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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing tu to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless tu truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before tu start posting. It can be as little as a bio, o as big as an entire articulo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no más than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he o she is in, can pull out another trick out of his o her hat.
4. If tu absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his o her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely misceláneo and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when tu have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the siguiente día you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own o is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the reciente outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, o claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If tu must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, o so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if tu do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot o stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull o flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to o dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to o dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing o potential character is a Mary Sue, o if tu suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, tu can take link. If tu want, tu can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case tu were curious, which tu probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all tu want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do tu have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
Eric stormed into the cave. “She’s gone.”
Delta looked up. “Who’s gone?”
“Your sister! She’s gone!”
“Phoenix?”
Eric threw his hands in the air. “You’re all hopeless. Yes, Phoenix!”
“How do tu know that?” Red dicho from the other side of the cave, beginning to stride closer. Ariel looked up from her spot on the couch, and Tanner came out of the hall, obviously just finishing a shower.
Eric sighed and sat on the couch, rubbing his forehead. “I went to meet up with her at her place. We talked a little, and both fell asleep, and when I woke up, she just wasn’t there.”...
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You guys are gonna kill me.






This was serious. No one could know. Not even Ciel. I had to do this. I walked into the cave.
"EVERYONE! Come, here." At first, I yelled, then it slowly became a indoor voice.
"Yessss?" Silver hung from the rafters. I snapped my fingers, this tugged up my heart, but I put on an evil smirk, and Erasers swarmed the cave. Jaime dropped down from the rafters.
"WHY ARE THERE ERASERS IN THE CAVE!?" He shouted. Just then, I wanted to break down and cry. I pulled my swords and lunged at him.
"Gyah! Clone!" He jumped to the side, sticking out his leg. I tripped, caught myself...
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posted by The_Writer
Yo! Attention all Red Revenge fans! I've got a proposition.

((It's called a contest tu idiot))

Oh, shut up!

Anyway, as I dicho *tapes Sam's mouth closed* I have a competition!

Holly's mask is supposed to be domino themed, but I don't want a Robin domino mask o one the sidekicks wear. I want something unique, individual, and awesome. Here's the contest:

GOAL: Draw/make/Whatev a domino mask for Holly, enviar it por November 31st in the imágenes on the club with a link messages to me.

DETAILS: I want the mask to hide her identity (duh) I don't want it to be like Robin's and Speedy's, etc. I want it to be green and decorative.

PRIZE: To the best mask, I'll give the winner "What Matters?" a week before it's release (Dec. 29th) in one big package. The only agreement tu have to make is no spoilers.


Have fun peeps!
Cassie took a large bite out of her hamburger, swallowing a gulp of her chocolate shake. "I'm ravished. That business in Moscow made me hungry."

All that food?" Tim asked, looking at the nice, neat, perfect ensalada before him.

Cassie shrugged. "Teen's gotta eat. I don't have to worry about the tighty-tights." Cassie stopped mid-chew. "Not that tu don't look good in them."

Tim smirked. He was dressed in a tight T-Shirt and jeans. Cassie was wearing her usual civvies: Red spandex, white and red T-shirt, and baseball cap.

"You realize you've only mentioned the tights eight times in the last three dates,...
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Sign up is link. Enjoy!

Eric dropped his backpack on the couch, glancing over at the T.V. Static, again, but no one seemed to be watching. Looking towards the kitchen, he noticed M’gann wasn’t there, cooking like she usually was. In fact, the whole cave had an empty air to it. Well. Emptier than usual.
It had been two months since any of them had seen Infinity, after she’d stormed out and announced a name change, to Phoenix. She never was around to enforce it, however. Cutting off all ties with the team and League, she’d gone completely off the map, disappearing from everyone in a matter...
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Some of it is Scott's perspective of Gotham city, and some is Scott's past. Enjoy~ :P

Danny looked up from the parking lot, and up towards his apartment window. Scott was perched in the window sill with his head on his knees. He walked up to the apartment and unlocked the door.
"Hey Scott, what are tu doing here..?" Danny sat down his backpack.
"Needed a break....."
"And may I ask what?" Danny plopped down on the couch,
"Everything. Work, the cave. I'm just tired and wanted some peace." Scott looked over at his cousin. "Did I ever tell tu the whole story?"
"About..?"
"That night.."

When tu see...
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posted by InfinityYJ
A/N: Okay! This is loosely based off some youtube videos "11 Drunk Guys Play Slender/Hospice/Sanatorium/Slender Mod."
Warnings for pure stupidity, some cussing, and mentions of alcohol.


You ever heard that joke, 4 drunk heroes go into the forest at night, with nothing but their stupidity and a flashlight? No? Well, here’s how it went.

The dampness of the forest sent shivers down her spine. Fin glanced behind her, then back adelante, hacia adelante again. siguiente to her, Eric was waving the flashlight aimlessly, letting the light hit the dark green leaves of the treetops above and the muddy road below their feet....
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posted by CoaxochYJ
I got borrrrred! So I'm escritura this! Not sure how long this shall continue...




Lexi, even though she was little, had a devious little mind. She had buttered the floor, making it slippery. She took a quarter out of her pocket, and slid it across the floor, it slid across perfectly. She smirked, this was a good prank, and maybe she would earn the título of, "Prank Master". This would be great...

Jaime rubbed his eyes groggily, and stepped--scratch that--slipped into the kitchen. He slid, and clumsily fell onto his rear. Lexi was giggling madly, sitting on the counter. Jaime winced, then looked up...
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posted by Robin_Love
“Give me till afternoon.”
“Tara no!”
She ignored Alek's protests, fixing her eyes on the other party in the room. He dark red eyes looked her over once.
“I'll give tu till three after. Then I'll be back to collect you.”
“Come alone Kuran.”
He gave her a smile.
“I will.”
She nodded, watching as they left. Then she swiftly turned, exciting the room. Alek, Silver, Ciel, and Fang followed her; Fang for respuestas más than anything.
“Tara what are tu doing?! Who was that?”
Alek moved into her path and she avoided his eyes.
“Who is he?”
“His name is Satstruiku Kuran. He is an...
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posted by Robin_Love
He stood before her in the complete darkness. His eyes pierced hers as she looked at him. She had expected him. She knew he would come.
“You did not come when I asked.”
“You are correct.”
He watched her, but she showed no emotion where he was concerned.
“You disobeyed me. And after all I've done.”
“You couldn't save them yet tu gave me no warning.”
“You are lucky. I admire your fiery spirit.”
“Luck is not the word.”
“Quite true. Be relieved I don't harm you.”
“That's a threat.”
They stared at each other for the el espacio of several minutes. He moved closer, tilting her her...
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*Giggle* Sorry Writer, I had too!






"Okay! Places everyone, chop chop!" The Director said(this time, its a real director, not the creepy lady.) clapping her hands, holding a script in between her torso and arm.
"And in 5...4...3...2..." Lights flashed on, I was in the middle of a small kitchen, standing over a small counter, with a blender, fuego extinguisher, a bag of nails, and a stack of balonga. I had a motorcycle helmet, and on delantal on.
"Herro people!" I said, waving, inside of the cycle casco I was smiling, the glass wasnt tinted, so tu could see my face.
"Okay, so tu see here, a stack...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
 Before the incident
Before the incident
Had this idea in my head for quite sometime, finally finished it yesterday on my way home!

Name: Daniel "Danny o Dani" Clancy (whichever tu feel like spelling!)
Alias: Spectreo (Thanks! ^.^
Age:17
Powers: -ghostly powers: flight,intangibility, and invisibility.
-gains super strength and enhanced abilities and agility his human form does not possess
-ghost sense that manifests as a blue wisp from his mouth that announces the presence of nearby ghosts.
-ghost rayo, ray early on which has become one of his most frequently used powers;becoming an energy ball that can expand in size and corresponding area...
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posted by Mclovin_69
She smiled leaning in the doorway " ready to go? ", " in just a minuto " he muttered standing in the bathroom mirror playing with his hair, she smiled still letting out a giggle and walked in and stepped infront of him brushing the hair out of his face, he flicked his hair back and it fell back in his face. " Bentley! " she whined out pouting playfully, he let out a giggle as she reached for his hair again as he tried blocking her with his arms. She sighed droppping her arms and put a hand at her hip and gave him a playful look " i cant quite understand tu Thompson " she said. Bentley smiled...
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posted by The_Writer
DC Comics should just cut out Cartoon Network and start their own “DC Nation” o “DC Channel”. I mean, they have so much material they could air that they could be a 24/7 TV channel and get away with it. They could have new episodes of Young Justice: Invasion, Green Lantern: The Animated Series, Beware the Batman, and Teen Titans Go! on every Saturday morning (with new shorts). They could air one DC Universe Animated Movie every night of the week. Every Wednesday night they could put out the new episode of arrow while the CW does the same. Every Friday night they could air Smallville...
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 misceláneo pic!
Random pic!
This articulo has been in my Drafts section for TOOOO long.
To keep note this is what I originally wanted Shadow to be when I first got introduced to this "OC club thingy". But since I thought about the character I thought it was just "Not modern".
I don't know if this should be made into a different person o what, your choice. (write in comentarios please!)
I just wanted tu to see it 'cause from memory, it took me AGES to make her.
Note: ^ I just added that now. Down is the bio.

Name: Maria Kyle

Code Name: Black Phantom

Other Aliases: Sakura, Cheery (Only in civilian life)

Age: 13

Occupation: Ninja/Hero/Orphan...
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Timeline: 3 years in the future...

“Cʼmon, cʼmon, cʼmon,” Aryess muttered.
“Patience, kiddo,” Nic dicho through the communication unit in her ear.
“Itʼs freezing up here!” She wrapped her arms around herself, trying to gain warmth.
“What did tu expect? Youʼre 102 stories up and itʼs the middle of the bloody winter.”
“Oh.. yeah.” The teenager tried to focus on the spectacular view from the parte superior, arriba of Empire State Building. The city lights were a dazzling light mostrar of yellow, red, blue, white. She was grateful for the full head mask that tucked her long fair hair away and kept...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Earlier that week everything had been perfectly normal. Fin, Delta, and Robin were relaxing on the couch, flipping through channels (Connor was not pleased that they’d fixed the static--he’d disappeared into his room some time hace complaining about his favorito! show.) M’gann was in the kitchen, Artemis was sitting on the counter. Wally was eating the burnt galletas that M’gann had pulled out some time ago, and Kaldur was sparring with Nathan in the main room.
Fin’s hand began to go even faster, smoke coming off the remote as she sped up to a Wally-like pace. The T.V. couldn’t keep...
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New York City
May 3, 22:09 EST

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“Are we in position, Draxx?” Revenge whispered.

“Yes. All positions secure.”

“Excellent.”

“Are tu sure Grant won’t mind us doing this?” Draxx asked. “I mean this is his company.”

“What Grant doesn’t know, won’t hurt him.”

“That’s usually not true.”

Red Revenge laughed.

It took almost two hours for the assassin to appear. She slipped stealthily among the shadows.

“Target spotted.” Revenge said, picking up his gun and aiming it squarely at the feminine figure.

“On your signal.” Draxx radioed over.

Revenge aimed the sights, lined up the crosshairs, and pulled the trigger. The assassin began to scale the building.

“Now.” Revenge said, leaping from the roof of his company at the same minute.
New York City
April 24, 04:09 EST

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Sam yawned and slouched down even más in his seat.

“Sam!” acebo exclaimed.

Sam groaned and hauled himself up-right in his chair. “How much longer?” he asked, yawning again.

“Thirty minutos ago.” acebo said, glancing at her watch. “They had a storm over Hong Kong when she took off, but I don’t see—“

“She’s fine.” Sam said, placing a hand on his girlfriend’s shoulder. “Except she’s late.”

Holly sat in silence for herself. Had Sam been awake, he would’ve noticed his girlfriend fighting an inner-battle...
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posted by Mclovin_69
He jumped a building and did a front flip landing on the ledge of the building looking out at the city. A small robotic araña climbed into it's web and a red light on it's back blinked a couple times zooming in and focusing on him, he watched from one of the monitor screens infront of him and sat staring at him in intrest, He wanted him...... He needed him on this side....he was an interesting character that made him más desireable to him... He acted as if he had powers though he did not have any and the skills he possessed were very powerful. How would he catch this boy though... He has...
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