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posted by NocturnalMirage
Useful tips for making an OC

Greetings!

Okay, so I bumped into some... hmm... how to put this delicately? Some OC's on different MLP websites over the past few days, which were considerably less than innovative... So I decided to make this guide, based on my personal experiences, sharing the possible difficulties one may encounter when creating an original character. Below tu will find the factors, I think are vital for making a good OC.

1,Visual design

In most cases, the process starts with this, no matter if tu use one of the poni, pony creators o draw your character por your self. I wouldn't want to go into details about choosing a race (earth, pegasus, unicorn), because if you've already decided to make an OC, you've most likely decided what shall be its race as well. But things can go wrong in the very beginning. When forming the character's appearance, many people seem to make the mistake of using wrong color schemes. Meaning, they use colores that doesn't go well together, they don't harmonize. Sometimes, an extraordinary appearance can work, but there's a high probability it won't. The exterior diseño of a character is just one thing, alone, it will not make the character special. Most of these OCs that fit into this category; either have too bright, neon-like color schemes, which makes them look like they were colored with highlighters, o as I said, the colores doesn't really harmonize together. For example, royal blue/dark blue and red, dark brown and neon green, o neon green and bright neon pink/magenta. In addition to all of this, there are some hues that go well together, but deviate too far from the original canon's atmosphere and depiction. The best example for this is black and blood red. Avoid this combination like the plague! I know, because when I was a newbie in the fandom, my first OC looked like that. Yeah... bad decision. Anyways, try to use colores that won't attract too much attention; meaning, it is best if your OC could stand in the background with the other ponies in an episode, but wouldn't stand out from the crowd. Suggestions: white goes well with almost any color, if used as the primary color for the coat. Warm, medium brown harmonizes with golden yellow, ocher and beige. Cream, o mantequilla yellow can go well with light red. Sky blue/royal blue colores can harmonize with darker colors, but as I said: black is only an option for the mane and tail.

2, Background story

This is as important as the visual appearance! Many OCs lack this particular trait. The character comes to life with a well thought out back story. This is the part that depends entirely on your creativity. Just set your mind free and let it roam to different “lands”! However, there are some restrictions, some things that should be avoided. The most common example for this is when people relate their OCs to main characters o royalty. Daughter of Twilight, son of Celestia... Yes, it's fun to dream, I know, but this concept is very risky and works only in a few cases, where the creator of the OC has an extraordinary talent, way above the average. I'm talking about fanfics, of course; in Rps, it doesn't really matter. So the main objective here: don't disturb the original canon too much with your character's back story. If your OC interacts with canon characters within a fanfic, and forms different kinds of relationships with them... that's acceptable and good, but it shouldn't be a starting point. Also, here's another concept that works only in every 60 moons o so: try to avoid the tough orphan/last of its kind thing. It's been used many-many times. Excluding the above mentioned concepts, the possibilities are limitless. It all depends on you; just be creative and open minded. Don't be afraid to set your skills free!

3, Personality

This part is also essential, especially if you're planning to write a fanfic about your character. I've seen it many times, that people make too perfect characters. The traits of these OCs, are usually based on the combination of the personalities of the Mane 6. Don't do that, try to create an original personality that is the characteristic of your poni, pony only. Also keep in mind, that nothing is perfect. Luna and the Mane 6 are the best examples for that. Their characters have flaws, which makes them más “human”. It's a useful technique to write a lista of your OC's strengths and weaknesses. Don't be afraid to add some flaws; it'll only make your character stronger and deeper. What I do is, I always add a mental handicap to my character's personality; a mild psychological disorder if tu will. For instance, among my OCs, Nocturnal Mirage has inferiority complex, Summer Pride is a well functioning border-line personality, and Evergreen Whisper is obsessive and sometimes unable to mostrar compassion for other ponies. This is only my way, there are several other methods tu can use to implement some flaws in your character's personality; however, these positive and negative traits will determine your OC's interaction with other characters. Also, if tu do not have a single idea about your character's inner self, don't be frightened o sad! It is my experience, that participating in a few roleplays can easily fix that problem. Just registrarse an RP and go with the flow of events in a natural way and you'll see how the other players will help tu to form a personality around your OC in a jiffy. It is also a good technique to read some successful fanfics relevant to your interests and observe how the pros are doing it. To test how deep your character is, tu can simply ask others to describe your OC, using attributes. The better the description, the deeper your character is. The non-plus-ultra scenario is, when the descripción of other people matches the one in your mind, which means tu managed to convey your character's personality to others successfully.

4, No alicorns!

Based on what I've seen in about two years, since I've been a brony; an alicorn OC usually doesn't work. Why? I've dicho it before, but I'll say it again! Don't disturb the original canon too much! In my opinion, there are way too many alicorns in the mostrar already. Alicorns are supposed to be a special race; the highest elite in equestrian society, if tu will. An alicorn should be considered as a "rarity". Haha, see what I did there? ;) Okay, that was a terrible joke, I admit. I do not wish to judge anyone, but many people choose to create an alicorn OC is because they just want to stand out of the crowd. These characters often have shallow, vaguely described personalities (mainly getting inspiration from the six Elements of Harmony) without any weakness at all. They are all-knowing and all-powerful, but there's not much else. Of course there are some exceptions, like Faith, from the fanfic Faiths and Doubts (one of the best fanfics, I've ever read), but most of these characters could be an earth pony, a pegasus o a unicorn, based on their back story and personality traits. So, if tu don't feel a highly gifted, professional writer; I'd suggest tu to avoid making your OC into an alicorn. There's so much potential in the basic three poni, pony races, leave the royal duties to Celestia and Luna. Sigh... okay, Twilight and Cadence too.

Oki-doki-loki, I think that's all, but don't forget that these are merely my own PERSONAL impressions, observations and ideas; I cannot guarantee success, although I hope tu found these few lines to be helpful. :)
posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: August 23, 1959
Location: Cheyenne, Wyoming
Time: 8:52 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Pete was holding a meeting in the train yard. Everyone was there, even Nikki, and Meadow, because they arrived in a train delivering fuel to the Union Pacific.

Pete: Alright. I know our fuel supply has been very low, but today, that's all going to change. The Southern Pacific has sent a train over to us, that has *Counts the cars on Nikki's train* Fifteen? *Whispers to Nikki* I thought tu dicho there would be twenty five tank cars carrying fuel on your train.
Nikki: Sorry, but we're short on fuel as well....
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#4: MISTREATMENT OF TRIXIE:
This isn't like last time, were the ONLY reason I am sticking up for Trixie, is because she's just so adorable to look at.
No, no, this time I am NOT denying that Trixie was quite annoying.
That she was stubborn and over confident in herself.
And that she lied to an entire town, just for the attention.
And she did indeed deserve to be punished for her lies and rudeness.
But come on..
Did she really deserve to be shunned and mocked por all of Equestria, and lose her job as a magician and work as a rock farmer..

#3: MISTREATMENT OF IRON WILL:
Most fans label Iron Will as a...
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posted by alinah_09
____________________________
"Miss Shade!"

A voice called out to me from behind,sound of hoofsteps with it,coming closer. I turned around to see who it is and saw naranja hair and esmeralda green eyes...directly in front of my face.

"Wahhh!" I stumbled backwards. The figure in front of me laughed and immediately held out her hoof,I pouted and proceeded to grab the offered hoof-but in that instance,a flash came over me and suddenly the poni, pony offering her hoof out to me became non other than my best friend...Tropic. I widened my eyes and at that moment I could feel tears gloss my eyes,still staring...
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LATER THAT SAME EVENING:

The main six were gathered at a table.

Pinkie: (saddened) I can't believe it.. Saten just left like that..

Twilight: Oh, he'll be back.. He's just trying to impress that Starlight, girl..

AJ: Ah don't know Twilight. Ah think this may be más serious than ya realize.. Ah mean.. Deep down. Saten is a very depressed person.. And having the change to lose the cutie mark he never wanted in the first place.. This is a big opportunity for him.

Twilight: Relax, it'll be fi-

Rarity: (gasps) What in the name of Equestria is that?!

Shopkeeper: Welcome! Care to sample some local fashion?...
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Starlight Glimmer:NWelcome! I'm so pleased to have tu here.

Rainbow Dash: [groans]

Double Diamond: This is Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, arco iris Dash, and Twilight Sparkle... And, umm... We never got the red one's name..

Saten: (pervertly to Starlight) tu can call me "anything tu want"

Saten: I'm Saten Twist.. (a bit pervertly too Starlight) but tu could call me "anything tu want.

Starlight Glimmer: Riiight.. (whispers) your have to better then that.

Starlight Glimmer: (turns her attention to Twilight) Forgive my bluntness, but I'm assuming it's Princess Twilight Sparkle? We don't...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: August 16, 1959
Location: Ogden, Utah
Time: 6:50 AM
Railroad: Southern Pacific

Nikki, and Meadow were having breakfast.

Nikki: Drink some coffee.
Meadow: No thank you.
Nikki: tu should have some to keep tu awake.
Meadow: I don't need it.
Nikki: tu stayed up really late last night doing that drag racing bullshit. tu need to drink coffee.
Meadow: *Walks away*
Nikki: Where are tu going?
Meadow: Work.
Nikki: We have ten minutos until it starts!
Meadow: I don't care.

Nikki was concerned for Meadow. She never acted like this before. Later that day, Meadow was in Cheyenne, and Nikki was driving...
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LATER THAT DAY:
Saten: (groans) Ohh.. My head still hurts.
AppleJack: Well, that's what ya get for drinking five whole wine bottles at once.
Saten: (groans) Yeah, yeah..

Rainbow Dash: ''This'' is where the map sent us? It looks like the most boring place in Equestria.
Applejack: It's just an ordinary village full of ordinary poni, pony folk.
Twilight: Saten? Your from Fillydefia? Any idea what this town is called? 
Satan: That's just it.. I never seen this place before. Witch is weird..
Twilight: Hmmm... That "is" weird.
Fluttershy: I think it's lovely.
Satan: (groans) of coarse tu do..
Pinkie Pie: I don't...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Theme song >>>> link

Taxi Ponies: *Driving taxi cabs to the station*

Ponies On The Rails

Starring the Union Pacific ponies

Pierce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Railway Pony: *Driving freight train across a bridge going over the train tracks at the station.*
Metal Gloss: *Drives freight train under bridge*
Pony: *In the station, buying a ticket. As soon as he gets the ticket, he runs across the platform, and boards his train.*
Hawkeye: *Preparing train for departure*
Stylo: *Looking at orders on paper*
Hawkeye:...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
 Chimney Sweep
Chimney Sweep
Theme song >>>> link

Taxi Ponies: *Driving taxi cabs to the station*

Ponies On The Rails

Starring the Union Pacific ponies

Pierce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Railway Pony: *Driving freight train across a bridge going over the train tracks at the station.*
Metal Gloss: *Drives freight train under bridge*
Pony: *In the station, buying a ticket. As soon as he gets the ticket, he runs across the platform, and boards his train.*
Hawkeye: *Preparing train for departure*
Stylo: *Looking at orders on paper*
Hawkeye:...
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arco iris Dash went back to the house, but when she got in there, she was in for a big surprise.

Song: link

Scootaloo: *Chasing Jeff The Killer inside the house with a big knife*
Jeff: NO! You're supposed to go to sleep.

Okay, she wasn't really surprised. It was más like confusion when she saw me chasing some weird human with the ability to speak.

Rainbow Dash: Uh Scootaloo? What's going on?
Scootaloo: Not now. I gotta get this idiot out of here.
Jeff: *To arco iris Dash* Ma'am, about your daughter-
Rainbow Dash: Sister.
Jeff: Yes. About your sister. TELL HER TO GO TO SLEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...
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Me, and arco iris Dash found my scooter. It was stolen por some intoxicated stallion. He was laying on his front yard behind it.

Rainbow Dash: Alright. Let's try not to wake him up.
Scootaloo: *Quietly gets the scooter* .

It was laying on it's side, so I had to put it back onto it's wheels.

Scootaloo: *Quietly puts the scooter onto it's wheels*
Rainbow Dash: *Winks, and signals her to go home*
Scootaloo: *Rides her scooter back home, but sees three guards*
Guard 3: There she is!! *Shooting at Scootaloo*
Scootaloo: AH! *Rides away*
Rainbow Dash: Go inicial Scootaloo! I'll fight them off!
Scootaloo:...
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When I woke up, I found myself in a basement, tied up to a table. The basement was dark, and there was..... tu know what? This is taking up too much time. The basement looked exactly just like the one in Cupcakes.

Scootaloo: *Looks up at a banner that says Life Is A Party* A party? What kind of poni, pony would throw a party like this?
Jeff: *Arrives* Someone that isn't a pony.
Scootaloo: *Screams, but stops* Wait a second. You're arco iris Dash, and Pinkie Pie in disguise.
Jeff: Nope. Speaking of arco iris Dash, do tu remember that race she had with a guy in a black sedan yesterday?
Scootaloo: Yes....
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Me, and arco iris Dash got all of our stuff into our new home. Then she told me why tu shouldn't eat cupcakes on Sunday.

Rainbow Dash: A few weeks ago, a poni, pony was eating a magdalena on Sunday, then something horrible happened.
Scootaloo: What was it?
Rainbow Dash: She got attacked por some human named Jeff The Killer.
Scootaloo: Jeff The Killer?
Rainbow Dash: He's this guy from some pathetic type of fan fiction called Creepy Pasta. The fanfic itself was named Jeff The Killer.
Scootaloo: He got a fanfic named after himself?
Rainbow Dash: Yeah, but it's really boring, and no one cares about it. Anyway,...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The Story of Corporal Agarn

Theme song

Though he goes on a rage from time to time
He is a very good friend of mine
And in Fort Courage he is well known as
Corporal Agarn

Starring Master Sword as Corporal Agarn
Tom Foolery as Captain Parmenter
Saten Twist as Sargent O' Rourke
Mortomis as Dobbs, the bugler
Snow Wonder as Wrangler Jane
Cosmic arco iris as Corporal Vanderbilt
Blaze as Corporal Duffy
Sean as Chief Wild Eagle
and Sonic as Crazy Cat

Corporal Agarn was helping Captain Parmenter put weapons in the supply room when this happened.

Dobbs: *Playing his bugle*
Corporal Agarn: Hey, wait a second....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The Movie Studio

Starring

Blaze as Director Nick
Astrel Sky as Roxy
Saten Twist as Connor
Tom Foolery as Louis
Cosmic arco iris as Tobias "Toby"
Sunny as Alinah
Double Scoop as Mason
And Aina as Leah

Mason was dancing for a musical, when suddenly..

Mason: *Steps on a nail* AAAH!! *Falls down*
Director Nick: CUT!!! What the f*ck was that?!
Mason: Uhh... I don't know?
Director Nick: What do tu mean tu don't know? What caused tu to fall down?
Mason: Uhh... I don't know?
Director Nick: Are tu going to say that all day?
Mason: Uhh... I don't know?
Audience: *Laughing*
Director Nick: Well think...
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posted by bluethunder25
I want to take this time to talk about one of my two favorito! duos in MLP: FiM. I'll talk about my most favorito! one in my siguiente article. But for right now, I wanna talk about one that has a lot of potential, but has never really been utilized all that much in the series: Pinkie Pie and arco iris Dash.

I'm real sucker for this kind of duo. You've got arco iris Dash, the 'cool girl' and Pinkie Pie, the bubbly optimist.

This duo got it's start in the season one episode, 'Griffon the Brush Off.' In that episode, arco iris Dash at first found Pinkie Pie to be annoying, (which was pretty strange considering...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Date: August 1, 1959
Location: Pine Bluffs, Wyoming
Time: 8:04 AM
Railroad: Union Pacific

Gordon was pleased with the fact that he overtook Hawkeye, and Stylo's train. Now he was driving his train between the Unicorn Highway, and Lodgepole Creek.

Gordon: I'm almost out of Wyoming. After I cruzar, cruz the state border, I'll be in Neighbraska. *Sees a red signal* Shit. *Applies the brakes*

His train stopped just siguiente to the state border.

Gordon: What do I have to stop for?
Hawkeye: *Passes Gordon's freight in his passenger train*
Stylo: *Looking in a rear view mirror, and laughs*
Hawkeye: What is it?...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The Wonderbolt mostrar Gordon, Case Cracker, and Erica were at was just beginning.

Gordon: This oughta be fun. *Sees a Rock Island Biker* Hey, there's a R.I.B por the entrance.
Case Cracker: *Tries to look above the crowd, wearing shades to make it look natural* Yeah, I see him. Let's go más into the crowd.
Gordon: He's moving, but he's going away from us.
Case Cracker: Good maybe he'll let us watch the show. *Watches the Wonderbolts performance*
RIB: *grabs gun*
Ponies: AAAAAAAH! *Running*
RIB: *Shoots everyone*
Gordon: Goddammit. Let's get outta here. *Runs to car*
Erica: *Running*
RIB: *Shoots...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Gordon, and Case galleta returned to Mane Ashbury, to tell Jim the bad news.

Gordon: Jim, we got a problem.
Jim: Don't tell me-
Gordon: I'm sorry, but the cops shot down the plane, and it blew up.
Jim: Those assholes! Not only did they screw up our operation, but now they caused a war.
Case Cracker: What are tu talking about?
Jim: If my friend in Manehattan doesn't get his pleasure in poison, he'll mover his entire mafia here to declare war against us.
Gordon: Shit.
Jim: You're goddamn right that's shit. The worst pile of shit tu could ever get stuck in.

In Manehattan several hours later, Jim's...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Theme song >>>> link

Taxi Ponies: *Driving taxi cabs to the station*

Ponies On The Rails

Starring the Union Pacific ponies

Pierce Hawkins "Hawkeye" From Seanthehedgehog

Snowflake & Orion From Alinah09

Metal Gloss From DragonAura15

Railway Pony: *Driving freight train across a bridge going over the train tracks at the station.*
Metal Gloss: *Drives freight train under bridge*
Pony: *In the station, buying a ticket. As soon as he gets the ticket, he runs across the platform, and boards his train.*
Hawkeye: *Preparing train for departure*
Stylo: *Looking at orders on paper*
Hawkeye:...
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