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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me consejos and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The más I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. por the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking.
    “No need to be scared huney,” Cali said, a tinge of a southern accent in there as she looped our arms. “You can sit with me and my friends.”
    I nodded my gratitude and followed her to a mesa, tabla filled with some kids, holding my lunch tray. They all looked up when Cali and I approached, and I held in the urge to turn around and run away, but they continued what they were doing when we sat down and I let out a breath of relief.
    Now trust me, I can be pretty scary, my father is Marcus lucio Connor the genius who hasn’t been caught once. I even looked the part of my intimidating presence, with my black jacket, pants, t-shirt, and biker boots, but I always melt into a wimp when it comes to seating arrangements and friends.
    You see, practically every school has a social hierarchy, I’ve been to enough schools to see walking clichés. Even in the high school cafeteria, I could distinguish who was ‘hot’ and who was ‘not’. Trust me, schools like theses are known as the one chance schools, I dub them as doomsday/cliques schools , because tu get one chance to be popular, and one mistake to lose it all.
    I try not to ogle the popular crowd, which there so easy to distinguish because their table’s are always crowded with wannabes and people who kiss the ground they walk on (butt kissers, my friends). Than there’s the poplar’s themselves, always gorgeous people and sometimes nice and caring ones. But from the looks they have on while examining me, the new girl, something tells me there all evil.
    “Danger alert, the soul sucking black holes are looking at ya,” a boy says giving me a cheeky grin, as he nods in their direction, not caring if he sees them pointing it out.
    “Just ignore them, there just looking to see if you’re a threat,” another boy says, his chocolate leche skin brightening his warm brown eyes.
    “How would I be a threat?” I managed to say gazing at Cali, looking away from his memorizing eyes.
    Cali rolled her eyes, “you know, new favorito! student, knew most liked kid, new hottie. Don’t stress, they always act like this when a new kid comes to town.”
    “They just can’t stand being number two,” a girl with an accent that I couldn’t yet identify said. “Enough dicho let’s get the introductions started.”
    The first boy who talked nodded, “Yeah I’m Donald, but please call me Donnie.” Donnie paused but continued when I nodded. “That’s Xavier right there,” he pointed at the boy with the eyes. “Lara,” he pointed at the girl with platinum blonde hair.
“You know Cali, of course.”
    “America is still getting food, warning… she has really red hair, don’t point it out and don’t stare at it too long o feel her wrath.” When I gave him a strange look, his mouth quirked into a smile. “It’s dyed, and she get’s really crazy defensive when it comes to her hair.”
    I nodded and he went on, “Gregori,” he pointed at a boy with raven dark hair. “And last but not least Corrie and Cory, brother and sister, twins,” he pointed to a agrio, agria looking girl and boy, one had freckles while the other didn’t, and they both had different eye colors.
    The girl had rebelliously dyed her hair in tons of different colors, all in dark colors, blue, green, pink, red, black, blonde. On anyone else it would have looked weird, on her she looked wicked. Her brother had dark brown, which I guessed was Corrie’s original hair color.
    “I know what your thinking,” The girl, Corrie said, her voice very high and perky, unlike her appearance. “What parent names their kids, let alone twins, with homophones like Corrie and Cory. Believe it o not, o parents thought it would be cute…ugh, how I shudder.”
    “Hey! I’m not that bad!” dicho an insulted Cory.
    Corrie rolled her eyes, “please I’ve been sharing the same room with tu and I still can’t see the ground.”
    “I amor tu sis,” Cory said, ruffling her hair.
    Corrie shrieked. “My hair tu imbecile! It takes hours to do this hooligan! Now I have to fix this idiot!” Cory sighed as he stared up at the ceiling, “and tu call that offensive language,” he turned to face her, “girl please.”
    Corrie glared while Cory grinned. Right there I could see the resemblance between the two, even with their trying so hard not to look alike. They had the staring contests with those facial expressions until a voice interrupted.
    “If tu guys keep doing that your face will stay like it,” a girl dicho with fiery red hair dicho and I immediately knew it was America. I could also tell that her hair use to be blonde, it was a trick father taught me about observing every little detail and some of the strands of hair she had were blonde, which meant the dye was wearing off. I quickly looked to her eyes, remembering Donnie’s advice.     They were a nice mellow brown, but I totally thought they’d be startling forest green, like Cali’s, but they were a resembled rich light brown syrup, just as warm and sweet. America turned her gaze to me, “so you’re the fresh meat, huh?”
    “Ignore her,” Donnie dicho grinning at me, “but be warned.”
    “Guys!” Cali scolded, “this town is not that bad.”
    “I can’t believe tu can still say that after we saw that creep in the woods.”
    Automatically at those words every part of me just froze, I managed to calm my quivering voice just enough to spit out. “What?”
    “It was nothing,” Cali insisted.
    America snorted. “Yeah sure,” she turned to me. “So we were having this camp til midnight thing, we weren’t going to really spend the whole night in the forest at this town, anyway it was around the time we were doing our campfire songs, when all of a sudden we hear these…gunshots, I think.”
    “Yeah, and then this man is like, covered in blood running and we managed to take a few pictures, but we only got his side and his back.”
    “But,” America continued. “I think I remember seeing a cuchillo on him, and I think he’s in his forties.”
    42, to be exact, I thought stunned at her good eyesight and predictions. “Why didn’t tu send them to the police?”
    “We sent the pic of his back to polly,” Donnie said. “But not the side.”
    My mouth felt extremely dry as I asked quietly, “Why?”
    “Because…we just…there’s really no explanation of why we did it, we just did.”
    “It felt like the right thing to do, I printed the side picture from my computer so I could borrar the one on my phone.” America explained.
    I nodded, feeling like my whole world was coming down, something bad always has to happen at a place that I just moved to. They have a picture of my father, and if America was that observant can she see similarities in me? Will the police actually take me away from father? Will Azerien and I be safe?
    “Hey, Autumn, tu okay?” Cali asked, looking at me worriedly.
    Shaking my head out of that state, I smiled my best fake smile yet and said, “yeah, just spooked of the thought that this place is green and deadly.”
    The guys laughed, and I felt a surge of happiness through me, like I belonged here. It was the feeling I’d always get when Azerien would comfort me, o father would smile warmly at me, o when they both would occasionally say, I amor you, the words that to them was weakening and a waste of breathe. I felt loved, I felt important, and I felt as if they were my family. Nothing bad’s going to happen at the moment, I just have to let go.
    Let go of the worries that comes with being a Connor, forgetting every single care that I’ve held on for so long. My father wasn’t going to ruin my first día of school, with my first lunch with my new friends. This was my life, not his, and I’ll do what I want.
    I’m Summer Johnson Seraries, not Zyanna Connor. Here in this school, I’m a different person than the one I am at home, I should have nothing to fear about a man I don’t know. So I cast away all my worries, I didn’t think of how my new friends were a threat, and how if the time came to it father would kill them. Because something told me they weren’t going to let him go, no, something told me this was just the beginning of war between a murderer and his-soon-to be victims. And soon I’d probably be torn, but I had just found them, and I wasn’t going to let my father ruin this moment.
    So I just became Summer for the day, not Zyanna, and I had nothing to worry about.
posted by alicia386
Chapter One
"What can I say? tu are handsome beyond compare," chuckled Chase as he winked at himself in the mirror.

Ally, his twin, was leaning on his bedroom door. "Vain much?" She giggled at her brother's goofiness.

"Ally! How long have tu been standing there?"

"Somewhere between the part where tu began complimenting your own hair and the shoes you're wearing." Ally pulled her sleave over her face to keep from laughing any harder.

"Get out," Chase teased as he closed the door behind Ally. He could still her laughing from behind the door. "Next time knock!" He shouted through the door....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter 2: When Visitors Attack

      It was a sunny Wednesday morning, the birds were chirping, everything was just wonderful and it would have been even más tremendous if Simone hadn't screamed in their ears, ordering them to leave her estate. There wasn't a better way for her to wake them up. She has them up at 5am. She was in quite a hurry to gawk at her father's ancient yearbook. The girls saw her carry it from the attic but Simone didn't realize that they knew. They were going to ask her about it that morning. She shoved the girls out onto her freshly cut front lawn, told Sidney she'll...
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My eyes switched from Aaron to Gary I had no idea what they ment, trying to escape Daniel's cluches would on lead to a world of suffering pain of pure torture.

"Well turns out the old hag isn't in this morning so I say this is our actual and only chance of getting the hell out of here." Aaron stated with huge grin.

"Are tu sure did tu check the whole house?" I asked.

"Positive. Every spot of this place, he's nowhere in this house."

"And if he is? I mean come in Aaron what if he catches us? Then what do we do?"

"Wow and to think I thought Stella Gardener would take this chance with joy...
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posted by IlovePatch97
CHAPTER 1


The only sound I could hear was the crackle of the fuego burning in the fireplace. I stared up at the purple Victorian canvas above my head. It is probably 5 in the morning, my eyes were so sore but I couldn't close them. I was very tired but I couldn't stop thinking about what happened after cena last night.
    It was around eight in the evening. My brother and I had just finished eating when out of the blue; Mr. Matinary stormed in demanding to talk to my brother at once. Mr. Matinary, a stocky man with dark hair who is a friend of my brothers he was holding...
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Disappointments are for yesterday
Don't even care now if I slipped right down
Just wanna get back up

Oh where are the times we stood up straight
Never let something shove us down?
Oh when did we get back up
When something tripped us over?

It seems like yesterday when we did that
But we're so obnoxious now it's crazy
Just pull yourself together
Cuz I don't even care if I fell

Well yesterday was the worst día of my life
Just tripping on the hard cold cement
But yesterday seems like eternity now
Cuz I'm not looking back now

Disappointments are for yesterday
Looking back on them is naive
Why do tu wanna be a fool
Looking back on the streets of disappointment?

So get back up and breathe
In the warm city air
Disappointments are for yesterday
So pull yourself up.
posted by alicia386
Chapter Fifteen

MY BIGGEST REGRET IS NOT ENJOYING THE SMALL MOMENTS I HAD WITH HER. -Emma

      How does it feel to be on fire? It left like getting a sunburn but hurting ten times más and más heat. It felt like being in a furnace o being baked in an oven. It felt awful. tu would think that from all of that pain I would have surely died but I didn't. I was alive and each moment I inhaled it only got worse. I couldn't tell what had caused this pain but from the yelling I could tell Shane was fighting whoever did it. 
      My mind began to wonder away from the pain. It was too much to...
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posted by Problematic129
This is the people who played my roles for me. This is my thanks for everyone tuning into Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's and I hope tu tune into remember me, which I'm still working on. Writer's block is such an ugly disease, but I'm getting it done. P.S I didn't have a visual picture fro some characters, please comentario what tu think. I've seen people on Wattpad do this, and I wanted to try, but I do not have a wattpad account, I just visit and read some of their stories, interesting, and good, tu guys should visit.
Hope tu enjoy! :)
 Zyanna (Britt Robertson)
Zyanna (Britt Robertson)
 Azerien (Zach Roerig)
Azerien (Zach Roerig)
 America (Alexia Fast)
America (Alexia Fast)
 Xavier (Alex Sawyer)
Xavier (Alex Sawyer)
 Cali (Nathalia Ramos)
Cali (Nathalia Ramos)
 Cory (Steven R. Mqueen)
Cory (Steven R. Mqueen)
 Corrie (Nina Dobrev)
Corrie (Nina Dobrev)
 Donnie (Burkely Duffield)
Donnie (Burkely Duffield)
 Lara (Ana Mulvoy Ten)
Lara (Ana Mulvoy Ten)
 Gregori (Atticus Mitchell)
Gregori (Atticus Mitchell)
 Bellaire (Candice Accola)
Bellaire (Candice Accola)
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 17
    High school, the worse kind
    I was so angry that we had to go school the siguiente Monday morning, that I even considered skipping. Now, it’s got nothing to do with Ryler, okay maybe a little. But also due to the fact that I have to face Meredith and Cal, yeah, I may have an infatuation. But it still hurts to see Cal with her.
    It’s hard to break a crush you’ve had for a while, but I can work something. But now I’m angry because I could spend the whole día with Ryler, who was Adam...
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Who else is pumped for Divergent this Friday?
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posted by Problematic129
*Hey guys, I'm back :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Summary:
Three years hace devastating news hit the Loreans, there eighteen año old daughter was found dead in the lake. For years police tried to find her killer, but never got anywhere. Soon, everyone gave up, even her parents. But not Destiny, everyday she would try to find police reports similar to her sister. Destiny is no ordinary girl, she has visions and can see things that no one else can, and lately she's been having dreams of her sister about her sister. When it looks like all hope is lost, a young detective comes...
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posted by dragonsmemory
Want to be a part of my upcoming book series, The Eden Chronicles? All tu have to do is create a character, pick a time period, and watch for your character in an upcoming novel.

SPECIES (choose one of the following. No half-breeds)
Demon
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Centaur
Unicorn
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(if tu know of another species, tu can add it, no angels)

NAME: (create your own, must be unique)

AGE:

COLORING: (depends on species)

PERSONALITY: (up to you)

TIME PERIOD
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That's all tu need to registrarse the series. Watch for a special first look at Book 1, coming soon.
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Ever wish tu got a shoulder to lean on?
Ever wish tu weren't always cryin' in the rain?
Ever wish tu weren't always so lonely, girl?
Ever wish tu could fly?

In the darkness,
I've always leaned on my shoulder
Who always saw who I really was
Never mistook me for someone else

I'm just a small shadow
Cowering in the rain
But once I got my shoulder
Boy, I feel so strong

The shoulder who always saw through me
The person who always knew what I felt
The person who always stayed por my side
My faithful friend through rain and hail

Did tu ever know tu were my shoulder?
Did tu ever know I would never be
Something...
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Ash
______________________________________________________________________________

I hate going home. Knowing that when I get there, my mom’s gonna be trying to set her hair on fuego to keep the goblins away o something. Having to drag the lighter out of her hands, hearing her wail and dash to her room.
    But this time was different. It was completely silent in the house. Completely silent. I couldn’t hear a thing expect the muffled whir of the air conditioning and the creaking floorboards when I stepped.
    I hurried into her room. No one was there....
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