One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"
Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
I write what i feel and try to
make them seem so-real to
you, but all tu want from me
is honesty.
as i write out the facts
tu act like tu don't really
care where my corazón truly is.
Let me tell tu where it
is, it's in the honesty of my
poetry, deep inside my corazón
it's the only thing that reveals
the emotions deep down inside
my soul.
as i hold onto the emotions
that creates honest poesía
that i write, i see tu looking
at my private diaries understanding
who i want to be.
tu look at me and tu
seem to know what i'm
feeling as i'm revealing
to tu the emotions that
comes from within my
soul.
as i hold the key to this
honest poesía that i compose
tu seem to believe every-little
detail that i have to say to you.
make them seem so-real to
you, but all tu want from me
is honesty.
as i write out the facts
tu act like tu don't really
care where my corazón truly is.
Let me tell tu where it
is, it's in the honesty of my
poetry, deep inside my corazón
it's the only thing that reveals
the emotions deep down inside
my soul.
as i hold onto the emotions
that creates honest poesía
that i write, i see tu looking
at my private diaries understanding
who i want to be.
tu look at me and tu
seem to know what i'm
feeling as i'm revealing
to tu the emotions that
comes from within my
soul.
as i hold the key to this
honest poesía that i compose
tu seem to believe every-little
detail that i have to say to you.