alpha y omega Article: Dayz... Omegaz Part one: Road Rage

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posted by CoolSwagWolfAlt

A rainy apocalypse survival-Hunger game like in towns and cities
Humphrey,Poor lost and stranded on his own. He finds a few other rival lobos that agree with him to join,
Humphrey: *Soaking with rain* "What the fuck is this?!" *As he would look down he would find a empty AK-47 As he got that he would then say Humphrey: "Huh? What's this a Seden? *Smiling evily* "Oh it's time!." *Drives off in the sedan moving his head up and down repeating it with a >:) Face Humphrey: "I got A M19? And rounds for it?" "Good!" *He would hear gun fires and bullets hitting his sedan* Rival lobo gang: "Shoot that Nigga in the head!" Humphrey was poorly hitting the clutch and the sedan trying to go fast enough,What was he going to do? Humphrey: *Looks on his left side with a mad face >:(* He would ram into the left side making them go off road and hit a gas station,Rival lobo gang: "Oh shit Breaks Breaks!!!" *They would hit a gas station causing a blow up* *Slow motion as Humphrey escapes the explosion KAAAABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!* Humphrey: "There those bitches learned something Never mess with HUMPHREY THE SURVIVER!" "Who?" "HUMPHREY THE SURVIVOR!" FIND OUT IN PART TWO

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CoolSwagWolfAlt Fuck sake No it was a Dayz like thing there are zombies but they did not occur in the areas

Leonie12 ITS SOOOOOOOOOOO BORING!!! I ALMOST FELL ASLEEP READING IT!!! SERIOUSLY, YOU NEED TO FIX UP YOUR WRITING!!!! A 2 YEAR OLD COULD HAVE WRITTEN IT!!!!!! INCLUDE SOMETHING RATHER THAN BORING GUNS, AND HOW COULD A WOLF DRIVE A SEDAN???!!! U TOTALLY SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND ZOMBIES???!!! U HAVE NOOOOOO IDEA ABOUT WRITING!!!!!! i dont care 4 offence anyway!!!

CoolSwagWolfAlt Your raging Calm down kid before I report you Ps You should fix your writing.

CoolSwagWolfAlt Falling asleep? This article is not 24 Hours Chill out its a fan made thing you piece of shit.

Kishin_Kira I don't mean to be rude, but, this needs work. I'm not saying this to be mean, but more as constructive criticism. Your grammar is WAY off, and I honestly can't tell what the hell is going on half of the time. Judging by this story, I'm going to take a wild guess you wrote this in less than 10 minutes. If you want people to read your stories and get better feedback, you need to spend a little more time and put a little more effort. I wish I could say not a bad start, but in all honesty this is way off. Good articles take a few hours to a few days or longer to write. I believe anyone can write, but its just you have to put the effort into it. Again, please don't think I'm trying to put you down, as I was in the same boat back in the day too. It takes time and effort to make good stories. So please keep up the work and keep practicing alright? :)

CoolSwagWolfAlt Guys I'm just trying to make an article don't be rude over it

Kishin_Kira I was only trying to give you feedback on your writing. Just keep practicing alright.

CoolSwagWolfAlt Ok ._. I just don't like abusers like Leonie

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Dayz : Chapter 1

posted by simmy240

Hey, this story is my first here :) The characters are Humans in this. It's a Balto/ A&O crossover so characters fro Balto will be in it. The story is based mainly in America, UK and Russia. año 2029. This story contains strong language so reader discretion is advised.
Anyway, Enjoy :D

0900 hours
May 15, 2029

Winston and Tony were walking around the Jasper Military Base, talking to each other.
"Why did America declare War on Russia anyway, so we can be even powerful?" Remarked Winston
"Sorta.... Yes" replied Tony
"I always knew tu were a power hungry cunt! You'll do very well as General when...