so, here are a couple más old poems i dug up and decided to post. the first is one that came out of a period of intense creativity (ah if only i had the time nowadays). the segundo was a creative escritura assignment that i never got around to finishing, so i apologize if the end is a bit abrupt. once again, any feedback is greatly appreciated :).
stargazing
i dream in broad daylight
of an old front porch swing
where i sit cradling my guitar
canto tu a song
while your paintbrush splashes sunbeams
across my upturned face
paint drips
in arco iris rivulets
down your sun-kissed skin
your eyes are filled with laughter
and i'm a symphony of smiles
your body is a constellation
and every estrella is mine
see tu and me
we're painting poetry
one canvas
at a time
untitled
the other día tu called me
to tell me you're in amor
with a woman equally willing
to compromise her integrity
tu say she loves tu back
but i can see she only loves
the way tu make her feel
and its not going to be pretty
when tu factor yourself into the deal
now tu hide in the darkness
from people who might see your light
and tu cling to each other
with all your might
stargazing
i dream in broad daylight
of an old front porch swing
where i sit cradling my guitar
canto tu a song
while your paintbrush splashes sunbeams
across my upturned face
paint drips
in arco iris rivulets
down your sun-kissed skin
your eyes are filled with laughter
and i'm a symphony of smiles
your body is a constellation
and every estrella is mine
see tu and me
we're painting poetry
one canvas
at a time
untitled
the other día tu called me
to tell me you're in amor
with a woman equally willing
to compromise her integrity
tu say she loves tu back
but i can see she only loves
the way tu make her feel
and its not going to be pretty
when tu factor yourself into the deal
now tu hide in the darkness
from people who might see your light
and tu cling to each other
with all your might
I publicado this on facebook a few hours ago. It's a tribute to my grandfather, Paul, who died last año & his birthday would be today (6/30).
tu are the best person ever
One día we all will once again be together.
tu are so silly & one of a kind
If anyone didn't amor you, they'd have to be blind.
Your one-liners are still carried on
They're so funny, & I know you're not gone.
So, Grandpa: Happy 71st birthday
You're in our hearts, not far away.
NOTE: I amor you, Grandpa. R.I.P. <3
-Donna Lee
tu are the best person ever
One día we all will once again be together.
tu are so silly & one of a kind
If anyone didn't amor you, they'd have to be blind.
Your one-liners are still carried on
They're so funny, & I know you're not gone.
So, Grandpa: Happy 71st birthday
You're in our hearts, not far away.
NOTE: I amor you, Grandpa. R.I.P. <3
-Donna Lee
my best friends are in my hart
we could never be apart nomadder
how far away they may live
they always give
me consejos and hope when i need it
and when i throw a fit
there there to almeja me down
i am always bown
to them because they care
and they are always fair
my friends are sweet and nice and very helpful and when i need a hand
there never band
to help me o mostrar me the way
and every día i think of them
they are my best friends and i need them!
thanks so much kirkir and amazingme97 tu guys are the kind of friends everybody whants to have