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posted by Problematic129
*First of all thanks for comentarios :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me consejos and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The más I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. por the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking.
    “No need to be scared huney,” Cali said, a tinge of a southern accent in there as she looped our arms. “You can sit with me and my friends.”
    I nodded my gratitude and followed her to a mesa, tabla filled with some kids, holding my lunch tray. They all looked up when Cali and I approached, and I held in the urge to turn around and run away, but they continued what they were doing when we sat down and I let out a breath of relief.
    Now trust me, I can be pretty scary, my father is Marcus lucio Connor the genius who hasn’t been caught once. I even looked the part of my intimidating presence, with my black jacket, pants, t-shirt, and biker boots, but I always melt into a wimp when it comes to seating arrangements and friends.
    You see, practically every school has a social hierarchy, I’ve been to enough schools to see walking clichés. Even in the high school cafeteria, I could distinguish who was ‘hot’ and who was ‘not’. Trust me, schools like theses are known as the one chance schools, I dub them as doomsday/cliques schools , because tu get one chance to be popular, and one mistake to lose it all.
    I try not to ogle the popular crowd, which there so easy to distinguish because their table’s are always crowded with wannabes and people who kiss the ground they walk on (butt kissers, my friends). Than there’s the poplar’s themselves, always gorgeous people and sometimes nice and caring ones. But from the looks they have on while examining me, the new girl, something tells me there all evil.
    “Danger alert, the soul sucking black holes are looking at ya,” a boy says giving me a cheeky grin, as he nods in their direction, not caring if he sees them pointing it out.
    “Just ignore them, there just looking to see if you’re a threat,” another boy says, his chocolate leche skin brightening his warm brown eyes.
    “How would I be a threat?” I managed to say gazing at Cali, looking away from his memorizing eyes.
    Cali rolled her eyes, “you know, new favorito! student, knew most liked kid, new hottie. Don’t stress, they always act like this when a new kid comes to town.”
    “They just can’t stand being number two,” a girl with an accent that I couldn’t yet identify said. “Enough dicho let’s get the introductions started.”
    The first boy who talked nodded, “Yeah I’m Donald, but please call me Donnie.” Donnie paused but continued when I nodded. “That’s Xavier right there,” he pointed at the boy with the eyes. “Lara,” he pointed at the girl with platinum blonde hair.
“You know Cali, of course.”
    “America is still getting food, warning… she has really red hair, don’t point it out and don’t stare at it too long o feel her wrath.” When I gave him a strange look, his mouth quirked into a smile. “It’s dyed, and she get’s really crazy defensive when it comes to her hair.”
    I nodded and he went on, “Gregori,” he pointed at a boy with raven dark hair. “And last but not least Corrie and Cory, brother and sister, twins,” he pointed to a agrio, agria looking girl and boy, one had freckles while the other didn’t, and they both had different eye colors.
    The girl had rebelliously dyed her hair in tons of different colors, all in dark colors, blue, green, pink, red, black, blonde. On anyone else it would have looked weird, on her she looked wicked. Her brother had dark brown, which I guessed was Corrie’s original hair color.
    “I know what your thinking,” The girl, Corrie said, her voice very high and perky, unlike her appearance. “What parent names their kids, let alone twins, with homophones like Corrie and Cory. Believe it o not, o parents thought it would be cute…ugh, how I shudder.”
    “Hey! I’m not that bad!” dicho an insulted Cory.
    Corrie rolled her eyes, “please I’ve been sharing the same room with tu and I still can’t see the ground.”
    “I amor tu sis,” Cory said, ruffling her hair.
    Corrie shrieked. “My hair tu imbecile! It takes hours to do this hooligan! Now I have to fix this idiot!” Cory sighed as he stared up at the ceiling, “and tu call that offensive language,” he turned to face her, “girl please.”
    Corrie glared while Cory grinned. Right there I could see the resemblance between the two, even with their trying so hard not to look alike. They had the staring contests with those facial expressions until a voice interrupted.
    “If tu guys keep doing that your face will stay like it,” a girl dicho with fiery red hair dicho and I immediately knew it was America. I could also tell that her hair use to be blonde, it was a trick father taught me about observing every little detail and some of the strands of hair she had were blonde, which meant the dye was wearing off. I quickly looked to her eyes, remembering Donnie’s advice.     They were a nice mellow brown, but I totally thought they’d be startling forest green, like Cali’s, but they were a resembled rich light brown syrup, just as warm and sweet. America turned her gaze to me, “so you’re the fresh meat, huh?”
    “Ignore her,” Donnie dicho grinning at me, “but be warned.”
    “Guys!” Cali scolded, “this town is not that bad.”
    “I can’t believe tu can still say that after we saw that creep in the woods.”
    Automatically at those words every part of me just froze, I managed to calm my quivering voice just enough to spit out. “What?”
    “It was nothing,” Cali insisted.
    America snorted. “Yeah sure,” she turned to me. “So we were having this camp til midnight thing, we weren’t going to really spend the whole night in the forest at this town, anyway it was around the time we were doing our campfire songs, when all of a sudden we hear these…gunshots, I think.”
    “Yeah, and then this man is like, covered in blood running and we managed to take a few pictures, but we only got his side and his back.”
    “But,” America continued. “I think I remember seeing a cuchillo on him, and I think he’s in his forties.”
    42, to be exact, I thought stunned at her good eyesight and predictions. “Why didn’t tu send them to the police?”
    “We sent the pic of his back to polly,” Donnie said. “But not the side.”
    My mouth felt extremely dry as I asked quietly, “Why?”
    “Because…we just…there’s really no explanation of why we did it, we just did.”
    “It felt like the right thing to do, I printed the side picture from my computer so I could borrar the one on my phone.” America explained.
    I nodded, feeling like my whole world was coming down, something bad always has to happen at a place that I just moved to. They have a picture of my father, and if America was that observant can she see similarities in me? Will the police actually take me away from father? Will Azerien and I be safe?
    “Hey, Autumn, tu okay?” Cali asked, looking at me worriedly.
    Shaking my head out of that state, I smiled my best fake smile yet and said, “yeah, just spooked of the thought that this place is green and deadly.”
    The guys laughed, and I felt a surge of happiness through me, like I belonged here. It was the feeling I’d always get when Azerien would comfort me, o father would smile warmly at me, o when they both would occasionally say, I amor you, the words that to them was weakening and a waste of breathe. I felt loved, I felt important, and I felt as if they were my family. Nothing bad’s going to happen at the moment, I just have to let go.
    Let go of the worries that comes with being a Connor, forgetting every single care that I’ve held on for so long. My father wasn’t going to ruin my first día of school, with my first lunch with my new friends. This was my life, not his, and I’ll do what I want.
    I’m Summer Johnson Seraries, not Zyanna Connor. Here in this school, I’m a different person than the one I am at home, I should have nothing to fear about a man I don’t know. So I cast away all my worries, I didn’t think of how my new friends were a threat, and how if the time came to it father would kill them. Because something told me they weren’t going to let him go, no, something told me this was just the beginning of war between a murderer and his-soon-to be victims. And soon I’d probably be torn, but I had just found them, and I wasn’t going to let my father ruin this moment.
    So I just became Summer for the day, not Zyanna, and I had nothing to worry about.
Welcome all to the segundo issue of Everything Eden, your fuente for…well, everything Eden. In this issue, we'll be looking at the finall six libros of the Eden Chronicles. These six volumes tell of love, life, death, and hatred. Let's have a look.

A LITTLE BIT más THAN LOVE
As this volume has been discussed many times, it is not necessary to reveal anything here.

RISE OF THE DEMONS
Young Areana grew up sheltered from the battles her parents fought. Now, with the demons rising, new threats will make themselves known.

ROKUJO'S REVOLUTION
This book deals with the Failed Revolution. Crown Prince...
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posted by alicia386
One más chapter left!

Chapter 10: Do tu Swear to Tell the Truth and Nothing But the Truth

      Simone stared wide eyed through the bars locking her into the cell. It was the only thing that kept her from snapping everyone's heads off. The guard was gone but replaced por another man. He was tall, muscular, and had the most unscrupulous  grin on his face. It made Simone feel extremely uncomfortable. He had jet black hair and light green eyes. His eyes were sincere at time when he looked at her, but other times he made the hairs on the back of Simone's neck stand up. She didn't like this guy...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 10!!! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I had school, I'm now in high school! Freshman! So it was really time consuming, but I couldn't let tu down, I own nothing, all these pictures are not mine. There here fro the main purpose to inspire tu and put that smile right back on your face. Renew your faith, laugh at the sky, smile forever, and never cry. I believe in tu guys, I amor tu guys, tu are awesome, beautiful, amazing, cool, and you. And I don't need a picture of tu to know that, don't let them take tu down. In the end be the one standing and never lose hope. I won nothing. Enjoy!
A/N: here's chapter 2 of my story

So for 8 years the Twins where kept inside there inicial with no connection to the outside world. They had learned How to control there powers when they where 8. They kept on getting stronger each día that they practiced, they practiced 2 times a week.

The now 12 año old girl sighed looking out the window, she wished one día that she could go outside and meet people her own Age.

"What's wrong?" she turned around to see her brother Flame. "nothing, its just I want to go out there." her brother sighed as well "yeah me to, I want to see this land and the people. Frosta...
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posted by alicia386
(i thought this would be a very interesting teenage short story to tell. FYI i completely made this up on the spot. i have a very creative mind)

It was that perfect moment. My boyfriend, Liam, and I were just causually on the sofá watching another episode of America's siguiente parte superior, arriba Model. I was watching it for the fashion and he was watching it for the girls although he would never admit it. We were just sitting their having fun and sometimes makeouting but tu dont need all the details.

His tan arm was around me and i was laying my head on his chest. I thought nothing could possible ruin this moment...
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posted by IlovePatch97
im gonna be away so here is 2 chapters for you. please comment, it will make me a better writter. Thank tu :D




CHAPTER 3

I woke up to an extremely bright sun in my face and hot sand in my hair. I must not have been in the sun for long because I hadn't burnt yet. I could hear the sound of human laughter but it felt like it was coming from the inside of my head, all I could smell was smoke from a camp fire. I rolled over and pushed myself up off the sand and I looked around, still trying to figure out what happened. All I remembered was the egg, the flash of colour, and feeling I was falling from...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
11
    Terry
    “Just tell us!”
    “I already told you! I don’t remember!” Stilere yelled. “All I remember is having this headache and something and then when I was walking this weird feeling and then I opened my eyes…but I know something happened, I just can’t remember!”
    Zaria opened her mouth to say something else but I cut her off. “If she doesn’t remember, she doesn’t remember. Were just gonna have to…jog her memory back, yeah, that’s it.”
    “And...
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posted by 1999jacko
3 miles away

Gemini woke from his sleep, his wand in his hand with an old brown tendril half out of it as though he had been fighting someone. He slowly dicho under his breath," samantanes," his voice rough and gravely from a thousand years of unconscious, after a segundo of waiting a huge water hand shot from his body clearing his way backup to the surface. He grabbed the wand and jumped up onto the surface as 18 of his ( former) captors came towards him tendrils flying everywhere. He could see the fiery robes of his worst enemy Virgo at the front, but as they ran adelante, hacia adelante Gemini saw the flabby...
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Sometimes I have this feeling
Right here deep in my heart
A feeling that is steady, pounding against my soul
A feeling that I write but can't complete

Oh, I want my dreams and hopes to be heard
I can't hide my feelings any longer
No one's gonna stop me from doing what I want
They will not be pushed aside

Now I'm done believing what tu told me about
I have no trust o faith in tu anymore
And it's time for me to follow my dreams
To stand tall and scream out my lungs

Listen to me and the story I will tell.....
I was just sitting por the bedside
Staring at the world outside of my home
And it changed my life,...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four: Do All Teenagers Go Through What I Go Through

      Raven Millan was the daughter of the double agent Marcus Millan. He is notorious for sending information to Germany while pretending to be loyal to the U.S. He told Germany all about what was going on in Area 51. Germany learned how to use that information against us and we almost went into a World War 3. Last I heard, he was going to be dado the electric chair. My dad was supervising Millan when the government found out about the betrayal. My dad had told me everything because we have this open relationship and he tells me...
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They all rushed to the hospital. "Kyle." they gasped. Kyle, with his blonde hair, scratches, bruises and broken bones lyed under the white, soft, hospital blanket. The only sound that could be heard was the soft, quite sound of the corazón monitor beeping. They all went and sat siguiente to his hospital bed. They all tried to hold back the tears. Summer gave in and tears streamed down her cheeks and on to the floor. Tiffany, Angus and Mariah burst into tears as well. James didnt, he didnt like to mostrar emotion, no matter how sad he was. Even though he wasn't crying on the outside, they knew there were...
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posted by rory2011
while Kat cleaning the house ,she heard a weird voice coming from the corridor ,it looks like someone is eating there in a loud voice
she went to see what was there ,Mac was behind her when she saw a ghost for an old man eating himself
she looked scared and shock at the ghost ,the ghost of the old man looked at her , he was very angry ,he ran towards her fast while he's screaming and he was opening his polilla, polilla de la , he wanted to bite her o maybe eat her
she screamed when he was almost got her but Mac's voice cut what she's seeing
" what are tu doing here ? " Mac asked
" I'm just a... I'm just cleaning...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
    7
    Zaria
    It was crazy, one minuto we were just wandering aimlessly around looking fro the fuente of the noise and the siguiente this…thing, comes out from nowhere. We ran like crazy, not bothering to look back, we lost Alex in the way and we were freaking out.
    “Where did he go?!” Iris asks, freaked.
    I shake my head. “I don’t know.”
    I’m close to tears and Iris looks pale, all of a sudden we hear this roar, followed por a scream,...
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Chapter (21): 'The Finale' 
She walked happily on her way inicial from school with a smile at everyone she saw in her way, suddenly she heard a twig snap right behind her, she turned and there was no one there she continued walking but she knew she had a feeling that something bad was going to happen and it just popped up every time she tried to ignore it, this time she heard the sound of footsteps other than her's on the césped, hierba and every time she turned there was no one there, her fear was increasing every time she turned around and back again, she couldn't take it anymore she broke into a run...
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Both were silent for a long while, the minutos dragged por and Bobby swore he could see the entire scene playing across Husky's eyes, the same thing over and over again. A not so subtle cough brought him back to the living world, and he continued with his tale. "I woke up a couple days later, both Matt and Ethan were okay and alive, and I was damn lucky. In my act of bravery," he spat the word with such disdain and Bobby couldn't understand why. He thrown himself on an explosive device to save his men, if that wasn't bravery then what the hell was? "I managed to not even cover the IED, rather...
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A/N: hola everyone, it's me again...sort of. Anyways, this will be a series of short stories...or shorter than short stories based on word prompts. So I'll post three in each part. And they'll be maybe around five o six parts based upon user feedback :) Now I'm using several word prompts courtesy of Dhampires, hgfan5642 and several others :) I hope all of tu enjoy this.

A Stranger's Musings: A Collection of Drabbles

Prompt 1: Hate

When I see her with him, my blood boils. My mind is being supplied several mental imágenes of her painful demise.

I hate her, despise her, loathe her with...
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His mother set about straightening up the room, as he drifted into the bathroom, stripping down and climbing into the shower.
He turn the knobs, a feeling of instant security filling him as the water crashed down on his face. Something about a nice ducha, ducha de just made him feel safe. He hissed a bit as the scalding water poured ever him and into his open wounds, he thought he could hear his skin sizzle when the water pounded down onto the gash in his forehead. He could feel the dirt fall away, the scent of death all falling away and circling the drain below. It took him awhile to realize the water...
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posted by 1999jacko
Fantasy

Water looked confused as the old man dicho all this,"w-what do tu mean wizard?" Walter dicho his mind full of preguntas for the old man. The old man answered quickly, his voice seemingly getting older as he went on," tu are wearing the clothes of a wizard and tu have a wand in your cinturón, correa so that means your a wizard." The hard,heavy breathing coming from the old man got louder as Walter answered," but i'm not a wizard, sir," the man cackled and coughed. " Come through here boy and sit down, I can't stand for much longer," he dicho and started to lead the way out of the room, which Walter...
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posted by hgfan5602
I will not be under your tyranny
Your cruel and oppressive force
Yes, maybe tu should be my leader
But that doesn't mean I should follow tu all the time

Do tu know he's got tu bound
Under ropes and chains of cruelty
Well, I don't wanna be a follower
If it means I have to be a killer

No, I'm not exactly kind-hearted
But that doesn't mean I have to kill, kill, kill
I don't wanna be just a senseless follower
I have a heart, I have a soul, so I don't follow you

I don't just wanna be a follower
So I don't give a fuck bout what tu do, do, do
But I myself will not give in to the tyranny
So you'll watch me leave

No one's gonna stop me
Look, I'm walking out the doors of tyranny
And I'm not gonna be a senseless follower
Ever again in my life.
posted by rory2011
after a long día of work , Kat came back to the house ,she stood staring at every single corner of the house
the house is almost empty ,she had to sell everything for the expansive painkiller that David taking ,the only thing left in the house is that little white chair , a blanket ,and her father's cama she knows that she can't make a life in that house , but she has to keep going strong till the last breath

it's a calm night ,David is sleeping ,Kat lectura her favorito! book in her father's cama room
the bills ringing woke David up
" Kat ,that's Paul ,go and open the door " David dicho in pain...
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