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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing tu to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless tu truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before tu start posting. It can be as little as a bio, o as big as an entire articulo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no más than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he o she is in, can pull out another trick out of his o her hat.
4. If tu absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his o her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely misceláneo and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when tu have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the siguiente día you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own o is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the reciente outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, o claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If tu must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, o so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if tu do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot o stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull o flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to o dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to o dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing o potential character is a Mary Sue, o if tu suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, tu can take link. If tu want, tu can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case tu were curious, which tu probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all tu want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do tu have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by Red-Revenge
Poison

Manhattan,

May 7, 09:08 EST

The figure clothed in black and silver landed gently on the rooftop in a squatting position. Her capucha, campana covered her face as she stood up and looked around.

"Clear."

"Good, but the police spotted you, they're closing in." the voice came over her comm.

"Alright, can tu get me an accident?"

"Yeah, two minutes. Can tu hold out that long?"

"Please."

The line cut and Alexa grinned, bending down and starting to cut into the roof of a building. She was thankful Sam had sent the electricity user to Manhattan to assist her. With the police and the baddies chasing her, things...
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posted by Red-Revenge
Baby Sisters

(Part 2)

New York City

April 29, 18:01 EST

Sam quickly shut down the computer and hopped out of his seat. "Artemis! What're tu doing here?"

"I thought I'd stop por to visit my big brother." Artemis said. "Why? Is this a bad time or-?"

"No, no!" Sam said. "It's just Holly's sister is in town and I didn't expect tu to mostrar up now."

"Double sisters, huh?" Artemis asked, walking towards the computer. "Older o younger?"

"Younger!" Sam exclaimed, shutting the computer off before Artemis could open it.

"You could've just dicho 'don't touch it'." Artemis said.

Sam raised an eyebrow.

"True, true."...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
I deleted some, and gained one..so here ya go! If the OC isn't on here, they're probably deleted.  o I forgot some...which is likely.

Heroes:
Brendan Adams- Fang
Jaime Adams- Valac
Alexis Adams 
Alexandria "Alex" Douglas- Nudge
Scott "Scotty" Clancy- White Lightning
Dawson Ryan- Ryu
Daniel Clancy- Spectreo
Jonas Clinton- Nighthawk

And the newest, Hinata Kennedy *cuddles him* 

Villains: 
Dallas Union- Seraphs
Kenlie Saunder- Ravenna
Blake Douglas- Kid Devil.

Hinatas bio should be up sometime, not sure when!
posted by Obscurity98
((random thing. it just came to me in Spanish class so here it is...has nothing to do with anything soooo...its kinda just thrown out there...hope u like anyway))

Harley hands pumped Ciel's chest. She couldn't see his face through the tears, and whispering out, "Ciel..some one baby dont die! Wake up..please..please wake up Ciel.." His chest did not rise nor fall. Harley cried and put her head to his. Face to face, she whispered in a shakely, "oh Ciel i'm so sorry, this is all my fault..and now...now tu dead..." She pressed her lips to his his quickly and mouthed, "I'm so sorry."

She cried in...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Some kids stood in front of the Memorial 
"Whoa! Scott Clancy! He was White Lightning!" The kids looked down at their Justice League camisa, camiseta then back up! 
"He was my hero!" The kids stood in awe 
"Why did he go into the Military? He was a super hero!"
"They needed someone to go undercover with powers like his!"
"But that blast killed him!"
"Which is why he done it! It would would've destroyed the Earth!" The kids argued back an forth, and Brendan stood and watched, a smile came to his face when kids would recognize Scotts name. He walked down the street, and slipped his hat back on.
"Dad! C'mon...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Brendan stood in his Navy uniform in silence. 
"Why....why did tu do it?" He pulled off his hat, and stared at the memorial, it was a tribute to the fallen soldiers. Brendan dipped his finger in black paint, and started escritura his friends name on the wall. They begged tu not to go into this. tu knew it was suicide mission, escpically with your powers. She begged tu gods sake. I don't get why tu did it...but I guess tu made your choice. Tears slid down Brendans face I guess, tu felt it was your place, to take that spot. But tu brought down a evil force, a force so strong, that only tu could break it. The Government will pay. They'll pay for what they put tu through. I swear I'll avenge your death. Brendan wiped his hands clean and walked away. He had thirty-hours until he boarded the submarine, that's when his plan went underway. 

Anyone got any idea who sacrificed themself?
posted by Robin_Love
He looked her over, examining her scars and scrapes. There wasn't too much, except the wound in her back. He put a salve on it and wrapped it up.
“Not too tight!” Cat hissed.
“Sorry.”
He lowered her camisa, camiseta and came around to face her. She had several scrapes and would end up with a scar across her cheek. Other than that, there was little other damage.
“Way to go warrior. Zero would be proud.”
Cat smiled a little and looked down at her hands.
“I heard Alex again.”
“Really? What'd he say?”
“He told me to prepare. But I don't know what.”
“Sounds like you'll be on an adventure soon.”...
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Excerpt-


"Is this cool o what?!" the teen exclaimed más than asked. His companion merely grunted a reply barely audible over the cheering crowd.

"Oh come on! How can tu not like him?!"

"Do I really need to tell tu again, Parker?"

"Yes."

"He's an eccentric, playboy billionaire who goes out at night and--"

"And?" Peter asked, smirk plastered to his face.

Sam grinned. "Ah, you're right." He frowned again. "I still don't like him."

"Whatever." Peter said, waving his hand absentmindedly.

"And now, ladies and gentlemen, Samuel Grant!"

The crowd burst into fresh cheers as Sam walked on-stage and shook the billionaire's hand. "Pleasure to meet tu Mr. Stark."

"He's a natural actor." Peter shrugged.
posted by BloodyMascara_
So uh....yeah! I dont think Im alone on this never ending road of horror! Its like, Lady Gaga's song "Bad Romance" isnt even about a guy! Its about the abusive relationship with- with- with delicious things that tu wanna eat, but tu dont wanna eat, then tu eat it then tu beat yourself up and ugh! tu cant win! READ IT o I WILL EAT MEL!

Mel stood on the scale, she hissed at the scale when the number '120' came up. She sat on her cama and poked her stomach.
"Gyah!" She dicho and poked it again.
"Diet starts today....." She said.

10 minutos later

Mel sat on the counter, a plate on her lap.
"Promised...
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posted by Blaze_YJ
Name: Blaze Burnett

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Appearance: blonde hair and dark blue eyes ( eyes can change colour depending on mood)

Personality: she is very strong willed and powerful, she often enjoys sparing but seems to be very stubborn when she needs help o is in danger.

Powers/ Abilities: she can teleport ( but usually fails) she is very handy with her sword and has many skills in combat .

Past: when she was young, her mother died being stabbed por her father and she was abused por her father for many years, she ran away and was set off on her own until she was found por flash and was recommeneded to jooin the team.

( hope tu like it i worked really hard and think i did a good job)
posted by Robin_Love
Oh yeah! My creativity strikes again!!!!


The sound of a gun and breaking glass pierced through the night. The sounds of a struggle were clear for anyone close by. Meaning only two. He stumbled backwards, taken back por the blow. It didn't last long. He kicked, punched, dodged, did all in his power to keep the other one down. His cape shadowed his every move. He was a figure in black, manipulating every thing with his tactical brain. He threw the other one against a wall, watching as he fell and knocked over a few trashcans. He was breathing heavily but prepared for an attack. Nothing. He laughed...
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posted by The_Writer
(I'll have pictures later)


"No results in police database, google--"

The large computer chimed. 

"One result..." Sam muttered, opening it. A chill ran down his spine as he read the two words. "Turn around"

He spun, grabbing his sword and pointing it at the figure in the shadows.

"Come out." he said.

The woman walked out. Now that she was standing still in front of him, he could get a better look at her. 

She was tall, that was for sure. She wasn't bad looking either, but the tatuajes ruined it all. They covered her left shoulder and arm as well as her right hip and leg. Blackness swirled around the...
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 Bentley
Bentley
( Bonjour!! Mclovin here me and ArtemisYJ be writtin buddies hehehehehehehehe)


The streets were silent during the night, it was like this basically every night so it didnt seem to be any different then usual. He played his guitarra gentley his fingers came across the strings creating a beautiful tune, he heard the sound of change land in his case and looked up to see a man in a suit with a breif case continue on his way, he stopped playing and looked at the time, 10: 23 PM, it was getting late it looked like it was time to turn it in for the night, he took the change he had gotten playing out...
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posted by anime-niac
Korran's POV

I decided to go out and find a place to draw as there hadn't been anything huge happening in the cave for days now. I put my sketch book and pencils into my bag and walked out of my room shutting the door behind me. As I walked through the cave I noticed how deathly silent it was and shivered at the feeling of loneliness that tugged at my heart. It had been like this for days and I was still diturbed por it, I summoned my shadow beast Amoria in hopes that it would dull the loneliness. We walked out of the cave heading into town hoping to find a peaceful place to draw. I stuck to...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Cat
Cat
Name: Cat! (Caitlin Kyle)

Likes: Sweets!

Best Friend: Terror!!!!

Loves: Cookies!! And Scott!

Dislikes: agrio, agria Candy

Worst Habit: I don’t act like an adult

Personal Secret: *whispers* I never share cookies

favorito! Food: COOKIES!

favorito! Color: Purple!

Code Name: Tiger

Mentor/Inspiration: Tom Cat and WildCat

Relations: Selina is technically my aunt...

Base of Operations: Outsider HQ

Personal Home: With Scott!!! ^-^

Occupation: Hero

Job: Waitress

Team: Outsiders

What Symbolizes You: Uhhh…….cookies? (Joy)

Biggest Regret: I have none

Dream Career: Wife! >w<

Most reciente Nightmare: *whispers* The scary man takes me….

Spirit Animal: Cat
 Tiger
Tiger
posted by Robin_Love
 Zeth
Zeth
I’ll add his OC Bio underneath all this. He’s one of the Outsiders, just one I don’t always use.

LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Zeth Parker
Nickname: Z, Zay
Reason o meaning of name: Gift of God
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Brown, short
Height: 5’ 7”
Clothing Style: Modern
Best Physical Feature: Eyes

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Being found
Your Guilty Pleasure: Warm Fires
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: People tu can’t trust
Your Ambition for the Future: Is to live an option?

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Must...sleep
What tu Think About the Most: My old master...
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