items. She was in the Train Station with Nikki and her bags...

Nikki: 2 tickets to Ponyville please.
Lady: That would be 2 dollars.
Sugar: Here. *gives 2 dollars to Lady*
Lady: Thank you. Here tu go. *hands tickets to Nikki*
Nikki: Thank you.
Lady: Have a nice day!
Sugar: *enters train*
Nikki: *enters train*
Sugar: Wh-
Nikki: *sits on seat*
Sugar: *sits siguiente to Nikki*
Nikki: I'm taking tu somewhere where tu can be happy.
Sugar: Whoa. It stinks.
Nikki: Yep. It's the skunk in the bag.
Sugar: tu brought it?!
Nikki: Duh. I have to. If I set it free here, somepony...
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posted by applejackrocks1
Everypony: *laughs*
Mare: Yup! *slaps Nikki's back*
Nikki: Ow! Stop!
Colt: What are tu doing here? Oh wait! tu work for Diamond!
Nikki: I would never work for that whale!
Mare: Watch your mouth orphan.
Nikki: I am not an orphan!
Colt: Says the girl who d-
Nikki: Shut up!!!
Diamond: Ehem. *Grabs phone*
Nikki: *eye widened*
Diamond: *smirks* (puts phone down)
Colt: I have a long time without seeing you!
Mare: We thought tu were dead!
Colt: HEY! The orphan got her cutie mark!
Mare: Let me see!
Nikki: *covers cutie mark*
Colt: GET HER!
Mare: *grabs her hooves*
Nikki: HEY!
Everypony: *laughs*
Colt: Your cutie mark..Is...
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posted by applejackrocks1
An hora later, Nikki was in Canterlot. She got off the train....


Nikki: Sir?
Pony: Yes?
Nikki: How far away is this place? *hands a piece of paper to him*
Pony: *reads it* 4 blocks away, turn right.
Nikki: Okay, Thank you.
Pony No problem. *walks away*
Nikki: *whispers* 4 blocks, turn right..

30 minutos later, after following the stranger's directions, Nikki was in front of her client's door...

Nikki: *knocks on door*

Moments later, a mare opened the door. She looked at Nikki with disgusted. Nikki's eyes widened. "It can't be," she thought. The mare flipped back her mane...

Nikki: Good Morning! I'm the-...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The siguiente morning, Harry, and Peter went to a crime scene. Another poni, pony was killed por Scorpio during the suicide scene.

Harry: He attacked at a perfect time.
Peter: Yeah. Now what?
Harry: Now we find out about his siguiente move.
Captain: Listen up tu two. Scorpio sent us another letter.
Harry: What does it say?

Dear SFPD,

I am glad to tell tu that I no longer want $150,000. Instead I want to double it, and have $300,000. Come up with it if tu can pussies.

Scorpio

Harry: Well, he definetly likes to call us names.
Peter: Don't remind me.
Harry: I know what we'll do.

Next night, Harry, and his partner...
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posted by Dragon-88
 Blue Bolt, ready for fun!
Blue Bolt, ready for fun!
OK, so on with this story. Blue Bolt (me) is sleeping in his house situated in Ponyville. Right now, he is enjoying a good night's sleep, and hopes the morning will be normal. Too bad it's not gonna happen!


Bolt: (sees sunrise) Time to have another nice day!

Pinkie: (busts down door) Hey, new guy! Wakey wakey! It's a requirement that new residents meet the princess!

Bolt: I hope tu can fix the door tu destroyed!

Pinkie: Sorry...I'll wait while tu get ready! I'll walk with you. Nice digs!

Bolt: (brushing teeth) OK, that was random. I'm new here, and Pinkie's a little energetic! Are they all like...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Chapter 4
Bad ideas

While most of my stories were enjoyed por some, there were a few terrible ideas that I made for fanfics. The first one was Mane Wars which turned out to be very short, and had a bad story line. I was so mad with it, that I deleted it. I only tried doing it, because it was based off this other TV mostrar I saw.

Next were three artículos I publicado which had two stories in one. I thought it would be good since it was very long, but it turned out to be too long.

I republished six Con Mane stories which had all the parts in one article. No one read them, even though I was told to do...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
It's hard to do what tu can for the fandom of bronies. It really is, but once tu get started, it's like there's no turning back. That's how I feel sometimes.

Chapter 1
Before the bronies

Three years ago, I created my account for fanpop. At that time MLP: FIM wasn't around, for at least a few más months. The año was 2010, and I was 13 years old, having been born in December of 1996.

During 2010, I came on here for one reason only. Sonic The Hedgehog. Back then, I was a huge fan of something way past cool. I liked it so much, I even made my own fan character. My account name is the same as...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Snowflake
Snowflake
Now this is the newest James Bond parody on the newest James Bond movie. We find our hero Con Mane slowly walking through a hallway. It's dark, and the shadows block much of his face.

Con: *opens door*
P: Where is it?
Con: It's gone. We have an agent down.
P: Are tu sure it's gone?
Con: *checks* It's gone.
Brosnan: *dying*
Con: *grabs cloth* Hang in there.
P: There's no time for that!
Con: I have to stop the bleeding!
P: Leave him!
Brosnan: Go! Don't worry about me.
Con: *leaves*
Snow: *drives truck* Let's drive.
Con: *gets in* Did tu find Vetrice anywhere?
Snow: *looks* There. In the white Limo....
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posted by applejackrocks1
Back to the story.....


Brawny: Applejack, tu stay here. I'll go get some money out of the bank. *swims off*
Applejack: *looks around* My, My...
*Suddenly, 3 other merponies swam to AJ, surrounding her*

MP1: I see that your a new loser here *laughs*
Applejack: Loser?!? Have ya looked into a mirror?!
All: Oooooo
MP2: Wait a segundo girls! She's not one of us! She's an earth Pony!
Applejack: *sneezes*
MP3: *laughs* I see that your sick...It's better to let tu go with the flow, shall we?
Applejack: What? *coughs*
MP1: We don't want tu to die with pain, Sugarlame.
Applejack: *is weak* Please...Just leave...
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They looked everywhere for Felix after the race, but Sean, Daredevil, and Nikki could not find him.

Sean: Where do tu think he went?
Nikki: Did he go to Russia?
Daredevil: No, theres two más races left. He couldn't have gone back to Russia.
Sean: I'd be surprised if he did.
Daredevil: Yeah, well we'll find out soon. But now we have to make some money.

I think tu all know what they're doing. Chasing a truck with drugs? WRONG! They were chasing a truck with money. Of course it was euros, and pounds, but they'd buy más stuff then a U.S dollar bill.

Sean: Without arco iris Dash, Daredevil will have...
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All four of the main characters went to London. When they got on the boat, they were met por other racers.

Mexican: Hey. Do tu know how long it'll take for us to get into England?
Sean: Don't know, don't care. Just sit back, and relax.
Felix: *waxing car*

About 3 hours later, we got to the docks. Ponies were excited to see the arriving contestants.

british ponies: *taking pictures*
mexican: No! No taking photograph!
Sean: It's a good thing.
mexican: It is? Ok then.
Queen of england: Welcome everypony! I am so glad all of tu could make it.
Felix: Thanks. *inflating tires*
Q.O.E: tu all will stay...
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The last solstice

Chapter 5: Those purple eyes


Nocturnal Mirage is startled from his sleep por a sharp clashing sound.

“What?!” the dark blue stallion sits up in his cama rapidly.

He looks around in the large room. It takes him a few segundos to realize where he is. Oh, that’s right… you’re here again… he acknowledges. There’s an opened book on his belly. He fell asleep lectura it.

The sound of breaking glass brings him back to reality completely. Mirage shakes his head and puts the book aside. He hears it again. Glass clashing against marble.

“Gosh darn it! The third night in a row!”...
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posted by NocturnalMirage
The last solstice

Chapter 3: Solitude


Luna was right.

I was right too! Mirage thinks.

The Moon goddess dicho that her sister will probably greet her new guard in the form of a letter. And Mirage suspected that the alicorn of the Sun was listening. The cobalt stallion smirked. He imagined the picture. The all mighty Celestia, the ruler of Equestria nestles up to the door very closely. Probably with an anxious look on her face, for she worries because her calm loneliness is disturbed.

“Ha!” Mirage exclaims loudly, as the picture he imagined fills up his soul with luscious pleasure for a moment....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The two spies went on until they reached the el espacio ships.

Twilight: Man we found the spaceships.
Con: Hey, look over there.
Twilight: They have a map of the cities they're attacking.
Con: San Fran, Tokyo, and Hong Kong.
Twilight: Man if we're to stop those rockets from hitting them cities we have to get on the ship. I have a plan. *teleports them onto ship*
Con: Perfect. We just need to get in disguise now.
Twilight: Right *gets disguise*
Con: *stares at Twilight's ass*
Twilight: May I help you?
Con: tu already are *gets in disguise*
Twilight: *gets in disguise* We need to kill everypony in this...
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posted by SomeoneButNoone
 Steven
Steven
1 año later... Vinyl has been killed and... Dan too... soo... yea...
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ACT |||
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Era End Coming...

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FireDash - I gonna buy bannananana... what?
NightFire - CAN tu SHUT UP!
TearDrop - brother... tu gonna buy jugo, jugo de for me
NightFire - of course
FireDash - banana... banana... banananana
NightFire - uhhh...
Mare - HELP HELP!
FireDash - huh?
Mare - Undead UNDEAD!
GoldenHorn - HAHAHA IM ALAIVE
NightFire - 0_0
FireDash - bananana wait... OH MY GOD!
NightFire - Hide Behaind Me TearDrop!
GEA Soldier - GO GO GO!!!! *shoot*
GoldenHorn - *teleport*
GEA Soldier...
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Twilight, and Pinkie Pie returned to the Ponyville safehouse.

Dan: Where have tu two been?
Twilight: Man I just took over some businesses, with help from Pinkie Pie.
Pinkie Pie: She knows what to do now.
Dan: Excellent. The Las Pegasus mob says that they will try to attack our safehouse. We gotta prevent them from doing that.
Twilight: No problem.

The Las Pegasus mob soon arrived.

Sean: They're here!!
Twilight: *grabs grease gun* Let's do this.
L.P. ponies: Dan, have your mafia surrender!
Dan: Howabout tu screw yourselves?
L.P. ponies: Wrong answer! *fire pistolas at Dan*
Dan: Wrong mover *grabs molotov*...
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aguardiente de manzana, applejack & Rarity went on to rob the bank.

Rarity: *grabs gun*
Applejack: Not yet! Ya have to wait until you're inside the bank!
Rarity: How about this? *makes gun disappear*
Applejack: Now ya have no gun.
Rarity: Oh yes I do, but it's invisible.
Applejack: Alright, let's just rob this bank.
guard: Hello ladies.
Rarity: *shoots guard*
Applejack: *kills other guards*
Rarity: I'm gonna open that vault. *magically opens vault*
Applejack: What are ya'll staring at? A southern poni, pony working with someone british?
normal pony: Uuhhh
Applejack: *kills normal pony*
Rarity: Got the money let's go!
Applejack:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Con & Hattan were taking 20 paces, and then it happened.

Con: *fires gun* Where did Hattan go?
Sneak Peak: She forgot ammo for her gun. You'll have to continue the duel with her that way.
Con: Why didn't tu tell me?
Sneak Peak: tu were concentrating very well, and I didn't wanna disturb that.
Con: tu know, I've never killed a midget before. But there's a first time for everything.
Sneak Peak: I'm offended.
Con: Good. *walks inside*
Sneak Peak: *runs to control room*
Con: *looks around* What kind of a place is this?
Sneak Peak: It's a funhouse. Me & Ms. Scaramanga worked on it together!...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 The Golden gun
The Golden gun
The first Con Mane story to have OC's that aren't mine. Let's begin on a tropical island 8 miles from Hong Kong.

Hattan: *sunbathing* Sneak Peak, can tu check the main entrance?
S.P: Right away Ms. Scaramanga.
business pony: Are tu Hattan Scaramanga?
Sneak Peak: No, I'm her assisstant.
business pony: Where is she?
Sneak Peak: Go in that way.
business pony: *enters room* Hattan Scaramanga.
Hattan: Hi. I just realised tu have your gun, and I don't have mine.
business pony: That's too bad. *shoots gun*
Hattan: *dodges bullet*
S.P: *turns off lights*
business pony: Where are you? mostrar yourself!
Hattan:...
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