True Writers Article: Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

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hgfan5602 Okay, don't revise this. I mean, just two tiny errors. When Rachel fell 5 feet (NO FROM) Space between 2 and hours

alicia386 yep i likes this one.

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

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Chapter 17
There is a huge difference between wrong and right
    “Did tu really think,” Azerien paused. “That I wouldn’t notice? That everything would blow over? It’s why tu were crying wasn’t it? I’m not stupid, Zy, tu knew and didn’t tell.”
    “If father hadn’t killed anyone we wouldn’t be in this mess!”
    “Father did nothing wrong!”
    “Killing is wrong and so is...

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escritura for the Joy

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Source: google i guess

escritura for the Joy

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inspiration

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escritura Jokes

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escritura for the Joy

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Be True to tu

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Inspiration

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Just Because

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Through Her Eyes...

posted by malmcd

Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked fresa red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I amor tu dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I amor tu two.” As he turned into the siguiente road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s to late. They were heading straight at another...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.4

posted by Problematic129

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Chapter 4
    Be a disgrace, I’ll mess up your face
    “I’m loving this town, I mean one minuto in that hellhole and suddenly I’m popular. Can tu believe it? I’m not even kidding, and this really hot girl was giving me the look, tu know Zy, ‘the look’.”
    I nodded laughing as Azerien shoveled another handful of espaguetis, espagueti into his mouth, father wasn’t inicial when we came back and we found he hired a maid. A bit weird and totally awkward, but...