I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing tu makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because tu can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because tu make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because tu can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world tu keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me tu were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need tu is
because I'll always amor you!
This was in my head so i just thought to write it
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing tu makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because tu can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because tu make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because tu can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world tu keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me tu were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need tu is
because I'll always amor you!
This was in my head so i just thought to write it
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd amor some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.