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posted by Problematic129
*First of all thanks for comentarios :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me consejos and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The más I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. por the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking.
    “No need to be scared huney,” Cali said, a tinge of a southern accent in there as she looped our arms. “You can sit with me and my friends.”
    I nodded my gratitude and followed her to a mesa, tabla filled with some kids, holding my lunch tray. They all looked up when Cali and I approached, and I held in the urge to turn around and run away, but they continued what they were doing when we sat down and I let out a breath of relief.
    Now trust me, I can be pretty scary, my father is Marcus lucio Connor the genius who hasn’t been caught once. I even looked the part of my intimidating presence, with my black jacket, pants, t-shirt, and biker boots, but I always melt into a wimp when it comes to seating arrangements and friends.
    You see, practically every school has a social hierarchy, I’ve been to enough schools to see walking clichés. Even in the high school cafeteria, I could distinguish who was ‘hot’ and who was ‘not’. Trust me, schools like theses are known as the one chance schools, I dub them as doomsday/cliques schools , because tu get one chance to be popular, and one mistake to lose it all.
    I try not to ogle the popular crowd, which there so easy to distinguish because their table’s are always crowded with wannabes and people who kiss the ground they walk on (butt kissers, my friends). Than there’s the poplar’s themselves, always gorgeous people and sometimes nice and caring ones. But from the looks they have on while examining me, the new girl, something tells me there all evil.
    “Danger alert, the soul sucking black holes are looking at ya,” a boy says giving me a cheeky grin, as he nods in their direction, not caring if he sees them pointing it out.
    “Just ignore them, there just looking to see if you’re a threat,” another boy says, his chocolate leche skin brightening his warm brown eyes.
    “How would I be a threat?” I managed to say gazing at Cali, looking away from his memorizing eyes.
    Cali rolled her eyes, “you know, new favorito! student, knew most liked kid, new hottie. Don’t stress, they always act like this when a new kid comes to town.”
    “They just can’t stand being number two,” a girl with an accent that I couldn’t yet identify said. “Enough dicho let’s get the introductions started.”
    The first boy who talked nodded, “Yeah I’m Donald, but please call me Donnie.” Donnie paused but continued when I nodded. “That’s Xavier right there,” he pointed at the boy with the eyes. “Lara,” he pointed at the girl with platinum blonde hair.
“You know Cali, of course.”
    “America is still getting food, warning… she has really red hair, don’t point it out and don’t stare at it too long o feel her wrath.” When I gave him a strange look, his mouth quirked into a smile. “It’s dyed, and she get’s really crazy defensive when it comes to her hair.”
    I nodded and he went on, “Gregori,” he pointed at a boy with raven dark hair. “And last but not least Corrie and Cory, brother and sister, twins,” he pointed to a agrio, agria looking girl and boy, one had freckles while the other didn’t, and they both had different eye colors.
    The girl had rebelliously dyed her hair in tons of different colors, all in dark colors, blue, green, pink, red, black, blonde. On anyone else it would have looked weird, on her she looked wicked. Her brother had dark brown, which I guessed was Corrie’s original hair color.
    “I know what your thinking,” The girl, Corrie said, her voice very high and perky, unlike her appearance. “What parent names their kids, let alone twins, with homophones like Corrie and Cory. Believe it o not, o parents thought it would be cute…ugh, how I shudder.”
    “Hey! I’m not that bad!” dicho an insulted Cory.
    Corrie rolled her eyes, “please I’ve been sharing the same room with tu and I still can’t see the ground.”
    “I amor tu sis,” Cory said, ruffling her hair.
    Corrie shrieked. “My hair tu imbecile! It takes hours to do this hooligan! Now I have to fix this idiot!” Cory sighed as he stared up at the ceiling, “and tu call that offensive language,” he turned to face her, “girl please.”
    Corrie glared while Cory grinned. Right there I could see the resemblance between the two, even with their trying so hard not to look alike. They had the staring contests with those facial expressions until a voice interrupted.
    “If tu guys keep doing that your face will stay like it,” a girl dicho with fiery red hair dicho and I immediately knew it was America. I could also tell that her hair use to be blonde, it was a trick father taught me about observing every little detail and some of the strands of hair she had were blonde, which meant the dye was wearing off. I quickly looked to her eyes, remembering Donnie’s advice.     They were a nice mellow brown, but I totally thought they’d be startling forest green, like Cali’s, but they were a resembled rich light brown syrup, just as warm and sweet. America turned her gaze to me, “so you’re the fresh meat, huh?”
    “Ignore her,” Donnie dicho grinning at me, “but be warned.”
    “Guys!” Cali scolded, “this town is not that bad.”
    “I can’t believe tu can still say that after we saw that creep in the woods.”
    Automatically at those words every part of me just froze, I managed to calm my quivering voice just enough to spit out. “What?”
    “It was nothing,” Cali insisted.
    America snorted. “Yeah sure,” she turned to me. “So we were having this camp til midnight thing, we weren’t going to really spend the whole night in the forest at this town, anyway it was around the time we were doing our campfire songs, when all of a sudden we hear these…gunshots, I think.”
    “Yeah, and then this man is like, covered in blood running and we managed to take a few pictures, but we only got his side and his back.”
    “But,” America continued. “I think I remember seeing a cuchillo on him, and I think he’s in his forties.”
    42, to be exact, I thought stunned at her good eyesight and predictions. “Why didn’t tu send them to the police?”
    “We sent the pic of his back to polly,” Donnie said. “But not the side.”
    My mouth felt extremely dry as I asked quietly, “Why?”
    “Because…we just…there’s really no explanation of why we did it, we just did.”
    “It felt like the right thing to do, I printed the side picture from my computer so I could borrar the one on my phone.” America explained.
    I nodded, feeling like my whole world was coming down, something bad always has to happen at a place that I just moved to. They have a picture of my father, and if America was that observant can she see similarities in me? Will the police actually take me away from father? Will Azerien and I be safe?
    “Hey, Autumn, tu okay?” Cali asked, looking at me worriedly.
    Shaking my head out of that state, I smiled my best fake smile yet and said, “yeah, just spooked of the thought that this place is green and deadly.”
    The guys laughed, and I felt a surge of happiness through me, like I belonged here. It was the feeling I’d always get when Azerien would comfort me, o father would smile warmly at me, o when they both would occasionally say, I amor you, the words that to them was weakening and a waste of breathe. I felt loved, I felt important, and I felt as if they were my family. Nothing bad’s going to happen at the moment, I just have to let go.
    Let go of the worries that comes with being a Connor, forgetting every single care that I’ve held on for so long. My father wasn’t going to ruin my first día of school, with my first lunch with my new friends. This was my life, not his, and I’ll do what I want.
    I’m Summer Johnson Seraries, not Zyanna Connor. Here in this school, I’m a different person than the one I am at home, I should have nothing to fear about a man I don’t know. So I cast away all my worries, I didn’t think of how my new friends were a threat, and how if the time came to it father would kill them. Because something told me they weren’t going to let him go, no, something told me this was just the beginning of war between a murderer and his-soon-to be victims. And soon I’d probably be torn, but I had just found them, and I wasn’t going to let my father ruin this moment.
    So I just became Summer for the day, not Zyanna, and I had nothing to worry about.
Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked fresa red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I amor tu dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I amor tu two.” As he turned into the siguiente road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk inicial o is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" dicho Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" dicho Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where tu are I'm picking tu and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not inicial for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My corazón is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any más of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and tu are sinner, commit all, tu are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take tu to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. tu know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your preguntas and comments!
added by sawfan13
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added by alicia386
After days of debating, I decided to post some of my first attempt at fan-fiction. In this case the "Silent Hill" franchise. For those of tu that have never played the games, tu could always look up spoilers for them, since this takes place in the game canon. Anyway, here's the prolouge & Chapter One, please comentario and let me know what tu think! :)
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PROLOUGE:TOLUCA COUNTY, MAY 2001
Frank was asleep when he heard the knock on his door. After forcing himself out of bed, he looked out to see someone he hardly ever saw. Nathan and his father. Nathan was...
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posted by rory2011
she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she lost a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...
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posted by rory2011
Hayley was lying on the ground without any mover ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the muro ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away o find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the muro
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if tu can handle this " Mac dicho , he looked at Kat for a minutos then he looked at David...
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Chapter (17):
"Glad tu came dude" dicho Josh, "Yeah" replied Noah "Aren't tu three going to sit down o wait to be invited?" asked Bonnie, Noah stalked away from Abbie and Leo, and settled himself siguiente to Bonnie, Abbie and Leo sat in the two remaining chairs side por side, "Your Noah's sister Abbie right?" asked Josh, Abbie noticed that Bonnie and Josh weren't pale haired but there hair was deep golden blonde like their mother, "Yes, your Susie's cousin right?" she asked, "Yeah, I am do tu know her?" he answered with a ghost of a smile, "Yes, we go to the same school and she's in few of my...
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I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces por pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.
posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantasía :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered por my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why tu bother, Des. Your voice is weak...
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One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
Chapter 1


Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, mostrando a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had dado him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...
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posted by sadiebugz00
Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip


Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had castaña, castaño hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are tu looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place...
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posted by kyran12
CHAPTER 1

when cringe woke up all he could see was a crouched figure in the dark. As he watched, the figure slowly rose to its feet and walked away. Cringe was confused, he could remember getting up this morning and going to school and then... and then...... Nothing.

the siguiente día the figure was back but this time he wasn't alone. there was a child standing siguiente to him. as cringe started to get up a voice came from the child, but it was different, it was an adults voice. "who are you?" the voice was deep and almost metallic.
"who wants to know" cringe was known for his sarcasm at school but it...
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Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of tu to registrarse us.." dicho a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" dicho Laura Gellar, she walked to the mesa, tabla and settled siguiente to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if tu don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two panqueques, tortitas please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could tu please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" dicho Susie with a forced smile and she put...
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Chris: Welcome to Total Drama Adventure

= theme song =

(Team Zoey)
Mike: hola Z-
Gwen: STOP.
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*Chris walks into the kitchen*
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Private: CAN I PLLEEAASSE registrarse THE OTHHA TEAM????!!!!!
Chris: Well sure but you'd have to be replaced.
With Rico.
Private: Oh sure!!!

(Team Triumph)
Private: hola Crystal I'm on your team now!
Crystal: Great.
Heather: *sigh* Another stupid bird on my team...
Skipper: HEY!!!!
Crystal: hola don't talk bad about me and the cute one....I mean.....................
Lindsay:...
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