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 "Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
"Kill the Flaws!" - Garth
Okay..

As I remember there's one for Kate, Lilly and Humphrey as well.

But I don't know if these stories are still able to be found.
Keep in mind. I read these a long time ago.
Way before being a Brony, and discovering fanpop shortly after (though the reasons for each, are not at all connected).

I would be willing to review the messed up one that was for Humphrey.
He loses his sight, and than his SANITY.
As he kills Winston, and then, fully snaps.

But if I were to disguess a story about Humphrey snapping.
I would do that delated one, I think was called "cold wind blows"
it ties with ROCKET TO INSANITY, for being one of the sadest creepypastas I ever read, ever.
Plus, their both about a protagonist losing all forms of sanity.
For Humphrey, Kate dies, and he starts killing Eastern wolves.
Thinking their ALL as bad, as the to jerks that laughed about Kate's death..

But. Anyway.
Getting off track.

The one I'm here to disguess, isn't about Humphrey going evil, it's, GARTH going evil.

Now..

To be quite honest.
I never really cared for Garth.
After all. One of my most popular stories, VENGEFUL SPIRIT, has Garth becomes possessed, and his body used to go graphically murder others.

But even 'I' didn't fully enjoy seeing him go insane, in the way he did.

Though. At least there's a reason.

Though it's a very stupid one.

Despite Lilly being his wife, he has zero respect for Omegas.
Calling them nothing más than 'flaws'. But eventually, he snaps, and murders one of those berry eating girls, Janice. Simply for being an omega.

From than on, Garth wasn't Garth. He was murderous monster.
Mostly shown when he murders a husband and wife in cold blood, than scratchs the children as 'reminder of him'

Eventually Garth took over the Southern pack, after killing all the omegas, they become his personal army. (something like that, I don't remember, okay!?)

Now.
There be those of tu thinking
"Connor? How could tu hate this story? It sounds awesome!"

I would agree with you.
If it weren't for the fucked up twist near the end,

For no reason at all.
Kate joins Garth.
She betrays everybody.

God!
Why did everybody hate Kate back than!?
Every story I read, had her become a perra in some way o anouther.
Everyone cared about Lilly,
But why not Kate.
Nobody cared about Kate.
Obviously, they do NOW!
But. It was depressing at the time.

This always happens in these things.

It's Princess Twilight all over again.
Can't tell tu how many times I had to deny invites clubes decated to stopping Twilight being princess.
Everybody was so over dramatic.
It's a fuckin show!
Why do tu give a fuck, what happens to the fuckin characters!
Besides. Twilight is pretty as a alicorn.

Uhhh..

Anyway.
That's all I got.
Please leave responses.

And let me know if there's something tu want me to review.
Somebody once told me the world is gonna owe me
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb
In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running
Didn't make sense not to live for fun
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
So much to do so much to see
So what's wrong with taking the back streets
You'll never know if tu don't go
You'll never shine if tu don't glow

Hey now you're an All estrella get your game on, go play
Hey now you're a Rock estrella get...
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Well another día case was solved. Matt walked out of the court. "So Matt tu wanna go to a guys Night?" Jimmy said. "Sorry Jimmy, Im going to be busy later." Matt said.
12:00am.
Matt was puting on a costume. The costume model as a lobo link (if tu can get it.) But theres one thing tu dont know about Matt. Ever since he got the powers from the toxin in his eyes a año later, he became DAREDEVIL!!!! He got out his cane and breaked the middle and became a knunchucks. Its also a stick, grabble hook, and theres a blade inside. He walked out the window and jumped out. He grabble hooked on a roof...
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One night Kate and Humphrey were walking around just talking so they each were having a race to see who could get inicial first.

"Ready set go!" dicho Humphrey. Soon Kate and Humphrey were taking separate paths. Kate took the lost path while Humphrey took the seguro path. Soon Kate was found lost with twenty separate paths to take and none of them led home.

"You lost?" dicho someone.

"Who is there?!" dicho Kate. Then a lobo with a chain on her leg came out of the bushes and Kate was scared.

"Do not be alarmed." the lobo said.

"Who are you?" dicho Kate.

"I am Katie." she said.

"Wow my name is Kate." dicho Kate....
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posted by squirrelpaw23
"Tag your it!"Kate dicho as she ran."Im so going to get you!!" I dicho as i was running to catch up."Come and get me then slow poke!"she dicho over her sholder as she ran into the deep part of the forest.When i reached the edge of it i heard a terrified scream."Kate!"i yelled as i ran into the deep part, forgetting my own safety.As i broke into a clearing i stoped and listened for her.As i stood there i started to remember my own safety making me nervous."K-kate come on this isnt fun any more."thinking she might be pulling a prank,untill i saw a motionless patch of light brown pelaje, piel in the grass."Kate!!"i...
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Anders stopped in the middle of a forested area. His body was in pure agony and couldn't bare to take another step.

"I can't stop now." He thought as he stood there panting. He took a step adelante, hacia adelante and winced at the pain his muscles sent out. "God how long have i been running?" He dicho out loud as he sat down to think He counted the amount of times he saw the moon and the sun. "Dear god... I have been running for four days straight..." As he realized the time that went por his stomach growled menacingly. "With no food...I guess I have every reason to be tired."

He was still angry with himself for...
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posted by alvin33355
Dear lobo pack, I have enjoyed my short time here. Unfortunately, my parents have decided to send me to a boarding school halfway across the country. It is an internet-free facility, so I won't be stopping by. I will be leaving in less than 2 weeks. Its gonna suck serious @$$. tu have been a great pack lots of fun (u listening katelover14?). tu will all be missed greatly.

If im lucky, I will say Hi on December 20th o 21st. Thats when navidad break starts. I will see the new Hobbit movie, say hi, and build a shelter for the apocalypse (lol just kiddin).

Anyway, don't message me o write...
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Drip…drip…drip
The drips of pellucid water dripped on continuously all día and night, m right ear flopped and buzzed almost half an hora o so.
I stretched and yawned while I was still laying on the ground.
I rosed with an ache, popping my neck sideways.
The sun was barely rising as it’s heat started flowing inside the cave.
Damn it made me feel drowsy, wanting to go back to bed, well…in a cave; though what’s the difference.
I twisted my body to get a good glance over at Tesla, but she wasn’t there; neither her cover nor journal.
I forgot, she volunteered as a(n) councils apprentice which...
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As tu know a lot of the original people have been banned and left. I am a noob, and I understand that i am not that important. So that is why I must leave. I have tried to make friends and that has failed because of my inexperience. I have also tried at getting a mate and I also failed at that because of my inexperience on here and also in the real world. I will however come on every now and then post parts of my story.(for those who read it... Witch por the way isn't very many.) I am sick and tired of the thousands of posts that get stacked on parte superior, arriba of my post and every single one of them are...
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just saying Lilly is not the real Lilly owned por someone (i dont know) in the story, explicit will be involved but not every time I'll put EXPLICiT CONTENT thank tu and enjoy

It was July when me and Lilly first meet, her tail was wagging and her pelaje, piel was slowly moving with the cool Canadian breeze. Her beautiful brown eyes meet mine and I got nervous, I didn't know how I should react so I came out and greeted her, "your very beautiful what's is your name", was what I said. She replied with the nicest and sweetest voice *giggles* " your pretty cute to, I'm Lilly" I was in much shock thinking...
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posted by lukehaener
Humphrey and lily where besar for about 40 minutos when Humphrey interrupted, lily tu promise tu won't tell anyone not even your closes friends, I promise I won't as long as tu make out with me when I want tu to I'll keep it a secret, okay I promise to do what ever tu say, okay good.

Back at inicial Kate was looking for Humphrey:
Hay mom dad have tu seen Humphrey any where Ive been looking for them everywhere, no sweetie I haven't dicho eve. Kate walked out of here cave and walked to Lilly's and Garths cave. Lily, lily tu here I could here someone walking behind me I turned and growled at...
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Chapter 4:The “Escape”
The two hurriedly went back to the shuttle. “Let’s get out of here.” dicho Winston. The shuttle began to liftoff when suddenly the shuttle sank back down to the ground. “Why the hell aren’t we leaving.” dicho Hutch. “It appears something is causing interference with our equipment. “Damn it!” dicho Hutch. “Well the best we could do is wait it out, try again tomorrow…” And with that they went to bed. They woke the siguiente morning with hope in their hearts and doubt in their minds. As Winston passed por the door he thought he saw something outside. “I...
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Chapter 3: Bodies
Winston suddenly noticed Hutch walking towards a cave-like crater. “What the hell are tu doing?!” dicho Winston. “The suits are not ready to sustain that much cold.” “I think I see something in there.” dicho Hutch. Hutch then pulled out a device that emitted blue flashes to allow him to see in the dark cave-like crater. As Hutch descended into the crater his anxiety grew, he started breath heavily as he feared something terrible was going to happen. Suddenly a flash revealed the dead body of an Eastern Pack wolf, Hutch was terrified at the sight of the body. “Holy...
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Chapter III: Humphrey’s Solution
“Come on, lets get this and get it away fast. No one will noti--” “Wait a minute!” dicho Humphrey. “You want me to steal another pack’s kill!? Do tu know how many problems it will--” “Do tu want to get back to your pack?” Asked Candou abruptly. “or tu think tu can mostrar up there with your paws empty?” “Well, I…” dicho Humphrey.
“Dah! Forget it! Now give me a hand with this… thing…” dicho Candou. “Come on, let’s get out of here!” “Wow you’re pretty strong, eh?” dicho Humphrey as they were dragging the caribou across...
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Chapter II: Humphrey’s Escape
“I wonder if it was a good idea coming to the wastelands” dicho Humphrey panting. Humphrey suddenly got the feeling that something was watching him, he looked behind him but there was nothing there. Then a grey lobo attacked him from behind. “Stop right there!” dicho the red wolf. “How dare tu barge into my territory like that! Have tu no respect!?” “Sorry, I didn’t know this was someone else’s territory!” dicho Humphrey. “Then, what are tu doing here anyway?” dicho the grey wolf. “You see… I was hunting with my pack. I was responsible...
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posted by trueshadowwolf
"(Sigh) man I am So wasted." Trueshadowwolf said. "I know...I-I-I know." Humphrey202 said. "Hey where does that line lead to?" Trueshadowwolf said. "I don't know...GOD IM SO F@#$ING WASTED I CAN'T THINK STRAIGHT!!!" Humphrey202 said. "Well let's see where the line leads to." Trueshadowwolf said. "Ummm why does it lead to that cabin?" Humphrey202 said. "I don't know stay here I'm gonna check." Trueshadowwolf said. I opened the window. "Hello!!!" Trueshadowwolf said. Then trueshadowwolf heard noise. Sounded like Kate. I opened up a door. "Oh I guess It's your turn?" Kate said. "Wait What?" Trueshadowwolf...
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posted by Garth619
When my father died i was a little wolf....

We(I and my dad) were walking around forest and I was learning a new things.At once lobo ran from arbusto, bush and attacked my dad.My dad was fighting with five wolfs and everything looked great.Almost all wolfs were lying on the ground.I went closer to my dad,but some lobo jumped on my dad from the dark.He bit him in the neck and runaway.I ran to my mom and told her everything.She screamed and ran to dad.When we came..we saw him lying on the ground and bleeding.He coughed and said:„I amor tu son".
After he caught my hand and died.I dicho with tears in eyes:„I...
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posted by kingdom123
i was in the bar, just doing drinking my usual bud light, when SHE walked up to me she was beutifull, she had brown long hair with blue eyes and a white dress on. mind if i sit here? she asked in a sweet voice, i was stunned i didnt know what to do! uhhh yeah shure, thank you! she sat siguiente to me and started to humm. i didnt know what to say i had a girlfreind and i didnt know what she wanted. i was thinking when all the sudden she grabbed my shoulder and pulled me torwards her. so? do tu want to have some fun?, uhh what! i took her hand off of my shoulder, i..i cant.... aww why not tu are...
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(sorry last time i didnt had time to finsh the 3rd part but oh well.)
11:20am
eve died.
salty died.
but they dont know where winstons body is. then they heard rustling trees. they all looked up. they were all terrified of the creature. "what...the...fuck is that thing?" garth said. "i dont know." humphrey said. the creature was breathing wierldly. it got out a wolf. then it turned out to be winston. "da-" kate dicho when humphrey was pulling her back. the human like creature was holding winstons neck and was sniffing him like a dog. then it freaken torn his head off. a bone cracked in winstons...
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11:00pm
humphrey hasnt been talking for hora now. "humphrey say somthing please...you havent dicho nothing for the past hour." kate said.
"why did they had to die..." humphrey said. "wait what?" kate said. "nothing." humphrey said. "what?" kate said. "NOTHING KATE ITS NONE OF YOUR DAMN BUSINISE!" humphrey shouted. "dude whats your problem!" shakey said. "OH, WHATS MY PROBLEM... WHAT I SEEN DOWN THERE WAS A F@#$ING DEAD lobo DIED IN FRONT OF ME!!!" humphrey shouted. "what wolf?" mooch said. "LISTEN i dont want to talk about it!" humphrey said. kate gave him a look. "hey guys how long has it been...
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Kate & Humphrey Adventures.
Spring of 2012 Chapter 1. Part 1 of 2. “Where are they?”

Kate arranged a party to be held in the new cave to celebrate the “big game” animales returning to Jasper. It’s been a few days after the end of winter and today was the rainiest outside so she thought going into the cave would be a perfect idea. Everyone quickly fled their caves as the news broke out. Jasper was a place that every lobo dreamed about to party. Kate and Humphrey already had the playa filled with activities before the first guests came. The games ranged from a surfing to fuego breathing,...
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