True Writers Article: Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

sadiebugz00 likes this

hgfan5602 Okay, don't revise this. I mean, just two tiny errors. When Rachel fell 5 feet (NO FROM) Space between 2 and hours

alicia386 yep i likes this one.

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The Inevitable Fate 18

posted by rory2011

Kat took the paper leaving the room quickly ,she went to where she and Hayley always sit
" we're leaving ,change your clothes and take the most important things tu need " Kat dicho
" what ! ? " Hayley dicho
" we don't have too much time ,please just do what I dicho " Kat dicho
she took the paper and put it in the printer ,she want something to improve Mac's intentions and the government Intentions

Hayley stood near the house door waiting Kat ,but unfortunately Mac came , he saw Hayley wearing her capa and carrying her bag
he know that Kat planning to leave so he sat on the stairs which are close...

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A life of survival, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

Leo picked Sarah up, because she was going to slow, and started to jump to the nearest árbol skilfully. After jumping to 8 different trees they finally reached their inicial árbol and, at the same time, whispered," Jason tu there." They heard movement from a different branch and saw a shadow mover clumsily over a small rack of weapons that that they had made," Jason stop trying to scare us and come out." Leo hissed loudly, the person came around the othe side of the árbol and said," I don't think Jason is ever going to try and scare tu ever again." The person had a serpent like smile and held a...

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Absolutely Wicked

posted by Problematic129

*Previously called the book that promised death, but changed it, unpublished it and publicado it here :)*
Prologue
The girl ran and did not stop, for it would cost her her life. She clutched the book tightly in her hands, keeping them at her sides…hidden. But they knew she had it, and they would not stop for nothing at all.
They will kill her for it and if its in their hands then the world would be doomed. And that must not happen the girl thought willing her legs to run faster.
Although running in a dress that was tied together so hard that she couldn’t breathe didn’t help her at all....

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Power

posted by alicia386

Power

tu are possessed
por this world
This so called better future
Is destroying you

At what cost
The fame o the fortune
It isn't worth it
Haven't tu seen

The corruption
Power brings
Too much of a good thing
Becomes worthless in the end

Don't be like that
Help yourself
Save yourself from this
This unplanned future

Power brings one thing
Death
There is no way around it
It will soon take over

It will become your life
This power that tu long for
Shall be a death sentence for you
I wish tu luck

I hope tu see the way
The way I speak of
How power isn't healthy
And not apart of your diet

Turn away
From the temptation
That power can bring
Forget it

Forget everything
The money
The fame
The power

Don't look back
Behind tu is the head
The head of evil
The head of power

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Descending ángel (Song)

posted by Problematic129

*Randomly came up with the idea, please comentario o fan, appreciated! :)*

Verse 1:
Wings the color of diamond and gold. corazón so lovely…it’ll melt tu so, oh. Their warm embrace is protecting me, there’s nothing else I would give for this, oooh, yeah ,nothing else that could make my corazón twist.

    Chorus:
    And now, I see, the descending angel, protecting me. It takes, me in, to a whole new world that I would never give.
    And now I see, oh yes, I see

    Verse 2:
    I’ve...

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Remember me Ch.25

posted by Problematic129

*Game twister buddies.
~Genre: Fiction, mystery, and I guess fantasía :)*
Chapter 25
    Dorothy’s point of view
    I touch her journal. “I’m going to try something,” I tell my friends. “So don’t freak out unless I start bleeding o jerking o something unusually.”
    Jess nods, use to the routine, she turns to Cadence. “Get ready rookie, and don’t freak out, I know when to panic.”
    Cadence looking confused and a bit scared nods, as he watches me.
    I close my eyes, and concentrate...

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Be Normal...Not (Chapter Two, Science Fiction)

posted by hgfan5602

Now tu believe that I'm not normal, huh? Well, this is going to make tu tear your hair out.
So, as I was saying, I was sucked into the glass of Coke. The siguiente thing that happened, someone pressed a cloth to my nose, and I fell into a heavy sleep.
When I woke up, I was covered in tubes. I was lying somewhere that looked like a hospital, but still in my rosado, rosa X-His. Good. I tried to get out, but it felt as if there were invisible restraints holding me. A monitor siguiente to my shoulder beeped and said, "Prisoner #2 has awoke."
Well, well, well. So I was a prisoner. Two heavily armed guards yanked...

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World of Shadows- Chapter Nine

posted by alicia386

Chapter Nine

IF WE WERE ALL PERFECT, LIFE WOULD BE BORING. -Emma

Forgetting the fact that my old friend is now going to be the enemy's snack, I tried to focus on the words that Erica was telling me. After a lot bickering, she has agreed to teach me how to reach my sister. "Just focus your eyes onto that blank wall. Remember do not become dizzy while staring at the wall. It happens to me all of them time." I ignored that last part and focused my eyes onto the muro ahead of me. "Now imagine Sophie." That is what I did. I imagined the way Sophie would look like and increíble it worked....

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Sneak Peak of My Book/Novel "Remembering You"--Chapter 2

posted by PonygirlCurtis7

Chapter 2
Three Months Earlier

There was not much bright where I was. Just dull, cheap lamp-light. Ya know? The cheap light that bulbs give off. Not until I stepped out into the golden hue of this evening’s sunset could I get a good picture with my eyes. I had been in a bar with my friends or, as it’s usually called, my gang. It wasn’t a real rough bar, the one I had been in. there were a couple fights every so often, but not much. Gavin, the owner, was good about that. He didn’t want the fuzz mostrando up all the time, so when he wanted a fight to stop, it stopped. He could persuade...

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friends Until the End- Ch.5

posted by alicia386

Reese Kingston

Chapter Five

Reese invited her inside and they got to work on Reese's couch. Her mom was currently cooking them oysters for cena which was Dakota's favorite. Reese really wanted Dakota to like her. It was so obvious. "Our project is on Recyclable Art. Do tu have old newspapers o something?" Dakota asked. She flipped open her binder and read the list. "We can use paper, soda cans, and everyday household items like paperclips and bottle caps. Things like that."
"My Uncle Kenny use to be a hoarder and he is always giving away his basura so he might have some useful things," replied...

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friends Until the End- Ch.4

posted by alicia386

Hazel Portwood

Chapter Four

Dakota glanced at herself in her long vanity. She had chosen to wear the white skinny pants, a rosado, rosa cabestro, halter top, and a espaguetis, espagueti strap camisa, camiseta underneath the cabestro, halter top. She had on her rosado, rosa high tops. Her hair was down and curly. She looked decent but she didn't want to be decent. She wanted to be extraordinary. The collar with the red lips at bottom would be the perfect accessory to make her outfit great. She turned back to the mirror to only find a pale figure standing behind her. Dakota whirled around to face the intruder.
'Hmm,' thought the ghost. 'I like it....

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

*Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 19
    A messed up version of a family reunion
    The woman smiled, “Zyanna.” She held out her hand. I stood up, brushed off my jeans,and took her hand.
    Now, it may not have been the smartest idea, but she was my mother. She came for me, and after having years of her out of my life, I wasn’t going to let an opportunity like this pass up.
     She had this lithe grace, like I knew she would, and maneuvered her way through the forest. When we left it, the...

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The Wings Trilogy: Wings of Death

posted by alicia386

Poor Vincent Matherly was pushed to his death. Poor, poor, Chasity the girl who pushed Vincent to his death. The tears of the parents and the sad looks of passing citzens. Chasity examined the scene once more. Was that the right thing to do? After she had done it, it truly didn't look like the right thing.

Chasity was summoned from the big guy in the sky. He had seen the terrible thing she had done. Chasity wasn't ready to face him not after that. he stared down at her while she looked down at her toes. The big guy in the sky wanted to send her to the big guy below the ground but decided against...

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re-playing dreams (chapter 1)

posted by rory2011

chapter(1)

chapter(1)

my life turn to a disaster after my parents divorced
my father is always busy with his new wife and his little stupid son
and my mother is busy with her work to make for us a life better than the life that she had ,but sometimes she angered me cause I can't talk to her and I'm 17 ,she doesn't treat me like I'm her oldest daughter ,she treat me nice to take care of my younger brother and my younger sister ,and to do her job while she doing her hard work

it's morning ,I was laying in the cama watching the sun raising to say "hello" to my green eyes ,I was a weak but I didn't...

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another song tu can choose the name cant think of oneXD

posted by hugebleachfan1

[verse 1]
you called me the other night and i didnt know wat to do so i answered the phone and dicho hel-lo
you dicho tu were sorry and that wanted to come back to me but i told no cuz

[chorus]
i cant take it no más tu break my corazón then tu say tu wanna come back i put up with this toro crap enough of times

im sick of tu and im sick of the way tu treat me and im sick of your amor and oh how i've been able to live my life the way i wanted to

[verse 2]
i moved on from tu i forgot about tu tu never come to my mind your out of sight and out of mind i dont think about tu anymore

[chorus]
i cant...

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The Deadly Escape Ch. 2

posted by alicia386

Chapter Two

"Look at this view!" screamed Sidney. "Can tu believe that this architecture dated all the way back to segundo world war. It still stands today!"
"Blah! Can tu see these malls! Now this what tu should be screaming about," dicho Simone. She snapped a picture with her old blackberry. It wasn't as cool as Brooke's iPhone but she wasn't complaining.
"Think about something other then malls," dicho Sidney.
"Is that even possible?" joked Lauren.
They were all riding in a used car that Mr. Rivers had bought. Simone's Aunt Tracey lived in Paris and...

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The Inevitable Fate 21

posted by rory2011

David crawled towards Kat
" what's going on ? " David asked Kat
she moved her eyes looking at him and dicho , " remember why mom died ? ,Mac want to kill Hayley for the same reason ........ in the same way "
Hayley was sitting right siguiente to Kat ,what she heard hurt her so much ,but she knows that she is a girl without a father loving her o caring about her
" I want to get out of here " dicho David
the door opened , that was Mac carrying a chair with his hands and there was a man of his guards standing near him
" spread them up " Mac told his guard ,the man pulled Hayley strongly ,Hayley tried...

Barack Obama ~ tu Da Man!

added by hgfan5602

Thinking of Someone Special (ME)

added by alicia386

escritura Begins with tu

added by alicia386