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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing tu to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless tu truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before tu start posting. It can be as little as a bio, o as big as an entire articulo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no más than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he o she is in, can pull out another trick out of his o her hat.
4. If tu absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his o her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely misceláneo and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when tu have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the siguiente día you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own o is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the reciente outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, o claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If tu must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, o so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if tu do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot o stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull o flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to o dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to o dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing o potential character is a Mary Sue, o if tu suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, tu can take link. If tu want, tu can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case tu were curious, which tu probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all tu want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do tu have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by BloodyMascara_
At the Cave....

"Ima beat you!" The scarlet speedster himself chalenged
"Over my dead body..." Robin replied.
They moved their fingers ever so fast. The TV screen seemed to suck them into a diffrent world. M'ggan stepped infront of the TV, hands on her hips.
"MOVESIES!" Wally shouted.
"This TV is going to suck out your brain." M'ggan replied.
"IM ABOUT TO WIN M'GGAN!" Robin shouted at her. She stepped out of the way, only to unplug the TV. Their jaw dropped. Wally even dropped the gamer remote.
"Y-you just.....W-we were so close." Wally whined.
"See. I stopped it before it could spread to Robin." M'ggan...
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posted by -BelovedRobin
 Pixiv Id 403191
Pixiv Id 403191
Name: Alucard Fair
Alter Ego: 96
Age: 26 (For Baker’s story)
Gender: Male
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: Platinum Blonde, sometimes mistaken for silver.
Distinct Markings: The tip of his left ear is bitten off.
Height: 5’10”
Martial Status: Single
Birthplace: He forgot b/c his family moved a lot
Current Residents: He moves about.
Relationship with: No one, but he is obsess with Aria Leonhart
Foes: Whoever is his target and whoever is “keeping him and Aria apart.”

Meaning behind “96”:

Well I’m using 96 as a representation of characters from the Japanese language. Im Japanese reads as 9 (ku/kyu)...
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Hey guys! It's rachele_X here, Aisling's creator. I finally decided to sign back in to this account! Anyway, these are the bios for 2 OCs that I've had for quite a while, but never introduced to the club. They'll never RP here, for a number of reasons, one main one being that I have WAYYY too many OCs already and the whole place is super crowded. The reason I'm posting their bios is that I want tu guys to know them, because I'm probably going to write an articulo series about them when I finish Broken Wings, as a little break from Aisling..
Anyway here they are!

Name: Tristan Blake Ross
Alias:...
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posted by FeverYJ
Name:Dee Fy

Alias:Fever

Age: Looks 16, has been living for 506

Status: Villain (demon of death)

relationship to team: None

Appearance: tall, auburn hair reaching her back. red eyes. Lustful

Personality: angry, seductive,reclusive, backstabber, witty, Valiente

Powers:
She can willingly kill the person she is touching, sucking their energy. por staring at any living thing,for a long period of time, it will eventually die. Her bite can turn people to dust. No immortality but has lived a long 500 yrs. Experts in Toxins, poisons, and has an arsenal of a whip, two daggers, and a pistol concealed in her...
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posted by SilverWingsYJ
I was gonna make this 3rd POV, but it looked upside down so..(SilverWings's POV)

I rummaged through my dresser drawer, searching for the switch blade hidden among the socks. Call me paranoid, but there were half-a-dozen small knives hidden in my bedroom in my apartment.
Since I had moved to Gotham with my brother, and began spending all my free-time playing rebel with the gangs and rouges who ruled the streets, I had kept an arsenal of blades close at hand at all times. But now that I wouldn't be at my apartment as often, I had decided to collect my knives and store them in my bedroom at Mount...
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Dr. Varhiez yanked his head into his hands., "I cant believe we lost her! Twice! She was our first successful creation!" His assistant, Dr. Foriam pulled out a chart, "Dr. Varhiez, why don't tu just make another one of her? I mean, tu created her, tu have all the information. and," Dr. Varhiez cut him off, snapping his head up. His large blue eyes and messy brown hair made the 45 yr old man look crazier than ever. "that right there Foriam, is where tu are wrong! When H-K4escaped from here, I had not finished my diagnostics, i did not finish recording all her information. I have no records...
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posted by SilverWingsYJ
Don't kill me! I just got bored of making OCs that I have to kill off soon (non that I've presented to the club yet).

Name: Crystal Adams

Hero ID: Can't think of a good one, so Crystal.

Age: 12

Physical Appearance: 5'2", dark hair, dark eyes, fair skin, black wings (14' wing span)

Race: Avian-hybrid

Relation to YJL: Fang's little sis. Surprise!

Abilities: mild martial arts, flight (wings), ability to change her appearance

Bio: Escaped from the School when she was 8. She hung around other mutants. A group of mutants, calling themselves the X- Genes, manipulated Crystal into helping them conn the rich...
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posted by Obscurity98
Trying to explain to Skylar why and what she wont say, and why the past may not matter, and why life sucks


Life Is a Sin : por Dox Eternal (ask me who that is okay, if u dont know)

Why is it a sin?
Does it really matter where i've been?
Life can take us on journeys
that no one else would understand.

If life is a sin,
Why don't we just stop livin'?
For us life may not be true,
life throws us fuego and we wont know what to do.

amor is part of life,
But living is sin,
It makes no sense anymore,
we will never win.

amor is lie, that we just keep on livin'
becasue life is a sin,
i will never understand,
Even though i aint perfect,

I am emotional,
But tu wouldn't understand
i am some one else,
B/c i'm not really who u tihnk i am,
iam, iam.

Because life is a sin,
i will never fit in,
I know,
amor is life, but life aint good for you,
life is a sin,
and i will never know what to do, for you.
posted by -BelovedRobin
 Pixiv Id 767532
Pixiv Id 767532
Name: Aria Leonhart
Alter Ego: None
Age: 24 (For Baker’s story)
Gender: Female
Eye Color: Hazel
Hair Color: Light Brown, looks auburn in certain sunlight.
Distinct Markings: she has a small topo close to corner of lip.
Height: 5’6” with heels 5’9”
Martial Status: Single
Birthplace: Hamburg, Germany
Current Residents: Wherever the hell “The Triangler
Relationship with: Likes London, however it’s up to Bakes whether o not they actually become a couple XD
Foes: 96/Alacurd

Articles she WILL appear in: “The Triangle” por Bakes2389

Powers: Ability of which she can control someone, o a group...
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posted by Robin_Love
She walked along the edge of the beach, the slight breeze running through her hair. The sun was starting to set in the distance. The water tagged her toes, racing to get away and then running back again. Birds chirped a few harmless melodies from their trees, serenading her. The peace was effective and calmed her worried thoughts. She found a grouping of rocks and sat on one. The winds gentle fingers pushed the hair away from her face, sending a shiver through her. She looked down and her eyes flashed orange. fuego sparked to life. Her eyes turned white-blue and the wind grew stronger at her...
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posted by Robin_Love
Well tu guys wanted más Terror and were also suggesting couples. So here's a look at Terror's tender side. Don't get too excited. It won't come out often.





He felt it like a sudden bullet. Fear. It hit him fast and it hit him hard. He placed his hands to his head, willing the sudden pain to go away. Most often he would take the fear away without needing to find the host of it. But he chose to look and was glad when he did. He walked among the shadow world, picking a rose as he went. He twirled the flor in his hand, ignoring the thorns that penetrated his skin. He stepped through one shadow...
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posted by AislingYJ
So this is the prologue to Broken Wings, the story I publicado the foros about. Just so tu know, this takes place in 20 years. Yeah.
12:03 AM
She was in the shadows, laying flat on her stomach with the gun at her side, trying to blend in with the roof of the stone building. Luckily the night was dark, only a tiny sliver of a moon hung in the sky, so she didn’t have to worry. Not yet.
Her finger was poised near the trigger of the gun, and part of her wanted to press it, just out of sheer boredom. But she didn’t. When were they going to come? Part of her wanted to go out and look for them, but...
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posted by Robin_Love
She looked around the darkened woods, listening. He was here somewhere. She knew he was. She took a small step forward, careful not to make any noise. She looked around once más before running for más cover. A blur ran towards her. siguiente she knew, she was tumbling on the ground, his arms around her. They landed heavily, both panting.
“Tommy!”
She let out a laugh and looked up at her love. His white hair was full of twigs and leaves, his body covered in scrapes and dirt. He smiled down at her, pulling a leaf out of her hair.
“I win!”
She stuck her tongue out at him, smiling.
“I'm still...
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posted by SilverWings13
Another Year One-Shot

SilverWings ducked under the ball of fuego as it flew toward her. It collided with the wall, throwing sparks, but she had already rolled to the side.
"Again?"
"Yes, please!" Another fiery projectile came at her. She dodged it easily, ducked under a second, and carro wheeled to avoid a third. She paused a moment to catch her breath, but leaped up as a final sphere shot at her. The flames licked at her heels and smashed into the brick wall.
Silver stumbled as she landed, breathing hard. Shutting her eyes, she rested her hands on her knees and leaned all her weight on them. A chuckle...
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posted by -BelovedRobin
I’m currently suffering from writers block for “Power Blitz” and “Diva One-Shot.” I had some wild ideas while I was looking at AislingYJ’s forum, “Be in a fanfic!” por the way, if tu haven’t yet, check it out! I bet she’ll amor to have más people sign up. Anyways, it was set 20 years prior to the Season 1 timeline and that lead to some crazed ideas. Like, I wonder what would happen to my youngest OCs, Bonnie and Matthew? Then this happens.

This is all just for fun and I hardly doubt I’ll write any artículos on this unless I get ask to.

This is for Bonnie; I’ll post Matthew...
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Nicknames?
Merce, Mercy, Bells, Bellie, Bell

Where do tu live?
Wherever I want!

What's your age?
Physically 16, mentally 5!

Hair color?
No matter what anyone says, I am a orange-head-- NOT a redhead!

Eye color?
Blue-- Depending on the light!

Height?
5'6 o 7" ??

Shoe size?
8.7452839287314201 and a quarter!

Date of Birth?
The past irks me... So, I'm not quite sure! Sometime in February maybe?

What's your estrella sign?
I have no idea what that is!

Element?
Fire. All the way!

How many siblings?
2 twin brothers- Deceased.

How many pets?
2- A rock and an iguana!

Obsessions?
Tea, traveling, swimming, having fun - And...
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posted by Obscurity98
-On my muro post i mentioned i had a weird encounter with Superboy, here it is!


Conner remembered the fist time they brought in Harley Mei. He thought Mei was a funny last name, and then it was weird. because Roy was with her, he rarely saw the Old side... protege of Green Arrow. But he knew Roy had a thing for the new girl. tu could tell.
Conner glanced her way, and something definitely bothered him. Was it because she was new? That Roy was attached to her? Oh no, it was because Big Blue (superman) had his arm around her shoulder. He'd seen the look on Superman's face once before. But it wasn't...
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posted by Robin_Love
Name: Tanner Pent
Alias: Ares
Occupation: Hero; clone of Superboy
Powers: Tactile telekinesis, super-strength, flight, invulnerability, heat vision, freezing breath, fire, super-speed, x-ray vision, heightened senses
History: Tanner is the clone of a clone. He was made por Talia Al'Ghul who acquired DNA from Becca Stevens before Becca defied her. Where he has the DNA of Superboy, Tanner also has the DNA of superhero Firestorm, giving him the ability of fire. Tanner's tactile telekinesis allows him to, telepathically, mimic the abilities of those around him, much like Superboy. Tanner was the first...
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posted by Robin_Love
She sat alone in her room, listening to the song coming from her boom box. She hugged the stuffed oso, oso de to her chest, trying not to burst into tears. This día was one she had dreaded for months. She bit her lip as the música filled her senses. A light knock sounded at her door.
“Go away!”
Her command was ignored and Trevor walked in.
“What's up kitty Cat?”
“Leave me alone.”
He glanced over her and softened.
“What's wrong?”
Cat looked away, afraid she would burst into tears. Trevor came closer and sat beside her.
“Why so upset? Talk to Trevor.”
She smiled a little as his British accent...
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posted by Obscurity98
 Megan's Dress from OLD RADICAL: DRESSES
Megan's Dress from OLD RADICAL: DRESSES
-Before Harley died:
-ft. Willow and Becca, Megan, and Harley
-Artemis and Zatanna don't exist here.
-our BFs are also featured.


Megan squealed as she climbed into Roy's car. Conner followed her. It was against Harley, Robin, Wally, and Roy's will to go to the mall, but Willow and Becca finally dragged them into it. Wally and Willow went on their motorcycle and so did Robin and Becca. But Harley Megan and Conner piled into Roy's car.
Roy huffed, "i can't believe i have to go through this."
Megan squealed, "Yes! i haven't been to the mall in ages! I can't wait."
Harley put her hands to her ears, "Oh...
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