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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. por no means am I forcing tu to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless tu truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before tu start posting. It can be as little as a bio, o as big as an entire articulo series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no más than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he o she is in, can pull out another trick out of his o her hat.
4. If tu absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his o her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely misceláneo and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when tu have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the siguiente día you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own o is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the reciente outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, o claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If tu must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, o so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if tu do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot o stabbed in the heart, then pop up minutos later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull o flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to o dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to o dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created por you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing o potential character is a Mary Sue, o if tu suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, tu can take link. If tu want, tu can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case tu were curious, which tu probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all tu want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, por no means do tu have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by XxKFforeverXx
25 ways to piss off Fang.

1). Poke him and continuously and ask if he’s goth

2) Poke him between the wings then run away screaming “I TOUCHED A GOTH KID!

3.) Dye his hair rosado, rosa while he’s asleep.

4.) Lock him in a room with bright rosado, rosa walls. (And a barf bag)

5.) Take a toy cuchillo and ask Fang if he’s lost his.

6.) Tell Fang that tu amor him.

7.) Hack into his blog and change his status
update too “I amor Hannah Montana.”

8.) Touch his hair (only Devin can)

9.) Give him McDonald’s chicken nuggets and tell him he’s eating his mom.

10.) When Fang appears kick his shins and say tu didn’t...
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OOC: This is a re-pub of my very first story, Expectations. So basically, this happens before Fin is dead (that’s why Fin is in this. duh.) and it takes place right when Aisling joins the Team. So yeah. God, it was so long hace that I wrote this! Well anyway, here it is..
I don't remember the día I found the Team. Those memories--all memories of my past--are gone, corrupted and removed; but más on that later. I only know now what they told me, but from what I've heard, I picture myself as a kitten. A lost, scrawny, water-sodden kitten, that somehow dragged itself--myself--onto the doorstep...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Iraq
5 years later
"Soldiers! tu are not in combat training anymore! Welcome to the real war, the real thing. We have some returning veterans to the battlefield." The commander turned and held out his hand to point at Derek. "Soldier Adams, thank tu for returning to battle. Your assistance is much needed" Derek nodded once and shifted his sniper rifle. Soldiers starting running and grabbing pistolas and ammo as the threat of a bomb filled the air from the radios. "ADAMS! Get to higher ground, use that sniper to take enemy targets down." Derek nodded and grabbed ammo and running out of the tent,...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
After the large round of laughter and ironic applause, not to mention Robin nearly fearing for his life, the team looked over to Delta for an explanation, although someone had an inclination on what it might be about.
Batman, who had since dried himself off and calmed down, picked up Kenzie, looking very innocent, making batman himself look innocent in a very scary way. Delta sighed and picked up the wilted rose, twirling its stem between her fingers.
“I’m not sure exactly how to explain this,” she began. “But I know this is Fin, I can feel it. I used to...” She gave a half-hearted...
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My name is Red Hood. And here's a little information on me:

Gender: female

Alter Ego: Aeronwen Todd

Nickname(s): Red, Aeron, Aero (prefers Aeronwen)

Age:17

Known Locations: Gotham City, Blüdhaven

Personality: smart-ass, sarcastic, sly, intelligent, hot-tempered

Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, 5'10, 127 lbs

Civvies: black elbow sleeve barco neck shirt, black loose jeans, belt

Powers: trained por Red capucha, campana to use firearms, knives and multiple other weapons, higher resistance to injury then the average human, perfect aim/never misses unless purposely

Weakness: más untrusting then Batman, proud,

Story:...
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posted by Skittles98
I landed near the Brother Hood’s building. I walked in, walking up the stairs. I threw open the doors. Blob was sitting on the couch, Toad on his head, Avalanche was sitting in an arm chair watching televisión and Quicksilver was playing pool.
“Domino, didn’t expect to see tu here again“Quicksilver stated
“Domino couldn’t make it, sorry. She sent me instead” I snarled, charging a card. I threw it on the billiards mesa, tabla and it exploded in Pietro’s face. I glared at him.
“You three-“ I gestured to Toad, Blob and Avalanche “-scram. I have some business with Quicksilver”...
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posted by Skittles98
“Wait, he’s your dad?” Wally finally managed
“Yes” I nodded
“And tu were hugging him because…?” Robin asked
“None of your beeswax!” I snarled
“Woah…touchy” he muttered
“I’ll mostrar tu touchy mister ‘I’m so cool and awesome because Batman’s my mentor’” I muttered under my breath.
“Why didn’t tu tell us?” Wolverine asked
“Because it didn’t concern you. My family concerns Me, Kurt, Laurna, Laura, Wanda and Gambit. No one else” I growled
“Why does it concern them?” Aqualad asked
“Because they’re the closest the to family I have, aside from Gambit”...
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posted by Skittles98
The smoke cleared to reveal the X-men standing there, untying Wanda, Laurna and Eclipse. Young Justice and batman were all encased in ice, courtesy of Iceman. Laurna angrily stood. The floor around my ex-team fell away.
“You’d better explain why tu attacked my inicial and tried to take my guest” she growled
“We want our friend back” Wally said
“So tu attack her?” Wanda exclaimed, her fists glowing red.
“Yeah, babe” Wally grinned, looking Wanda up and down. Kurt’s tail twitched.
“Megan, tu like making people happy right?” I asked
“Yeah” she nodded
“Then why do tu wish...
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posted by BladeYJ
((I dicho these were going to get shorter...I lied....<3 sorry<3333))

The punching bag swung back and flew adelante, hacia adelante only to be sent back again as I caught it with a hard kick. "Again," was the command that came from the form behind me. Normally, I'd just tell him to get off of it o leave me alone, but the fact that this man had one hundred years of experience, was a vampire, and could easily rip me apart, pushed me to hike my foot back and slam it as hard as I could into the bag of sand. I heard the chain creak in agony as its limits were tested. "Good, again," Damian muttered, pulling...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Elizibeth Tumin (Liz) (Lizbeth)

Alias: unknown.

Age: 14 (would be 18 now)

Appearance: long blonde hair and brown eyes, hair usually worn in braid o up (ponytail, bun)

Personality: she was stubborn and always thought she could do things on her own. she was Valiente on the outside but was scared but never let anyone see it. She was never the one to smile so easily and be at ease. And she was never someone who lost without a fight.

Powers/Abilities: she doesn't have any powers but combat and sword skills.

Weapons: a single sword.

Past: died in a break out gone wrong.

Others: she wasn't someone to let people into her life. But she cared if someone were sad o upset.
posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Amara Federmen

Alias: none

Age:14 (but would be 18 now)

status: deceased

Relations: a sibling like relationship/ friendship to BloodMist.

Appearance: deep blue eyes, straight black hair that goes just goes down to her elbows, 5,6 and thin.

Powers/Abilities: she was never really confident in her fighting skills but tried hard for her team to be useful in battles. She had the ability to heal others with magic, though she is unable to heal herself.

Civvies: unknown.

Past: Misty and Amara met when they were both 14, BloodMist had wandered into a city that was dicho to be abandoned with hidden riches...
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Twan stepd out of the door.
Dont worry cad its just a boring meeting, and even if they try somting il have Boris whit me.
Oke but just be careful, tu knowe howe triky thad bird is. Cadmus replied and whit thad twan left fore the meeting just a few yarts away he heard a explotion, turing around he saw cadmus laing in the sreed uncountios blown back por the force of the explotion, he ran over to her seeing the left side of her body being coverd in burn-marks.
He noticed a letter also being blown out it read:
"Hey Pup.
If tu read this thad means your little pet snake found are suprise fore her.
Hope...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
((this takes places after the incident with Honesty in: The Power of the hexágono series."))
He fell to the floor eyes tightly shut as his back stunk from the impact of the fall. Nate, the purple eye and purple haired boy, sat up clenching his teeth from vexation as the combat panel painted in deep red the fail writing. It was the third time he was staring at that writing, but what arguer him the most was the one that made him face the letters.

He looked up seeing the most, in his opinion, disgusting creature with his death-black hair and blooded-red eyes extending his hand to put him from the...
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posted by khanna266
a año after Ari and Jaime started dating

Dick had let Jaime into Ari's room to wake her up so he shook her a little. Ari tossed her self facing away from him,"Come on amour wake up it's are one año anniversary today"he dicho to her."Mmm happy anniversary baby",she muttered under her breath"*chuckles* your so cute when tu sleep",
he laughed,"Will tu carry me downstairs please?",she asked speaking louder. Jaime
smirked and did as she asked.Once they got downstairs he sat her on the couch,"*yawns* thanks babe",Ari thanked him now wide awake
"No problem amour,"he smirked and gave her a kiss on the...
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posted by Robin_Love
 When his hair was brown
When his hair was brown
Name: Aidan Wolffe
Alias: Frost
Powers: ice, snow, weather manipulation, intangibility, skilled with a staff
Occupation: “Guardian”; Hero
Weakness/Limits: He can only be intangible for a short time; he can only make it snowy o rainy with his weather manipulation (so he can make a blizzard); he has a to his ice-make magic.
History: Aidan has been mistaken as Jack Frost since his powers arrived. He was only 9 when it happened and, in fear of being shunned por his parents and friends, he ran away. However, it wasn't long before he realized that some problems were worse than his fears. He...
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 A Goatrider
A Goatrider
( Oke, the archives of morte will be a series of artículos in whist I will describe everything Thad has to do whit the lore of teyrions world thad I am creating truw this archives and further story's to come.)

Origin of the Riders:
The goatriders were a small group of bandits who fleeing fore the law ended up in the Kingdom of Morte were they advantly were couth por a patrol of King Tyrion Blackwell, the bandits feared fore tere lives expecting to be killed fore there crimes.
But Tyrion seeing Thad the bandits only estola to keep themselves and tere family's alive made them a offer, if they would...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Jeremy Thompson

Alias: Jet Stream

Age:18

Appearance: brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin and tall.

Personality: he takes a leadership role in situations and tries his best to do right for those around him. he is accepting to everyone, nice ,caring, protective of the ones he loves.

Relationship: cousin to Bentley, dating Tori

Powers/Skills:he has all the combat skills he grew up learning, he still has the hooks he uses in combat. creating a small burst of speed only really used for get aways o sneak attacks and can create smoke when he does his small burst of speed. He can also create a fire...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
"Suavemente, besame que quiero sentir tus labios besandome otra vez......" Suavemente one of the most famous spanish song sung por Elvis Crespo was now playing loud into their ears as feet and waist moved to the beat.

Everyone knew that Becca and Phoebe were two girls that had good sense of rhythm and could dance to any and every song that played on a stereo. But just for a fun Nic, Aryess and Megan had made the friends challenge each other to a dance off. Since both girls were good deciding the best would be tough so they challenge each other for their stamina.

Nic , Aryess and Megan watched...
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posted by Caitlyn_Grayson
 Caitlyn
Caitlyn
Name: Caitlyn Eleanor Grayson
Alias: BrightStar
Age: 14
Relationship to Team: Robin’s cousin
Appearance: Caitlyn is tall, about 5’6” o 5’7”. She has straight blonde hair, a little longer than shoulder length, that she sometimes wears in a ponytail, and blue eyes (like those of her cousins Dick, Kyra, and Danna). She wears a blue t-shirt o tank parte superior, arriba and short-shorts (at least on sunny days).
Personality: Caitlyn is fun, funny, and always cheerful and in a good mood. She is very high energy, extremely practical and a good problem solver. She is confident, friendly, and really determined...
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January 3, 2108

"Mom? Mom?" An explosion came from the sewers, dust and debris shooting up the manhole. Julie gasped. "Oh no..." Gas mask. I need a gas mask. She ran into a house and started looking around. "Shit shit shit, I need a gas mask!" Julie opened closets and drawers; but couldn't find anything. Then she cracked open a chest and found everything tu would need for a bomb, so of course there were gas masks. She quickly put one on, grabbed a flashlight, and ran back out, almost tripping a few times. The girl jumped into the hole and turned on the light. She walked as quickly as she could...
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