The Secret hora - A Poem - escritura - fanpop

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posted by DietCokeGirl

This is written about the perfect silence only found in the dead of night, and the feelings it inspires.
The título comes from the descripción a friend of mine gave when we were stuck in the middle of nowhere at midnight and I found it sort of beautiful.
Enjoy (I hope) :)

Weighted air and winking stars,
darkness draped, tension wrought.
This night, this hour, is ours.
Silence chimes unspoken thoughts
that choke my mouth.
Silver moonbeams in glittering outline
surround you, and in our youth
this night, this hour, we intertwine.

I'd amor to hear what tu like o hate.
Thanks for reading.

DietCokeGirl

medouri, Nice-Guy and 9 others like this

Cinders Wow, that was beautifully simplistic. The good kind of simple. The to-the-point kind of simple. You know? Great word choice, you used a lot of descriptive verbs, fantastic! It has a wonderful sacred or holy tone, which I believe is what you were going for. Very interesting. I have no constructive criticism. Bravo.

whitelion great poem, nice job

DietCokeGirl Thank you! You're observation is completely spot-on Cinders, I was definitely trying to convey a feeling of an almost spiritual awe, without drawing on god or religion per se. Also, thank you! :)

karolytea just... beautiful... awesome!!! love it!

sweet_n_silly oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wow

vans01 The book the dead of night? I think Chris wrote that!!!! Oh by the way i love it

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away-Chapter 2

posted by ButteBaby_K

The manor I imagine. Without the moor however.

Chapter 2: “Ilia,” he whispered into my ear as we walked across the soft meadows surrounding the manor, “how magnificent your beauty is.” Arik’s words curling around me seducing me completely, he had been doing so since the moment he arrived. “Please sit,” he asked as he took my dainty hands into his large rough ones. Today I had worn green to emphasize the one feature about myself I cherished the most, though he begged to differ. I sunk into the grass, soft like moss still holding his hand ever so lightly. He kneeled beside me, chasing away the strands of hair that flickered...

back yard world part 2 finding sintareea

posted by fly210

The día Liz steped foot in her grandma's old house there was a strang feeling in the air. When Liz stoped unpacking she went out to the little town that she and her friends had made. The town was in a crest of bushes and trees. Liz got some of her toys and went out side to the town. She had started playing with her muñecas when she saw a rosado, rosa mariposa flying around her. Liz got up and tryed to get it but it went through a arbusto, bush on the right side siguiente to the house. Liz looked at the buch but she saw a brown thing. Liz crawled under the arbusto, bush and saw the brown thing covered with vines. Liz cleared...

Hidden in the darkness (lies the ugly truth) chapter two

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

hola guys, this is the segundo chapter, the first one didnt have a título remeber??? i hope u do lol.....

The darkness, it is something i have allways been afraid of, somthing that would always catch me in the end. But sometimes the darkness, is safer than the real world.

I was coming to, but i stayed still, and hoped it was all a dream, i prayed for some sort of dream, a nightmare. Anything. I breathed in the air, i whimpered. No pancakes. just grease, and dust. i opened my eyes, and quickly glanced around the cafe, i notticed some of the tables and chairs were upturned, and i could hear harsh...

I've Always Been Different Chapter Four "Forever"

posted by M169

A car crash, could my parents be that careless that I can’t even get a ride inicial from the hospital without getting in another life threatening situation? Could they care so little about my safety and well being that they’d almost kill me again? “I CAN’T DO THIS ANYMORE!” I hear I boys’ voice shout stridently. It was Matt, “I can’t just be your guardian angel! I have to be with tu forever now! Why can’t tu stay out of trouble Elizzy?” No one’s ever called me that before, not my parents, babysitters, friends, o even crazy old people…I like it! “Is that why tu abandoned...

I've Always Been Different Chapter Three, Sickness and Belonging

posted by M169

It has been about two years since I’ve seen Matt, but I kept him in my mind, knowing he was real. Since then I have become sick with a deadly disease known as Typhoid fever. It gave me chest pain, rashes, weakness, and congestion. My family found out when my mother was dyeing her hair blonder and listening to heavy metal clueless of what was to come.
“Hey, mommy, can I-“ I felt dizzy, the room span around, then I passed out onto the hard cold cocina floor, my parents rushed over to me, and found my pulse was slowing down. I woke up only to hear wailing sounds from someone crying. A opened...

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Please Review: An exerpt from a new story

posted by musicfanaticXD

So I had a really deep idea for a story, but I couldn't really start it. So instead I kind of started escritura it from a plot point halfway through. I would amor some feedback!!!

He looked at the dresser, fingering all the small things on top. The bottle of Marc Jacobs perfume, the skull and crossbone earrings, and the hairbrush that had “Maddy Starr” etched into the slender wooden handle. Everything about it was so perfect; he began to wonder what this girl was doing here, with him. He’d told himself he’d never find the perfect woman, and there she was; ready to fall right into his arms....

Prirose High: chapter 4: freindship means más than safety.

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

HII WE R STARTING FROM WHEN ROBYN IS RUUNING, NOW WE DONT KNOW WHERE BUT WE KNOW Y. GEMMA HAS BEEN TAKEN AND ITS ALL BECAUSE OF ROBYN...

I didnt stop ruuning, not even when i reached his door, i paused to see where he was, then i ran into his arms.
"Rbyn! What is it? was that tu screaming?" he asked woried, he took my face into his hands and stared into my eyes. I saw Zander and Jaden from the corner of my eye they looked worried.
"Im finr, Rick, its Gemma, she took her Amber took her, im here to say goodbye," i silently put a tender kiss on his cheek, turned around and headed for the door,...

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away

posted by ButteBaby_K

I just really like this picture, no special connection to the story. haha

Epilogue: It was a día like any other, the sun was shining making the mountains turn magenta like sandía and the breeze played with my hair flipping raven black strands into my eyes and obscuring my vision. I smiled, comforted por the averageness of the morning. I had never really known “average” I thought. My father was a Lord of Phim and my mother was his Lady. Every morning I woke up earlier than the peasants and snuck out to the field to watch the sun rise like “normal” people do. My cream-colored skin enjoyed the warm sunlight just as much as I did. Being a little lady meant...

Yeah, Me; The Nerd Chapter 4: Falling

posted by cute20k

I missed the air particles at Ethan's place. Here, running away from something that's not even chasing me, the air particles manage to croak; "Run, run, run."
And then it hit me. What I was really running away from was chasing me. I was running away from my emotions and I didn't realize that they were, in fact, backpacked onto me. They were heavily weighing down on my back. My back felt fragile, broken... like my heart.
I felt like crashing to the ground. The thick tears and emotions were superior, rising above me. The día before at school when I nearly melted my esophogaus, I felt numb,...

fecha Night*sequel to prom night* (Chapter One: the night of my life)

posted by moolah

fecha Night *sequel to Prom Night*
By: fatchick and moolah
Chapter One: the night of my life
Anne was sitting at the cocina mesa, tabla when Jordon came in with Lucy and the twins, Mia and Joey crawling behind. Anne said, “What’s up?” Jordon didn’t answer. He looked mad at Anne. Anne sighed. “Jordon-talk to me.” She begged. He rolled his eyes and went upstairs. Anne got her cell phone and called Hannah. “Hannah, its Anne. Call me back. Thanks.” She left a message. Then she called Haley, “Hey.” Haley said. “What’s wrong?” “Jordon stopped talking to me.” She said. “Oh,...

Twincest ....The amor That could never b(Chap 2 is it Wrong) part1

posted by Cries_Bloodlova

So Tom Closes The door...and heads back into The bathroom With bill.
"That was Gustav" Tom said.
"what did he want" bill asked
"he was Wonderin if we was Ready" Tom Replied.
"Well mabye we..." bill dicho but got inurupted por Tom Saying
"Shh." He dicho as he licked The parte superior, arriba of his Nips softly.
"mmmmm Tomi u Gustav." bill moaned.
"and Wats The point Wats n america 4 us?" Tom Asked
"i dont know but u should stop" bill said.
"mmm o billy u Know u Want it," Tom moaned. bill looked at the ducha, ducha de head as Tom Took off his pants. Tom Then looked billnin his Eyes.
"is This Wrong?" Bill asked
"im not sure. but i...

The Pookie Returns! How can this be?!

posted by kitsine

They say it was like small estrella falling from the sky. o meteorite. was it these? No. It was just POOKIE.
From the heavens he fell, crashing into the ground. God! what was that smell? It was pookie's one final toot.

pookie was rushed to the vet. will he survive? the docotors couldn't belive what they saw.. he had a few broken bones from the fall, and segundo degree burns on his butt.
The nurse looked at the doctor. "what does this mean?" she asked. and the doctor replied. "Beans"

Pookie had healed fast. he was realeased. and dado ointment for his ass.
Free at last! Go! pookie go! Pookie ran for...

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The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's Day: Chapter 3

posted by Triscia95

Chapter 3

Jeremy POV
Every thing was getting dizzy, I didn’t understand any thing that happened at the house, all I know is Uncle John is dead, there’s two Elena’s and I’m turning.
I could here the car running things were heightened. I could here all the gears moving to a rhythm. Elena was breathing hard I could feel her body heat radiating off of her.
“Elena, I need it now o its over.” My throat was dry I turned towards Elena and could see her veins flowing with blood. Every thing then went black.”

Elena’s POV
I pulled the car over and took a deep breath. The last time I did this...

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Yeah Me; The Nerd Chapter 2 Carlz The Valiente

posted by cute20k

As I weave through dark allies, trying to make my way home, everything feels wrong. It's día time and there is crickets chirping. The moon is shining along with bright stars while the brilliant sun sleeps. Annabella was not there. This time, it wasn't Annabella and I running away from one of our idiotic but awesome stunts. I was running for a different reason. I needed to get inicial so I could cry. I needed to sit there in my crying corner and let the tears flow. I did not make it inicial in time. I collapse onto the harsh cement and burst into tears, right there in an alley.
Hours pass. I lose...

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The Vampire Diaries - After Founder's día

posted by Triscia95

Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s día party. Just a few más steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...

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My true amor Chapter 17. JAKES POINT OF VEIW!!!!!!

posted by Twilightsauce

Hey..x
Sorry it's been so long (been on holiday and trying to like choose all my exam choices for año 10)lifes been pretty hetic but enough of my life!!! Last time I left off Nessie and jake were going to keep their baby and now we visit them 9 months later. No one actually knows what to expect but the exact being of Aimme (youll know who she is when tu read the chapter) will be discovered in the siguiente chapter. Also tu would have noticed that this chapter is from Jakes point of veiw I had a fab time escritura it and I hope tu enjoy lectura it eaqually as much! Thankz for lectura and please...

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Vampire Curse Chapter One

posted by amethyst44

Never did I think that the person I was to face would be the beginning of a war I never wanted to get involved in.

I sat confused and dazed, looking at the numbers that swam before my eyes. There was the dull humming the back of my mind that reminded me I done this essay with years and years of repitition, but there was no confidence in me that proved the evidence. I slumped back in my seat, tossing the pencil across the escritorio and closing my eyes, drifting into a light sleep.

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The forest brimmed with vibrant lights, glowing sharply beyond the bramble of branches and approaching the lake in the background. Drinks were passed around cheerfully, and the fuego roared with appreciative boldness. Dance music...

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Poem: Burning Fury

posted by VAMPirella1997

This is a peom I wrote for a competition at my school. Tell me what tu think of it, please?

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Have tu felt the torture of hate?
Like a poisonous cloud, it will wait,
Until tu burn in the flames of fury.
Then it will creep up and incapacitate.
Alas! tu will choke, and don’t try to deny your anger.
It is too late.

Hate is like grasping a red hot coal,
Intent on throwing it at another soul,
Instead it is you, yourself, who burns,
Then your own anger shall take its toll,
You’ll bring about your every mistake and failure.
You’ll be alone.

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Dark Hold: The Story Of Vampire Curse In A New Tale! Chapter Four

posted by amethyst44

But I guess this is the price for not agreeing with a vampire.

I woke up to the wailing of birds in the distance and the acrid smell of compost nearby. I couldn't see; it appeared that the night sky blended in with the darkness behind my eyelids when closed. I felt my body plastered against a marble slab that was the same length as my being, and sweat was misted against my skin. Strangely, the only way I could tell this was por leaning my head down to take a peek, realizing my skin was so white that it would be hard to tell if I had any blood at all in my body. My flesh felt numb, and shivering once brought my senses into a lighter view, but only enough...

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corazón Torn?....[Short Story]

posted by HarryPLover

"Do you see the "Game Over"sign?

Enough is enough,right?After tu feel like tu just got punched into the stomach fifty times should be enough to let tu know that tu should stop fighting...right?When tu can literally feel your corazón ready to burst out of your chest and your soul completely crumble into pieces, pieces that travel all the way down to your toes?

You'll know when your corazón is torn...right?

Well I know that mine is,completely actually.After tu just lost the one person tu thought tu would be with forever.After giving them so many chances,that tu ran out.Now that they're gone.....gone with your ex-best friend.After...